Io War Chronicles

I saw the book's test under the ink master's post, so I decided to write a review for the author and what I wanted to say on it. As mentioned in Testing Poison, what attracted me to this book is its plot and the author's writing style. Let's talk about the plot first. At the beginning, it tells the story of an orc warrior who went out to rescue soldiers in order to save his tribe. There are not many novels with orcs as the protagonist, but there are not many, and they are still very distinctive. The description of the main plot after this is also very clear, without delay or interruption, and it can be seen that the author is laying the foundation for the story layer by layer, and also leads to the relationship between various forces fighting or cooperating, which is very interesting. As for the writing style, I mainly mention the author's description of the characters and fighting scenes. When the author writes about a character, he will not immediately focus on writing about the person and describe how that person is throughout the whole article. Instead, he will slowly outline the person's personality and experience through the story. I think this is very good (of course, there are exceptions such as Dream of Red Mansions, classics are classics). Then the author is very detailed when writing the fighting scenes. There is no single stroke, and he fights according to his strength. There is no collapse (of course, it may be because of the beginning of the chapter, otherwise it will be a battle of gods at the beginning, which will test the author's control later). Moreover, the description of the fighting is very coherent, not empty, and there is a lot of tension in some places. This is still 8 mistakes. Okay, I want to suppress before I advance. What I want to talk about next is the shortcomings, or in other words, it is the only shortcoming that I think. As mentioned in the poison test post, the protagonist's role in the early stage was not very large. I could see that the orc Oxa was the protagonist, but it didn't feel like the whole story revolved around him. Of course, when I see it now, I have a feeling. Maybe this orc will play an important role in the future, but he is still a small character now. He is growing up slowly. In this case, it is okay, otherwise I feel that the protagonist is not the protagonist. Except for the protagonist, everyone else also has their own characteristics, which is a good point. In short, I hope the author can stick to it, because Western fantasy has long been in decline. There are not many authors who write Western fantasy and classify it as Western fantasy, but there will still be a group of loyal Western fantasy readers who stick to their love. Finally, I would like to mention that although I haven't found any Chinese names for the characters in the novel or any classical Chinese proverbs appearing in the dialogues, I still want to remind the author not to create anything similar. This should be the duty of Western fantasy themes! Nowadays, Western fantasy is in a mess. I wish the author can stick to his writing style. Come on~{"TopicId":"575911170507276288","TopicName":"New Book Recommendation"}

I saw Amway come here before on QReading. Maybe I have read a lot of fantasy fairy tale urban books before. At first glance, this kind of western fantasy is quite new, and I feel it is very unique at first glance. I don't have much feeling about the slow-burning of the protagonist as some book friends said. I thought this is the style of western fantasy (because after chasing my best friend Spider, I feel that my best friend is also slow to warm up, even though my best friend is Cthulhu). Let me tell you what I think: Author, you write scene transitions very well! The transitions are very comfortable, and I feel that it has its own writing style among the books I have read. Especially for a person like me who has a rich imagination but little hair, it is a kind of imaginative enjoyment. No matter what book I read, my mind is very sensitive to the scene changes, so when I encounter good writing, I can seem to feel like watching a movie. By the way, can a novice writer who has not signed a contract also have lv1? It seems that it can be written really well

Overall, the plot has a natural transition and multiple characters are distinct, especially the boss Meow. It can be seen that the author has a good foundation. The shortcomings are also obvious. The first 20 chapters are slow to pick up, and it is easy for readers to be disappointed. In addition, the copywriting is basically irrelevant to the plot, and it is easy to discourage readers before they reach the point where the author's writing power is highlighted. In addition, the author uses a combination of lens writing methods, which can indeed quickly make readers aware of the demands and situations of all parties in the conflict. However, the description of the protagonist's experience and personality characteristics in the opening chapter is seriously insufficient, making it difficult for readers to have a sense of involvement, and even feeling that they are taking the lead. Also, let me complain a little bit, why are the current lion kings and tiger kings in almost every book named Ryan and Tiger... Talking about Ryan VIII and Tiger IX, this can better reflect the inheritance of the lion and tiger kings. Using the racial name for the first supporting character to appear is not a sign of "naming waste"... Using a surname is better than this... If it doesn't work, you can open a supporting role collection post, and book friends will definitely be happy to contribute their own characters. To make the novel more readable, the following improvements need to be made: 1. Copywriting. The copy should be a summary or highlights of the novel (or previous parts), and should be able to highlight the content of the novel. Your copy almost made me think it was a same-world fast-travel or group-travel novel. The result is that most people who like pure western fantasy were dissuaded when they saw the copy. People who clicked in after reading the copy found that the content was wrong. In addition, the perspective was divided in the early stage and people could not grasp the key points. It gave people the feeling that the author's ideas were confused and he wrote wherever he thought, and he would also be dissuaded. 2. Opening. I just couldn't get my head around it for 3 chapters. I was persuaded to quit once about 10 chapters before I continued reading after seeing the author's message. As you read further, you can feel that the author hopes to introduce the world view and the parties to the conflict as much as possible through the first few chapters. As a result, he almost ignores the description of the protagonist. It is recommended that the setting be moved separately to the setting chapter. The conflict parties before meeting the protagonist can be placed separately in the prologue or moved to the back after the concentrated description of the protagonist. At least let the reader have a general understanding of the protagonist before telling other lines of the story. Otherwise, it is easy to give people the feeling that the author wants to write multiple lines like Game of Thrones but does not have enough writing power. {"NickName":"The Moon Is Far Away","UserId":360519972} In addition, judging from the current plot, there is no need to change the previous plot for the new characters. My animal design is fantasy, and this book is purely Western fantasy. There is no need to change the book for the supporting characters who have not appeared. It is very simple to arrange an identity that is consistent with Western fantasy. There are few descriptions of the human race, so you can add whatever you want; the main plot can be moved back. The non-conflict ways I can think of are: 1) The beast is a wandering werewolf who has an adventure, and you won't get to know him until you fight him; 2) A friend of the old man of the golden werewolf tribe, or the descendant (wolf?) Of his deceased friend, and then you can give the little wolf Heli the accelerated growth/tool ​​wolf attribute. 3) The declining wolf clan aristocracy, the inheritance of the family formation master, but the family is sparse, and the early death of their parents leads to decline. 4) Discover the protagonist's spiritual talent and plan to invest in the Talisman Planeswalker.

Since ancient times, kings have been at odds with each other. Therefore, it is an inevitable historical result that a big cleanup within the country of ligers and tigers is necessary.

I am a maniac who edits text every day. After writing each chapter, you have to revise it 3 times before posting it, and then use the reader account bound to the author account to read it from the reader's perspective once and then correct it once. There will be changes from time to time in the future, but those are basically minimal optimizations to the plot or settings, or correction of grammatical errors, typos, etc. Then, the previously modified records will not be described again. Now I will only explain the recent changes to the entire novel. ——————————(Dividing line)—————————— [Didi~The Legend of Io has been updated successfully] [The content of this Io 6.0 Version update is as follows] 1. Increase the role of the protagonist at the beginning, which relatively optimizes the problem that some readers have repeatedly emphasized that there are not many roles for the protagonist. 2. Moved the manifestation of Goldfinger from more than ten chapters to the opening chapters, and added a small amount of plot to supplement the foreshadowing. 3. Optimized some character dialogues to improve reading fluency and character characteristics. 4. The excessively detailed description of some scenes has been simplified in order to speed up the transition and show the characters or story conflicts. 5. Add scenes of the protagonist living in the Boulder clan to enhance the sense of immersion in the story. 6. Add the storyline of the human race attacking the Stone Clan to complete the early background of the story. 7. Added an introduction to the chief of the Boulder clan. 8. Change some "tribes" to "clan" to improve distinction and rationality. 9. Optimize the description of a very small number of items. 10. Adjusted the writing style with difficulty to make it as close as possible to traditional fantasy writing. 11. Remove the prologue and transition directly to the main text, so as to save more memory for readers' patience. 12. A non-technical mistake caused the name of the novel to be changed from "Legend of Io" to "Rebirth of Io". The title of the novel may still be changed appropriately in the next version update, so please don't look forward to it. 13. The cover pattern is mirrored and the cover font and content have been slightly changed to fit the above non-technical errors. 14. Introduction is slightly adjusted to improve fluency. 15. Fine-tune the display order of highlights. [Didi ~ This change does not affect the overall progress of the story before the change. Readers with a high reading progress, please rest assured; in addition, due to the optimization and adjustment of some sentences and the overall relocation and change of the order of some chapters, a dozen readers have had their comments swallowed. To avoid misunderstandings, the comments that have been swallowed are now placed in the comment area]

Collected {"NickName":"The Moon Is Far Away","UserId":360519972} (The Moon Is Far Away) This exquisite work (such as the link) with beautiful writing and soaring popularity is as wonderful as the handsome writer Gu Zhangze's popular work "The Great Spinning Song of China". We sincerely invite everyone to reward, subscribe and become fans! Vote and collect to support!

"The Great Spinning Song of China" by handsome writer Gu Zhangze has been collected on Qidian and QQ reading platforms + book reviews + daily recommendation votes for "The Legend of Io" by {"NickName":"The Full Moon and the River Away","UserId":360519972}.

I've been raising it for a while, but it's gone just now. You just update a chapter in one day? ?

My roommate recommended me to read this book. I really like the cover of this book. It's the kind of book that makes people's eyes light up when you read it in the vast sea of ​​books. It feels refreshing even if you don't read the content and just put it on the bookshelf. Hahahahahahahaha

The writing is very good, but unfortunately it's not my personal preference, sorry.

It's rare to encounter such a pure Western fantasy writing style. It reminds me of A Song of Ice and Fire. Come on, author!

Every alliance has you, it's hard not to pay attention...

A very pure western fantasy work, and the writing is also great. I have only played War3 myself, and this time I am exposed to a new world! 🙂

By the way, hasn't the author signed a contract yet?

There are several people reading it very quickly every day. I just sent it out, and after reading it, I was going to revise it again, and I already found that there were follow-up readers. But I was puzzled, why was there no one interacting with me even though I was reading? ! ! Is the person following the reading a robot arranged by the system? ! ! At any rate, you can discuss the plot with me or scold me. I am so speechless that I cried. A hundred ruby ​​crystal tears shed tonight. It is like this tonight and every night.

The style is very similar to A Song of Ice and Fire, which is my favorite type

This author obviously updated so late, are you monsters who follow the latest update?🙂

Originally I was worried because Xiyuan didn't sign a contract, but now it seems that this result is better than 80% of the street players even though he didn't sign a contract. For example, if I sign a contract and put it on the shelves, what will happen? I have to pounce as much as I should! So, come on Xiyuan! Still optimistic about you!

Seeing that you really like snow scenes, I'll give you another one.

Favorite and comment on each other? "The Top of the Soul-Stained Alien World" travels through fantasy and has been added to your bookshelf

Dd, come out with some rotten CP

I just realized that the previous chapters have been changed and they are not as confusing as the original version.

It's been six days, is this a pigeon?