A Dragon Palace Disciple's Self-Cultivation

The author offers a small suggestion: since you've mentioned the Four Dragon Kings, you should check their attributes and positions. The Dragon King of the East Sea resides in the east and is the Azure Dragon. He can control rain, thunder, floods, tides, and so on. He is the absolute god of rain.

It misses the point, what's the point of writing about a widow? It's bad luck.

This system is utter garbage. It's ridiculous that it would dismantle a supreme treasure and combine it into a low-level magic weapon. It's insane!

The beginning is really toxic 😅. The protagonist is absent for seven of the first twenty chapters, which I skipped entirely. Comments say it's all about a rescued young widow. A few chapters later, his actions to help the Azure Dragon were also baffling.

Your protagonist, a white dragon, is obsessed with upgrading his skills with a cheat system, yet he completely disregards the silver coins needed to do so. I really want to smash his head with a shovel. Has his brain been filled with silt from being submerged in water for too long? What kind of logic is that? The description of the cheat system is a complete failure.

Someone has written 1.28 Million words and they haven't even kissed much, I won't say who it is 😴. Why are there so many monk-themed novels on Qidian? In real life, I'm unable to resist beautiful women, but in books, it's all about women being poisonous and I'd rather be gay? (And I almost forgot about the female lead, Qingyu, who's practically disappeared.)

Author, if you want to write an ensemble piece, delving deeply into supporting characters, remember to use a main storyline to unify all their stories. While allowing them to express their individual personalities within their respective plots, they must not escape the protagonist's will and influence. Otherwise, if you don't mention the protagonist for three chapters, it will feel very strange. Also, I honestly can't make any sense of your synopsis.

How could someone have the nerve to put the words "genius" on it? Did this time traveler even graduate from elementary school?

After reading over fifty chapters, I just feel that the protagonist is completely unlikable.

The protagonist's cheat abilities and strength are vaguely defined, and his actions are haphazard and disjointed. It feels like the book lacks a main plot, with the author writing whatever comes to mind. If it weren't for the Journey to the West theme, it would have ended in two hundred chapters. It's alright, though rather boring, but it frequently veers off on completely unrelated topics.