The Soul of Naruto Crosses Hinata Neji

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Damn, I recommend reading it. From the title of the book, I thought it was Hokage: The Day Wearing Neji 😅😅😅

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The 7-year-old Eight-door Dunjia has opened 5 doors. Are you sure the protagonist will not die suddenly?

Great Return

The heroine Terumi Mei? Is this going to open a harem? Support Tenten Masamune, Terumi Mei, Tsunade's concubine

Everything is too idealistic, reality is not a single-player game!

It feels a bit weird later, even if there is a plan to directly control the entire village as soon as you become Hokage? Even the defense of the Third Generation Lei can be suppressed to death by numbers. Except for annihilating them all by firing map cannons or running away at any time with high mobility, any other shadow can be overwhelmed by numbers. This is not a realm of fantasy novels.

At first, I wanted to see Neji escape from his fate, but I didn't expect that the cheating was too obvious. His efforts were not very reasonable, and his mentality was not very reasonable (I didn't feel it at all when I killed someone for the first time. Have you experienced it in your previous life?) But I hope the author can work harder. Writing Naruto fan fiction is great in itself. Keep it up.

The most immortal Neji

The writing is good, I really like Hinata's opening, but I personally don't accept the plot direction. I still hope that Naruto will stand in Konoha. Come on, author!

😍 Terumi Mei

I've read about ten chapters. The content is pretty good without dragging on, but I don't get anything of my own. Everything is a copy of someone else's.

The protagonist's advantage is not that great. After all, others are now more powerful than the original and are much more instigated by real little butterflies... As a result, they are not as suppressive and enjoyable as the protagonist. Immortal magic per capita is a joke😐

After reading a bit, Chapter 70 or 80, what is the protagonist going to do? What's the ultimate goal? It seems to be written that the protagonist plays alone and rarely communicates with other characters. The characters are not very vivid, very calm and have their own feelings, 😥

I'm here to test the water. If I go and never come back, I'll never come back.

I think there should be a lot of room for development in Rouquan, such as destroying internal organs and controlling the air.

You can consider adding some elements of the North Star Fist and some Bracing Holes (ಡωಡ)

Hokage's most useless skill is Kaitian and Soft Fist. Return to heaven, return to heaven is achieved by releasing chakra from acupuncture points all over the body and rotating it. The chakra metal knife can cut off chakra. It's basically useless to use a chakra knife when you meet a master of swordsmanship. Rouquan, if you can hit it, why not stab it with a knife? The side effects of the 4th Gate of Eight Gate Dunjia will be severe. Who among normal people can practice the Eight Gates? The seven-day breathing method is not fragrant.

There is no sense of immersion at all, just like playing a stand-alone game

I read a little bit of the beginning 1. I don't know what to think about making money in a casino. Being able to open a casino in Konoha is certainly not an easy job. If you treat it as a cash machine, others are not stupid. The funnier way to make money is to use the Byakugan. Even though it's been opened in Konoha, can't you still find the Byakugan function? The funniest thing is to use genjutsu to modify memory. If your genjutsu is strengthened, it will be Shisui Beitenjin.

Hyuga Neji

How to put it, in terms of personal ninjutsu development design, soft fist + hard fist, Konoha secret technique, Rasengan, medical ninjutsu, senjutsu, and Hyuga bloodline master core technology to complete the plan. They are all very good designs, I have tried them myself. However there are several problems. Do all online articles have to be written in this way? Or is this all good? 1. The above are just means, what is the purpose? It's just about surviving without being bullied, that's the core of Liu Shui Shuang Wen's formula. But the core of Naruto is not here. No matter how much Naruto and Sasuke's combat power collapses, their power is not just for themselves, right? The bond of family, love and cherishment of home, relatives and friends are the source of progress and struggle. The protagonist has been practicing hard all the way and formulating a big plan, which can be explained in one sentence to become stronger. 2. When writing a fanfic, you only apply the setting and world of the original work. Even if you don't want to write about the main idea of ​​the original work, do you simply completely abandon the core of the original work? Is this okay?

I followed Shuilong's writing, but in the end I wrote the protagonist's feeling of being eaten by the infinite moon. Alas, it's far from the best.

How should I put it? The Nine-Tails Rebellion happened when Neji was about one year old, and his father died when he was four. His mother was not mentioned in the original novel, but in the Konoha Collapse Plan no one came to see Neji's chuunin competition. I guess he died young.