Cultivation: I Can Eliminate Negative Attributes

I feel helpless after listening to a few chapters. A person's character has been robbed for three years and yet it is written in such a way that it doesn't matter. As the saying goes, people who block people's way of making money end up killing their parents. The main character has no character at all. After staying in the outer sect for 3 years, he was promoted a few levels. If he knew that he had upgraded too quickly, he would not be afraid of being caught by the higher-ups and asking him if he had any treasures. A high-level person with some brains would do it. A son of an outer sect with no emotions would definitely do it in order to live forever. This is the case with modern novels. You don't want to leave the sect immediately to become a casual cultivator, or to go to another sect and it's not in the technological age and your ID card will be checked.

Your ability is obviously to build power. Forcibly roaming to advance the plot is very poisonous. Many settings force you to stick and cheat, and it will not come back. It is also very poisonous to develop deputy jobs from the beginning, plant planting, alchemy, create your own skills without fear of injury, and then recruit disciples to develop your power. This is a normal operation.

It feels like the author is writing an essay like a primary school student. 🤤

The last paragraph of the introduction makes the novel less interesting to read. After everyone knows the ending, there is no desire to watch, and the desire to watch is greatly reduced. However, you can add a paragraph at the end, such as after reaching the top, the real crisis really begins. It gives people a sense of expectation.

Do you know what the shortcomings of magic cultivation are (side effects) and what your golden finger is (purification side effects), that is, if you don't do it, the Holy Mother will die? Even if you die, you won't change the map (forcibly suppressing the level, unless you want to suppress the low combat power (the combat power of cultivating immortals is tested by magic weapons, and the performance of magic weapons depends on the level)), All Heavens and All Realms (the lower limit of your golden finger), you (forcibly display the upper limit of All Heavens and All Worlds), more than 95% of them are unfinished, alas (you are not very suitable for writing online articles (adult times have changed))

I don't think being a genius is a bad thing. Why do I have to hide it? In this world where information is not disclosed, it is difficult to collect a complete path. On the contrary, it is the kind of sudden burst that makes people misunderstand the opportunity. Routine writing

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The plot is too cliche, and you can already tell the follow-up development after reading the beginning. The protagonist is so useless that you can't feel that the protagonist is trying hard at all. Speaking of the author, brother, after only a few chapters, the combat power system has begun to collapse a bit. The protagonist has a perfect foundation of twelve lines, and only has one high-purity true essence, which is too ordinary.

The protagonist's IQ represents the author's IQ

Can daily detoxification be eliminated🤭🤭🤭

Give the author two comments! First of all, wearing this is not a big poison. In three years, you can understand the language and can cultivate immortality. Then let's talk about the system. To be honest, there is no need to make the system too smart. It is more interesting to explore slowly. Some people hate this smart system. Then there is the plot, which is too blunt. I just watched one, so that's it.

Does death count as a negative state?

It would be too awesome to just clear the negative status of everything at once, but also to turn low-quality elixirs into top-quality ones? If you simply eliminate yourself, you will already be invincible. Anyway, injuries, deaths, and everything bad are negative statuses, and being weak is also a negative status.

A low-quality elixir for detoxification will become a top-quality elixir. How come a top-quality elixir the size of a sesame seed? Haha, no matter how you calculate it, it's wrong. Low-quality or medium-quality elixirs are all fine.

I don't know if it's becoming more and more verbose, or if I'm deliberately trying to limit the number of words.

The creativity is okay, the writing is not that good, and there is a lot of nonsense. It's a lot of words

Great idea, but the writing is too weak. . . .

After reading a few chapters, my imagination came out. The elixirs and detoxifying exercises are also poisonous. The magic tools can detoxify humans, but animals can also detoxify. Everything can be eliminated, and poisons are also good things. Cleaning them up can repair poisons.

So why not exchange all the top-quality elixirs into low-quality elixirs, and then convert them into top-quality elixirs. This cycle repeats, isn't it just a lot? The same goes for others

The idea is good. I think this is my first time writing a book. I recommend reading more books by older authors to see how others write. As for the shortcomings of this book, it is too wordy, has too many unnecessary words, is not smooth enough, and has no rhythm. I won't go into details.

My suggestion is that you should never let others use system abilities to eliminate negative situations 👍

The creativity is interesting, but wearing is boring, because it has no foundation, so soul wear is the mainstream starting point. Most readers will turn it off when they see wearing it! Because of the language system, cause and effect, how do you communicate through language? How to read? There are calculations for cultivating immortals. If you are wearing a strange smell and are not in the second-dimensional world, it means that you are not counted, which means there is something wrong with you.

The dignified immortal master was discovered just after he entered the city.

Interesting idea.

There is too much nonsense about the small characters.

The golden finger is too wide open, the protagonist looks like a fool

I'm confused, is this a break? It's painful.

Suggestion, don't sleep, stay up late coding, update 10,000 times a day

The idea is good, but if the gold finger is opened a little wider, it should be pressed down. It is recommended that the protagonist's mentality should grow slowly. Wang Lin: It is almost a hatred for the protagonist, and the protagonist will be withdrawn from the cash machine. If you are a cultivator in this world, if you don't have the strength, you will definitely die. Then this can be said to be a life and death enemy, right? But the author said this: From now on, we will be people from two different worlds, so we won't care about him anymore. Make me confused? Looking at the front, I thought that the protagonist had strength and this little Bi San died immediately. However, the protagonist is a saint. As expected, he really deserves this mentality and is invincible in the world. Really awesome. Chapter 4 successfully made me say goodbye, come on. . . The rant is over, bye bye

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