The Occult Warlock of Hogwarts

The following opinions are for reference only. I sincerely hope this book review can help you. How to say it? The writing is relatively smooth, unlike those boring chronicle-style books, which can clarify the basic logic, but the content is a bit dry. Then, I don't know if the author himself wants to portray a protagonist with unwavering beliefs (to shape the protagonist's personality and so on). To put it bluntly, I feel that there is a lack of some detailed descriptions. I would give an evaluation that there is a lack of lubricant between the gears. The current perception is that of self. The center, and then there is the setting of the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist is a dimensionality reduction blow in this world. Take the game as an example. If other fans are mods that add fun, this book is the cracked version of the mod. I would like to give you a personal suggestion. After all, I came from time travel and was reborn. This should be bigger. It can involve time, space, soul, and laws. This situation can weaken the protagonist. It is really reasonable - I am not arrogant. The protagonist is standing in such a high position at the beginning. How do you expand the subsequent power growth? I am very afraid that a new wave will appear. This is a situation like the curse destroying the earth (maybe I'm thinking too much? But I'm really panicking, and it's unfolding in my head inexplicably?) Although, the common method in this kind of situation is to step on the character or the power system, so that the development is not so abrupt, but emmm, forget it. Anyway, after reading so many novels for so many years, I still hope that there will be more and more good books that can satisfy the novel gluttons like us. At the same time, after reading for a long time, I have come across all kinds of strange books, and I am really afraid of books that will get stuck in my throat. Finally, I hope that I will not encounter the reply of "you do it, you do it"... For example, I just want to eat and not cook, and the diners tell the chef how they feel about the food they eat. Isn't this normal? Is this a good thing (aside from ulterior motives), it's really true. Don't give me replies like "you can do it, you can do it", please.

The author gave me the feeling of dancing in chains. The fusion of the two works has become a shackle, making it neither good nor bad to read.

This book gave me a very strange feeling. It doesn't feel like the main character is indifferent, it feels more like a robot.

When he was being sorted, he was on guard against the Sorting Hat and looked through his past memories. Why did he carelessly reveal his different magic systems later on during the night patrol with Hagrid, making crossbows for Hagrid, and setting up his workbench for experiments? What about caution as a traveler to another world?

Let such a woman go to Knockturn Alley to buy and sell magic items with dark wizards... I think she wants her to die. The writing is pretty good, but it doesn't feel too immersive. After all, he is a native of another world. It would be better to set it as a person who has traveled through the world again.

Open the door! Instructor Jingyuan investigates the black ring! Open the door quickly! If you don't open the door, you'll be punished by the Archbishop!

The writing is very good and exciting. Let me tell you first that I don't know where to get the money, so don't ask me. Some people say that the setting is unreasonable and toxic, but after all, it is a novel, and it is normal to have unreasonable parts. Sometimes reality is even more absurd, so even if it is not extremely toxic, it can be forgiven. Let's talk about the advantages. The story is exciting, the characters are not broken, and the protagonist's outlook cannot be said to be very positive, but he can be regarded as a chaotic and kind-hearted person. So, comrades, it's okay. What kind of bicycle do you want? It should be above standard food and grass. The above is my personal opinion, please don't argue with me. If you have any objections, what you say is correct

This author hates the Harry Potter world very much, no, he should despise it. After reading ten chapters, it's all rubbish, and I'm totally looking down on it. As a Harry Potter fan, I personally don't like this perspective. (But if it's Zhutianliu or something else, it's written like this, so I don't think it matters)

I can't stand it anymore when I see Chapter 9. It's very poisonous. Everything is written. The setting is very unreasonable. 1. Let's talk about the exchange of British pounds for gold Gallon. It should be just a policy issued by management agencies such as the Ministry of Magic to facilitate young wizards in the Muggle world to buy things for study. Moreover, British pounds are of no use to wizards. The greed of the Gringotts goblins will not allow you to exchange it on a large scale. In other words, a young Muggle wizard can exchange at most before the start of school every year. Enough gold galleons to buy school supplies, and at most some pocket money. Although the exchange amount set by each fan is different, it is not outrageous like you. How could I buy so many materials like you wrote? 2. You wrote about thunderbird feathers, where did you buy them? That's impossible. Thunderbirds live in America and are level 4x magical animals. Ordinary stores can't get them, let alone buy them. They can only be bought in Knockturn Alley. Has the author ever thought about it? 3. The protagonist also asks the "adoptive mother" you control to sell things in Knockturn Alley? Want him to die early? Even if the protagonist is from another world and doesn't know the situation, he should know that no matter which world the villains put their strength first, if they don't have the strength, they will be robbed, or even their lives will be lost. This makes me think that the protagonist is not an adult at all, but more like a child with an anxious IQ.

I read it before it was put on the shelves. I regretted it very much after it was put on the shelves. The author wrote that he was happy.

What can I say about this book? You can't say it's poisonous, but I just can't stand it.

As the old man said before, I can't say it's poisonous, but I can't say it's not poisonous either. The writing is very dry and hard to watch.

Later, when you start writing, you start to let yourself go, right? And as we all know, when the author is very satisfied with what he has written, he often starts to get excited...

In fact, the Hermione in this book experienced the turbulence of time. When she returned from her studies, my impression of the Hermione in this book became like the Hermione card in Magic Awakening, powerful and intellectual, rather than the domineering look in the original book.

The pace is too slow and the plot is a bit too dry. It's not vicious but it's hard to make people want to watch it. Secondly, why are the protagonist's emotions always so extreme? As a "visitor from another world", I can't seem to be stable at all. On the contrary, I behave like a child in many places.

The Hermione in the movie obviously doesn't make people uncomfortable, so why is the Hermione in the fan fiction so disgusting and repulsive most of the time? She wants to abandon the story every time Hermione appears. It has almost become a common black spot among this series of fans.

I mentioned earlier that I need to study the art of transfiguration. Can you read what is written at the end? Throughout the whole article, I just felt awkward and uncomfortable. What a waste of time.

I don't like the protagonist. His mental age is at most 20 years old, but in terms of setting, he is a veteran who is at least 30 years old and has been on the battlefield and seen blood.

Divinity Original Sin is just a game. The skill system in it is very simple and cannot be used as a background

The first dozen or so chapters made people feel good, but when I saw him running thousands of miles to save his mother, I felt something was wrong. The scene in the flying lesson later made me feel less good.

I have read more than 10 chapters, but it always feels weird and awkward.

The reason why wands are more popular in the wizarding world than staves is because it is convenient to cast spells and easy to hide. If you have such a big wand, how can you hide it in the Muggle world? Even if it can be put in the small bag of the Space Expansion Spell, in case of a sudden attack by the enemy, do you still have to take it out of the small bag? Snape's wand is placed directly in the cuff, you know, so it is not very convenient to think of a wand!

Although I don't know what the secret world is, a world invaded by demons should not be weak. It is a bit interesting for a person who has awakened power in a higher world to come to a declining magical world.

The pig's foot was crushed by the demon deus ex machina. This... Outrageous development

It's so strange. Although I understand that the protagonist is still child-like in terms of emotions and longs for emotions, I still can't understand Hermione's emotions. The protagonist lacks love, but he is giving love. In conclusion, in order to portray the protagonist and highlight the complexity of human nature, the author created light and shadow without paying attention to logic. He only cared about the upper and lower logic of the text and did not care about the logic of human nature. This resulted in a novel that was very reasonable and well-written when it was divorced from reality. However, based on life experiences, readers found it full of loopholes and extremely uncomfortable. He forcibly combined the protagonist and Hermione, which completely sacrificed the protagonist. The protagonist is either a bachelor, or the partner must be older than the protagonist to fit the character portrayed by the author.

I've watched half of it, and I wonder if there will be some God-King coming later, haha

It is considered an above-average work among HP fics. It does not follow the plot, it has its own thing, and the most important thing is that it can be completed.