This Celebrity Came from the End Times

The subject matter is well chosen, and the writing is okay, but there are too many foreshadowings. It always emphasizes the past and present lives, weakening the main plot. You can miss the past, but it must be combined with the process of this life. The description should be simple and to the point. Like the author, who repeats the past in endless chapters, as if he is always obsessed with the past and cannot get out of it. It is easy to lose focus, and it is easy to write later.

You can use the apocalypse back as a background character to add the protagonist's skills, but you can't expect to eat both the apocalypse and entertainment. Because if you want to take the apocalyptic route, then stop playing entertainment as soon as possible. Lu Xun said that studying medicine can't save China. Why can you be a star and save the world? No matter how influential celebrities are, as long as they talk about politics, economy and technology, everyone will just treat it as a joke. If you want to take the entertainment route, don't always come up with apocalyptic things and foreshadowing. If you do it well, it's called foreshadowing. If you don't do it well, you'll bury yourself in a hole. What attracted you to this article is the freshness caused by your creativity and impact on entertainment. If you insist on guiding it in a different direction, the result may be a bit confusing.

After reading the previous chapters, the pig's feet and the mastermind died together in the apocalypse. Traveling back 40 years ago, I originally wanted to prevent the birth of artificial intelligence, but found that the artificial intelligence self-destructed. So are there any of the following possibilities? 1. Will the artificial intelligence subject in the present world be a living thing or an entangled ion computer, which uses the human brain to perform cloud computing when deducing its own future? The result of the derivation is self-destruction. Programmed thinking leads to self-destruction in reality. The pig's foot is a key factor and is resurrected from the sudden death of its predecessor in a form similar to a second personality by chance? 2. In the future, the artificial intelligence backhand traveled to the past and brought pig's feet here. Because the extra pig's feet came back with too much data or too much energy, and the new artificial intelligence computer couldn't bear it, so it blew itself up? Or maybe artificial intelligence fakes death?

After reading the first few chapters, the theme of rebirth is okay. The protagonist's post-war stress reaction is a bit cool. It's also great that the doomsday villain disappears not long after rebirth. However, there are many instructions that are inconsistent with the doomsday, and the time circle and other things are poisonous. Readers are basically not watching for the apocalypse, but for the rebirth of modern idols after the apocalypse. When it seems specious at the beginning, the author should set the tone: the apocalypse can never happen again! It doesn't matter if it's a news commentary, a guess about the protagonist, or a deus ex machina. Otherwise, those who come to see the end of the world will focus on celebrity entertainment and wonder how to prevent the end of the world. Watching the reborn star is on tenterhooks for fear of suddenly returning to the apocalypse. You seem to be cooking with sugar and chili. Whether you like sweet or spicy, it tastes boring Of course, one last explanation, this is just my conclusion after reading the first 58 chapters. It is my personal humble opinion. If you have a clear outline, author, you can ignore it or use it as a reference.

Write a variety show director like a queen, control everything, let that star be on the show if you want, a top-notch person, and the entertainment company he works for is stupid? Let you spend whatever you want? Director Yu Hong is like a queen, so illogical

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is a bit unrealistic, and the characters are too generic. Although I don't like pretty boys either, but it doesn't mean that pretty boys are stupid and contrived. Silly and contrived boys cannot be popular at all. Female fans will not like them just because of their mother. There is no way that the 30 Days Hunt variety show at the beginning will exist. The program team spent a lot of money to watch your amateur performance? How much money did you burn? 3 Days is almost enough

See the latest chapter So the protagonist is actually in a closed loop time, everything is doomed, because the pursuit of the heroine Xu Jun offended Yang Bo so hard, so in the end of the world Yang Bo immediately became a brain and killed the heroine Xu Jun. In fact, the brain was the product of being played out by Ark Company, and Yang Bo, who hated the world, became a brain. The whole book is about the inseparable fate between the protagonist and the Xu family. No more chasing, just take care of yourself first. If you still feel like this later, then it's time to pull it off. I don't deny that you are creative, but I don't really like the writing method of time closed loop. I really liked the writing method of time closed loop in the book Humanity Supreme, but I really can't stand it after reading it, because everything is doomed, and the foreshadowing in the front is the scene that will appear later.

I spent one night looking at it Guess Maybe the development of history has not changed Xu Jun was blown up and traveled to the end of the world, became Xu Xin, and met Fang Cun in the end of the world Because he felt that the other person She has the same name and similar personality as the Fang Cun she knows, so she chose him (she may even know that Fang Cun will travel to the past in the future) After Fang Cun and the mastermind died together, they traveled to the peaceful era and got to know Heping Nian. Xu Jun of the modern era, and composed many songs that were originally supposed to be composed by Xu Fang (but the author is actually himself, which just fits the time circle and allows history to develop on a normal track) After Fang Cun and the mastermind died together, the original songs in the apocalypse Xu Xin also traveled back to the peaceful era (because Xu Jun's personality changed after he fell ill and was hospitalized) But this is his second time traveling, so history has been changed in this timeline The above is just a guess.

I'm really speechless. Are past lives interesting?

In recent years, criticism of small fresh meat has been regarded as political correctness In fact, I am quite annoyed by this argument. Each generation has its own spiritual needs and you cannot just say that they are wrong if you don't like it Existence is reasonable, all walks of life are upgrading, and the popularity of small fresh meat with traffic shows that the new generation likes This value orientation is determined by social development, why do you have to obliterate it? What's more, have you erased it? People in the world do not have a correct attitude towards social development. They will only rely on old people to teach others to do things according to their own preferences. This is a mistake in itself Still complacent It's really annoying. I personally don't like to watch those young people's plays or songs that I don't understand when I am thirty years old, but I definitely accept their existence!