The Rules of Open Competition and Secret Love

I really don't understand. It's no sweeter than those industrial saccharins, and it's no better than those little white texts. It's a pity that no one is reading such a beautiful book.

I wonder if the author doesn't know that there are hundreds of surnames? Why are there less than ten characters in total, and more than half of them have the last name Li?

I don't understand, it's not popular even if it's written like this? It has to be rhythmic and emotional, but the characters of the two people may not be suitable for each other. If they are in the real world, they may not be able to be together. Even if they get married together, it will be easy to break up. I don't understand, maybe it's because of the author's outline story line. Apart from this, the book has no problems and no poisonous points. Come on, author!

I can't stand Chapter 11 anymore. It's not because the author is bad at writing, but because the male protagonist's character is too weird. I can accept Li Daye as the male protagonist.

What I wrote is really okay, but why no one read it? I'm all set.

I am too lazy to write a book review, but it is indeed one of the best books in Qidian. It is well written. I will give it to you with 6 monthly passes.

It's a breath of fresh air from the starting point. It's really well written and fascinating. I hope that if I keep up the good work, it will definitely become popular.

😅 Everything is good, but the mentality and character of the protagonist are really rubbish. No matter how good the book is in the early stage, it is useless to make people unable to stand it. Come on, author, I can't stand it anymore after more than ten chapters. Goodbye Jianghu

Although it is a rare subject, it is really impressive

Author, you can ask some great masters on Zhihu about the books you have written. Their guidance is very good. Just a few clicks on your book will give you inspiration and enlightenment. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง You can do it. If you follow me now and you become famous, I will be an old fan!

It's really well written, I hope the author can stick with it. In fact, I wanted to give up the book halfway through reading it (but I like He Yebai so much😍😍😍), because in real life, He Yebai and Tang Tuo can't get along at all, and the contradictions and differences in concepts between the two people were not resolved at the end of the book.

Not much to say

I can't watch it any longer. The protagonist is obsessed with saving face, doesn't understand anything, and gets angry at every turn. The main thing is that he is the male protagonist. I feel like I'm watching a fool who doesn't use his brain and follows his emotions.

The setting of the background is innovative, but the characters are not established. The two protagonists are already in the hard mode in the novel genre, let alone love. It is simply a hell mode start. In the romance novels I have read before that have two protagonists, they are all written from the perspective of the first person until the ending. In this way, the second person's perspective is no longer interesting to read.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   So in a novel that focuses on love, it cannot allow readers to experience love... In terms of characterization, the treacherous master in the novel I have read is the most three-dimensional. The author can go and read it. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion and I don't like to criticize it.

Everything else is fine, but the male protagonist has a really unpleasant personality, which makes people very angry. He gets angry at least three times a day. Anyone who sees such a person in real life should stay away early, and there will be no follow-up story. The female protagonist was the motivation to keep watching, but later on I felt like the male protagonist would be more angry if I watched the heroine more 🙂, so I still kept Bai Yueguang in my heart.

Update soon. Don't you need a monthly ticket?

Can anyone tell me which chapter the male and female protagonists officially get together? I'm looking forward to reading it😂

I haven't watched it yet👀. Is this a male video? ? ? I saw it in the new male channel book!

How should I put it? The feelings are very delicate and the feelings are well written, but the worries in the workplace make me feel too awkward. Regarding the competition in the workplace, big and small, for connections, qualifications, and a representative on paper, they are all things in the workplace, but the author's description is inappropriate. Compared with the decent people in No. 13 Mink Street, Things that are fought over in the workplace feel like they are not worth fighting for. For example, if a title belongs to the protagonist, and a younger brother of the other party wants to take it away, the protagonist only needs to warn and beat, a small action. When the author spends a lot of time describing this matter, it suddenly highlights the protagonist's lack of ability. Maybe the author wants to describe the growth of a male protagonist, but as the protagonist, the author has to think about one thing. Why should the protagonist be the protagonist? He must have a core competitiveness. I saw later that there is no, no decisiveness, no observation of words, and no tact. To put it simply, if someone else is placed in the position of the protagonist, he can also do these things with the help of the heroine and other characters. In this case, how can he be remembered as the protagonist.