Entrepreneurship Starts from Retirement

Author: Dafengzhi Theme: Male Video·Reality·Success Inspiration Number of words read: 20w/33w Commentator: Nai Ganyujunjue 1. Introduction to the book title Book The name Realistic column is more about the subject matter and content. The previous title "Dear Old Man" gave people a sense of lyricism and tenderness. After changing it to "Entrepreneurship Starts from Retirement", the lyricism is less, but the main plot will be clearer, and everyone has their own choices. It's a relatively decent book title. Introduction The introduction is not very strong. Although the method of Internet writing is used, it is similar to the unknowing success. As a realistic subject, readers may be more realistic. Just explain clearly what you can see and highlight. I remember that the previous introduction had a lot of words, but more of the introduction was about the contrast between the rich second generation and running a nursing home. It only defined the plot and subject matter as highlights, which is obviously biased. Personally, I feel that some of the real highlights of this book have not been expressed. The writing style may be the highlight of the article. [hr] 2. Writing The writing style of the book is mostly reflected in chatting and teasing each other. The language of life is simple and the emotions are sincere. The main attraction lies in the male protagonist's activeness, scheming and a little bit of damage. In this regard, the author has a high degree of restoration of real-life conversations. Basically, reading the book is like watching a scolding battle in person. This is the most distinctive part of the book in my personal opinion, and it is also the place that encourages reading and seems to be enjoyable. The daily characterization makes reading feel like watching a TV series. But success is also Xiaohe, failure is also Xiaohe. As a novel, some of the dialogue seems protracted and the content seems to be a bit rambling, which means it is easy to go off topic and come back again. In reality, these situations do occur in conversations, but the novel strives to be meaningful and precise. Sometimes when watching the protagonist argue, you will feel like you are rushing and going too far. 3. Beginning Personally, I feel that this is the biggest loss of points. What I was interested in at the beginning was what kind of tender content it would be like to take care of the elderly. I was looking forward to the intuitive image of being respectful to the elderly and handling things with ease and ease. It turns out that the protagonist is an out-and-out playboy, talking all day long, bluffing, etc., Dealing with debt collectors, and going to the Internet cafe to vent, while advancing the female protagonist, and gently unfolding a series of doubts about my mother's bankruptcy. Contrast is not the problem, the problem is the contrast with the protagonist's unrepentant rogue temperament, which is heart-wrenching to watch. As a characterization, it is successful, but it reduces the likability a bit, mainly because of its impatience. When the rhythm is in urgent need of progress, I deliberately waste it. This is probably the feeling. The plot of the old man has not started for a long time. It can be said that most of the beginning is spent on the characteristics of the book, so that the rhythm is greatly affected. They say everything is difficult at the beginning, but I didn't expect that I would have to accompany the protagonist to reach the bottom first. Impatient readers may run away here. What is the result? When it has not yet improved, apart from word of mouth, the most attractive thing to attract readers is the opening chapter. Let's take this as a warning in the future. There are contradictions and conflicts, but it is not close to the main line. It is only when we arrive at the nursing home that we feel that we are on the right track. 4. Plot setting In terms of plot setting, there is still a certain conspiracy as suspense. As the story develops, everything slowly improves. There is no problem with suspense, but there is a feeling that everyone seems to be in harmony, but in fact it is as careful as guessing small thoughts. This feeling is good if it is appropriate, but if it is too much, it may be counterproductive. After all, you have to be generous in life. The other thing is the character portrayal. The protagonist is a prodigal son who manages business in the face of danger. He has a dark side but a bright mind. He also has his own shortcomings, but overall he is a character recognized by readers. Seeing that he will not suffer any loss, I feel relieved and feel a sense of responsibility. I found Zhou Jin's character very novel at first. He was transformed from the most common villain path to a glass-hearted man, but his fragile heart was a bit too much. He is too easy to collapse and be deceived. Even Hua Zi is mentally tougher than him. He is a good character. Dark clouds, the heroine. I'll just watch the plot without dark clouds, and watch the plot with dark clouds with relish, although the emotional line of the young couple is a bit disturbing to watch. A girl who is determined to explore and promote culture and be self-reliant. In addition to her feelings for the protagonist, it was also too obvious at the beginning. The moment they met each other had a certain aura as a protagonist, and the other interactions were quite exciting. As a story that focuses on daily life and progresses slowly, the nursing home enters its real rhythm when it settles down. The overall tone of the story is warm and playful, but also somewhat realistic. The occasional plot to conquer the heroine is very real. This is the characteristic of realistic columns. The characters and living beings are not black and white, and most of them are even vivid. 5. Overall impression I was jumping to read it before. After the elderly moved in, I was also curious about the business model of the nursing home, which seemed relatively interesting. The dialogue between the characters in the book is vivid and vivid. The characterization of the characters does not lie in their interactions. What I personally think is more vivid is that when encountering an event, every choice and action of the character is a reflection of the interpretation of the character. The author originally thought of portraying the character image, so it would be better to reflect it through earlier events. The Northeastern style is also clearly reflected. The story is full of life, and you will feel comfortable watching the characters' daily conversations. After 100,000 words, I have basically entered the reading environment. Even the vicious-looking debt collectors Zhou Jin and Hua Zi have become honest and honest. The brotherhood is righteous, the difficulty of taking care of the elderly, and the gradual growth of the second generation, and the emotional line with the heroine is very warm. It has an immersive power when reading, and it is a rare good work. Scores don't mean anything. If you are not familiar with the methods of Internet writing, your flaws will not hide your flaws. In daily business, occasionally more vivid and interesting plots or character stories can trigger the emotional rendering of the characters. It can be done more often if you have a good grasp of the scale and do not use too much force to cause distortion.

The characterization is quite vivid, and the male protagonist is mean and scheming. Although there are traces of conspiracy from time to time, it is not tiring to watch.

Staying at home due to the epidemic, I read novels to kill time. I thought it was about Sunset Love when I saw the title and cover. Once I clicked on it, I couldn't stop reading it. I like this urban style of writing.

There are so few people writing about reality nowadays.

The writing is good and very realistic. The author has certain life experience. It is worth reading. I will save it and pay attention to it, and I will read it slowly.

The emotional drama is well written. This is the most comfortable novel I have ever read.

What is the relationship between Li Feibai and Li Bai? Oops! Same surname! One

🤓Bubbling up secretly

The idea of ​​nursing homes is good. Society is about to enter an aging society, especially families with only children.

Congratulations to Gale for being on the home page!

It's tiring to wait until it gets better, it's so troublesome, collect it first, and then kill it when you're done.

It has become a habit to come and visit regularly.

I have read too many books, and such a good book is so rare.

At first I felt that this book was relatively long, but at the end the plot was tight and enjoyable.

Big, faster, faster, everyone is waiting eagerly (slapping the table)

What a great beginning, I like it, please update soon.

What a good man, honest and upright, and his calm and witty personality is very endearing.

Haha, I applaud the plot, the skills are so profound, I like it

Although the author is writing a novel, the things he expresses are very real, and many of them touch his heart~~

Collections, recommendations, it's all for you!

This book is great, I hope the follow-up will be even better!

What a mess

If you write like this, you will definitely receive applause from flowers all the way! Don't forget us after you become gods~ 😁😁 😁😁

Contribution to Wuyun's 600th refill~

The male protagonist is a bit sinister...

Great support... Your books are well written. Every one of them is good...

The book is good, but the name is a bit tacky. . 🤭🤭🤭🤭

I, I, I couldn't help but glance at the follow-up plot, Da Feng Feng, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, you, I, I, I, I, I, , , , , , ‐ ,                                                                                                   out out out of  Wu Yun. 😭 It's so uncomfortable to abuse the heroine. I saw her whole body was not feeling well yesterday. Backstab, that's too much... Fortunately, the ending is good. (Hold the knife

Finished spreading flowers ~ Cow wow cow wow!