The Diva Confessed Her Love at the Concert and I Ran Away

From a dog food perspective, it's passable. I just started reading the book review and saw the comments about the emotional lines between the heroine's brother and the male and female sister. I thought it was not a big problem at first, and it was nothing after all. But after reading the whole book, there were so many emotional lines for the supporting characters, but this one made me feel very awkward, and I skipped chapters. I don't know what it is. My personal reason is that I have never encountered this kind of plot in the novels I have read before. This emotional line was not finished in the end and was given an open ending. However, I still suggest the author from my own opinion that it is best not to open this kind of emotional line because it looks awkward and weird. Maybe everyone has different opinions, I'm just expressing my own opinion

I feel that the protagonist is too smooth, but when I think about it, this kind of fire method is even more outrageous in reality. It just felt too fast. The jelly grass is a bit exaggerated, but the grain and grass are definitely up to par. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is not fully developed yet, which is reasonable but not completely reasonable. More expansion will be needed in the later stage, but Sister Bingyu's knife should be inescapable. There are no obvious poisonous points, and the plot setting is quite reasonable. Being picky is a bit harsh in the current novel environment. The writing is online most of the time, and the plot cannot be handled well a small part of the time. It is easy to overlook small poisonous points. To sum up, this is a book of food and grass. The fairy grass is limited by the subject matter. It is difficult to produce fairy grass for this subject. If you like this theme, you can give it a try. If you feel uncomfortable, you can go out and turn left. I personally feel good about it.

I don't know what's wrong with the male protagonist. I like it or not, but I don't like it. I have to drag it on like this, grinding and whining.

In the studio.

After reading the news about Wei Ya, the author specifically asked the tax authorities how to pay taxes when writing online novels. The tax authorities looked at the details of his royalties for the past year, specially applied for him a special hardship subsidy of 500 yuan for cultural practitioners, and told him to persist in living.

I understand. The heroine has always been Bingyu. She uses the name of her sister Bingbing. Her sister's dream is to be a big star. That's right 🤫

Time Concert changed other singers to sing the songs of Phoenix Legend. I feel they are all classics. I don't know how the author dared to write the songs of Phoenix Legend.

Not to mention anything else, the eldest sister is really with her brother-in-law. Just delete the book and cancel it.

If my sister and brother-in-law really got into each other, they would give up the book.

So this Feng Bingyu is the one who protected the male pig's feet when he was a child? Then the younger sister told her elder sister what happened, and asked the male pig's feet to protect her again?

The other parts are pretty good, but the plot where the male protagonist hangs Bingbing is really disgusting. The male protagonist hangs Bingbing there and says that he doesn't like Bingbing. Whenever someone tries to hook up with Bingbing, he is a scumbag from Neptune. Is he cheap?

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After reading two chapters, I felt isolated. He is so handsome at every turn. I am tired of reading Stars in the Universe. The main character is introduced like this in every novel.

This book has a lot of poisonous points. Sometimes the protagonist is too saintly, and what about the brother-in-law and eldest sister? It's funny, and many of the supporting characters are well written, but the emotional line is too flat, and there's no edge at all, but it's a lot of fun, and the rendering is pretty good, so that's it. (Family, I'm going to watch the day)

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Don't write about the eldest sister and brother-in-law getting along well. . . This is so disgusting 🤢🤢🤢

Choosing songs takes too much brainpower, so I'm just lazy. If you have any good songs, please post them in the post. If appropriate, I will use them in the book.

Sorry, there are too many articles about handsome protagonists, and I'm tired of reading them. I'd rather read about handsome protagonists with ordinary looks. You can write about temperament. After all, there are many such people in the real society. Their appearance is very ordinary, but their temperament can really attract you.

If you have any ideas, suggestions, or questions, please leave a comment here!

I feel that the author's plot design is quite thoughtful, the writing is also online, and it's quite smooth to read.

The first part of the book is okay, but as I write it, I let myself go and start making random notes 😅

Tell us what you think of this book! It doesn't feel as good as "The Queen". The plot is a castrated version of "The Queen", with very little interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. We are talking about the male protagonist and the female protagonist! In the first few chapters, the male protagonist Lin Mu always talks about making money and not falling in love. As a result, after a few chapters, I saw the heroine Feng Bingbing being flirted with, and I became jealous and turned into a very arrogant person. If a girl is tsundere, she can still be said to be cute, but if a boy is tsundere, he can only say that he can go wherever he feels cool. As for the heroine, she is just a licker, and forcing her brain to guess is the most deadly. Taking "The Queen" as an example, although Lin Yao gave it for free, she tried her best to consider Fang Xiaole's position and provide help to Fang Xiaole. Overall, there was a lot less interaction between Lin Mu and Feng Bingbing, and it seemed a bit less interesting. Not to mention the supporting roles.

I think what I dislike the most about this book is that it contains a bunch of supporting characters' romances. Come on, I don't want to pay attention to the emotional experiences of these supporting characters at all. So much so that I couldn't stand it anymore after almost 300 chapters.

Isn't this the rhythm of being brothers-in-law to each other?

As expected, it was sent very quickly. It's just like this without an outline, but it's also the reader's problem. How can one character (protagonist) be written for a long time? When writing supporting roles, your grades will naturally drop, hey.

Is this author going to leave it alone after publishing it? He didn't react even if he was pinched...

Alas, it feels a little uncomfortable to be hanging all the time. Don't hang around, I feel like there is nothing interesting to see after getting married.

(Chapter 0-46) Let me share my thoughts in the comment area first. Hong Kong Zhen's writing is very good, the characters are quite memorable, and there are many details and highlights (just don't take a glance or ten lines). It is not often that I can't stop reading dozens of chapters in this old city... Then the author should not pay attention to the negative comments, just follow his own pace. In addition, the pictures of the easter eggs and character cards can be considered again (the gif cannot be moved, so it can only be seen loudly. In short, I think the smart and lively type is more appropriate)

So confused. I want my brother-in-law to become a brother-in-law, and I want someone to take care of my eldest sister.

Why can't I add QQ fan base? Isn't the male protagonist's name in the book Lin Mu? Didn't pass after four attempts?