I Found a Planet: My Adventure Is Being Livestreamed

This is outrageous! The style of their pajamas, their accents, their catchphrases, their mannerisms, the tools they brought from Earth—so much information is practically written all over these old scholars' faces: their proportions, genders, habits, where they're from, and their ages. And yet they still can't find them? This is the protagonist's perspective… With so much information, what the hell is the military supposed to be researching?

I have a question 😥: Why does the protagonist think he can analyze future high technology? Why did he immediately think of analyzing it himself? The story describes the protagonist as a high-IQ academic genius, right? 😅

Having read up to chapter 93, I feel like the plot is getting increasingly absurd. He wants to make money through high-tech, yet he needs his family and girlfriend by his side, and he doesn't want the country to find him. He even wants to go into space before confronting the country? Ha! Do you think that's possible?

Here are some words I'd like to say to the author. First, maintain your own rhythm; don't disrupt it by rushing to update. It's easy to mess up your writing. Second, don't worry about how well you wrote something before and keep thinking about revising it. The more you revise, the less confident you'll become. Less important parts can be revised after the story is finished.

I couldn't resist after reading chapter 59, so I checked the table of contents. Good heavens, over 100 chapters in and the country still hasn't found the protagonist! With so much information presented, even an ordinary person could guess some things. The entire national machinery is mobilized, yet they still can't find him? How much do they underestimate the national machinery? In conclusion: the science fiction aspect is good, but the plot is worrying.

Do people actually read this kind of writing? I seriously doubt how broken their mental world must be!

Don't send it and pretend it can't be found. That's underestimating national institutions. Quickly think about what to write if you get found. If you can't be found, you'll lose a large number of readers.

The concept is good. However, the writing and plot are terrible, with too many illogical parts. For example, every time the expert appears, they use phrases like "Oh my god," "Oh my god," "What are you doing here? That one can fly," and so on. I'm speechless. Why so many "days"? There were also some details, such as finding people and ensuring the live stream was completed.

If we can't find a single person after all this time, this country is too weak. Let it be destroyed!

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