This Is the AFK Player

What dissuades me is not the plot or the poisonous points, but the setting. First of all, the protagonist has an idle system. Secondly, the protagonist's profession is a sharpshooter. So what the hell is Douluo? What are the professions of the other people on the battlefield? What is the carrying capacity of grenades? Only the protagonist has skills on the battlefield? Looking at the article, it is mentioned that other people use guns, so what is their occupation? It is hinted between the lines that the main weapon cannot be equipped with other professions, so the battlefield cannot be full of gunmen. How can it be equipped with a rifle? In real-life online games, the plot settings are too confusing. I could tolerate the jerky writing at the beginning and continue reading, but the battlefield was really unbearable, there were too many poisonous points. If the setting cannot be written out completely, it is not a setting, it is a sinkhole that cannot be filled. If you can't write the epic feeling of the battlefield, don't force yourself to write about the battlefield. A bunch of newbies from Novice Village come to the battlefield? The country is empty? Everyone else is dead? I was confused after reading the article. The enemy has tens of millions of people, but we have 4 to 5 people? It was a battlefield where many people died, and it felt like child's play. That Barrett, please remember that it is a skill, and the skill description is not accurate. Are bullets counted by rounds or clips? It would be easier to explain if the protagonist has his own skills, then the protagonist has dual systems. But the author's description shows that everyone has a profession and skills, so in such a large battlefield, the protagonist has skills? Only the protagonist has a high level? Others won't use skills? I hope the author can see and modify and improve these poisonous points. As a three-year old bookworm, I am actually very optimistic about your initial background settings. And advise the author, if it is really not well written, then this book will become a poisonous weed.

Then the team will kill them directly. The survival of the entire race is facing a crisis, and the new generation is being implicated? Because he threatens the so-called "Novice's No. 1", He screams and kills like this? Either there are a lot of novices, and that's okay, but what if there are only about twenty novices a year, and those who arrive first have an absolute advantage, and they still think about murdering the outstanding ones who come after them every day? If the camp's senior leadership acquiesces, then the camp will be over quickly. If it's just that the character of this team is not good, they can be used as cannon fodder as soon as possible. It's okay to advance the plot, but don't let a team like this disgust us for ten or twenty chapters.

It's said to be an AFK stream, but I'm extremely busy every day.

The third chapter directly persuades people to quit. In what age, there are still people writing this kind of content, looking for the protagonist to recruit, and if they are rejected, they will deal with it. Seriously, in this kind of apocalyptic world, monsters are everywhere, and the people are squeezed to the point where there is no room for survival. Are you still wasting time, energy, and manpower to trouble people just because you are rejected?

Daily detoxification never disappoints me, for three days in a row. Is this a relative of the editor?

It's so rubbish, it has something to do with hanging up.

I admit that I came in after seeing the name of the work, and I was persuaded to quit after two chapters. It was such a harsh environment in the first place. Just outsmart the villain? Inexplicably, a team member wants to kill the protagonist just because of this so-called newcomer competition list? Big brother. This is not how it was written ten years ago.

Daily introduction (cross out) poison Daily daily poisoning completed (✔)

Games are not like games, reality is not like reality, neither fish nor fowl

I feel like after reading a novel from 10 years ago, can I bring some intelligence into writing a book?

Ha, I'm speechless for this novel. It's about an AFK flow. At the beginning, when you traveled through the past, you AFKed very quickly, but then you upgraded. Why did you have so few AFKs later on? I still had the idle stream running around doing tasks all day long. When I was writing about the villain later, I felt like it was another villain who offended him first and then chased him later. This author has no brains. If I were the villain, I would just kill the chicken to respect the monkey first. I want to become a gang where those who follow me will prosper and those who go against me will perish. I actually don't understand what it means to kill a chicken to scare the monkeys, so I feel that this novel is not good at all, so I quit.

There are so many poisonous points. The background of the pig's feet is the largest violent department in history. After all, it is a globally integrated military.) Just catch a banshee and start investigating on your own. It has been confirmed that it is in the academy. Why don't you transfer some people? Fight alone? The Holy Mother's heart bursts into tears? Personal heroism? If you don't sacrifice hundreds of people, wouldn't it be a disgrace to the mother's heart of the pig's feet?

If you don't hang up the AFK stream, you will be a busy dog

Traveling through the world of online games, I have a small plug-in for the idle game. However, there are only a few chapters describing the idle game. The rest are all about the protagonist being a master of the game and relying on his own game level to make rapid progress. This seriously deviates from the title of the book. Book lovers who come here for the small plug-in should not expect it.

After reading Chapter 7, what about the AFK system? I just AFKed a few experience points at the beginning, but it didn't appear after that.

What the hell are you writing? I'm so arrogant and arrogant. I don't even have any skills yet but I act like I'm awesome.

I can spend 270 to buy some clothes, but I feel distressed when I spend 30 krypton for Goldfinger. It's quite inexplicable.

Your idle system is almost non-existent. I have seen more than 20 chapters, except for the beginning, and it only appeared once to get rewards. The whole process is just about the protagonist fighting and killing outside. What's the point of your idle system? Just to get a name?

It's so poisonous that it makes me feel uncomfortable even if I read it without thinking. It's written in such a way that the donkey's head is wrong.

I don't understand. The key point is why you need to sign a contract with that bastard Satan. If I don't sign, it's over. Can he force you? The addition of that girl Ai Xi just gives Satan the means to manipulate you into signing the contract. This is a way of rushing people to pinch you, and you are still lonely and looking for true love. Come on, Qiong Yao dramas are outdated. The whole film is full of unnecessary self-redemption. Even if you describe the content and plot of the article well, it is not too late to be pretentious. If you want to have it both ways, the content is a mess. The plot direction is unclear. It is also full of emotional descriptions that touch yourself. I can't understand it. It's a waste to give such a good talent. Let's reincarnate the protagonist.