The Journey to the Star Sea Begins with Black Technology

Writers should pay attention to their paragraphing and punctuation. This shouldn't be taught by the Chinese teacher, right?

Full stop. Author Period Have you eaten?

Is it that difficult to learn how to use punctuation marks?

She's lying down, her breasts are cute, why are science fiction novels written like fantasy?

I feel like there are no big problems except for punctuation and introduction 😅

Read it later when you are short of books, save it first

The background is not introduced at the beginning, so it's baffling to watch.

It's too rough. I don't know what you are writing about?

Recommended new book "Civilization Template" It is not time travel, not rebirth, and not systematic, but it combines all the advantages of the above types. In general, it can be regarded as a science and technology article + a science fiction article + a suspense article. Other innovations are also used in the text, such as apocalyptic memory. Only the unknown is wonderful. The story takes place on the banks of the Songhua River in 1986. With the help of AI, the protagonist Chen Quan moves towards glory. Please collect, recommend, and test poison.

How is it? There is no introduction 😰