Hogwarts Everyday Players

I'm feeling numb, so I try to figure it out at home every day. . .

The sea, you are all water and a lot of nonsense

There are too many interpretations of the original work. After reading 20 chapters, most of them are conjectures and interpretations of the original work. The author's own content is submerged in it. From the reader's point of view, the story that happened to my protagonist is not the original work. The original work has too much rhythm control and is affected by the original work.

The author's views on the reform of wizarding society, especially educational reform, are very problematic and very naive. From a sociological perspective, only a social structure that needs each other has value. If every wizard can be self-sufficient through seven years of compulsory education as the author envisions, the biggest problem will be the fragmentation of society. A society where there is no need for interaction between people will have no value. The education reform envisioned by the author will lead to the disintegration of wizard society. After seven years of compulsory education, wizards will only live in a small circle of three or five friends after making a few friends. In the end, wizard society will be a loose wizard alliance. Since the development potential of Muggle society is much greater than that of wizards, doesn't such a loose wizard alliance give Muggles a chance to defeat each other? If this continues, wizards will become Muggles' guinea pigs in the near future. Moreover, people have different interests and talents. It is impossible for every wizard to be capable and keen on studying magic. Referring to the real society, we know that only the winners who have been screened by primary school, middle school and university graduate students are qualified and capable to study science. Others have little value to scientific development per se. The author's educational reform is very naive, and his views on Lockhart and Rita Skeeter are also very one-sided and incorrect. As protagonists of divine thinking, they should be admired rather than despised. Because they really used their talents and magic in their respective fields.

Two questions: 1. The diary is a Horcrux. It was made in the year Myrtle died. Myrtle's death was used as a sacrifice to split the soul. At this time, Tom was a prefect and his grade was estimated to be fifth grade. The reasoning comes from the memory of the old slug in the sixth part: the Horcrux that Voldemort asked about in fifth grade. At this time, Voldemort should not have started making Horcruxes; and then the second Horcrux recorded the capture of Hagrid. In addition, there is no original text stating that Hagrid is of the same level as Tom. 2. The alternation of first person and third person in the article is very funny.

There was just a chapter review discussing Ron's appearance and Hermione's casting. It was very pertinent. I also replied to it, but it suddenly disappeared. I guess I deleted it after seeing my reply. Discussion is normal, don't delete it, otherwise mine will no longer be visible. Except for personal attacks and advertising book reviews, I will keep all other comments when I have time.

To be honest, I really don't like the character of Kate. Mainly because of the way she appears, I don't like it. When Penelo goes on a date with the protagonist, she suddenly interferes. Later, she knows clearly that Penelo likes the protagonist and she has to follow him every time they go on a date. She always feels like a habit. Not to mention the bad feeling and the feeling of deliberately causing destruction, I just bypassed Penello and contacted the protagonist directly. After all, Penello should have known about it, but then he went on a private trip with the protagonist, which really confused me. What kind of bloody love triangle is this? It's okay to go to a world of two behind your best friend's back and her boyfriend's back! She looks more like the protagonist's girlfriend than Penelo. In my opinion, she is like the kind of green tea mistress who competes with her best friend for a man. The male protagonist also feels like a central air-conditioned scumbag to me, who only has two choices when it comes to picking up his girlfriend and best friend! The love triangle between the scumbag boyfriend, his green tea bestie, and his silly sweet girlfriend made me feel a bit stinky after watching this emotional drama...

Who is the pig's foot? I'm confused and can't understand! Is it Harry Potter? Why do I feel that Harry Potter is the winner in life. Lane Smith is like a piece of shit, always researching this and that behind the scenes, and the author has too many personal items!

The title of this book should be changed to "Ryan's Brainstorming Daily"

The heroine is the most difficult to write. If you have good writing skills, then write as many as you like. The more you write, the happier everyone will be. If you feel that your level is not good enough, then you either don't write it, or you write about your childhood sweetheart. It has been developed since childhood, so it has a high error tolerance and will not be abrupt. Perfect

The author writes everything very well, except when the first female protagonist appears, it is too blunt, boring, and upsetting. You either write directly in advance that you want to develop her, or you write that you are not interested in her, but using her for magic experiments, your writing is really unflattering, I couldn't read it I wanted to give up, but because the other settings written by the author were really good, I skipped reading. But if there are too many chapters like this, there are really no fans, or you wrote that the heroine contacted him in order to locate Hogwarts so that she can be teleported there. This is fine, but her appearance is really too sudden.

Everyone could have given up on this. This is a running story. The protagonist rarely appears later. Do you think it is strange that the protagonist rarely appears? It is directly about the daily life of Harry Potter. It feels like you are almost out of writing the main character of the fanfic. You might as well finish it directly, or you should not be a copycat and just copy Harry Potter.

I didn't find it exciting, it made people feel a strange and awkward feeling, but I couldn't put it into words.

If the author can't write an emotional scene, then don't write it. If you forcefully write the emotional line like this, it will easily collapse. There are too many personal things. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. I wish you a big hit.

It would be acceptable if the creation of the spell was explained or the usage and principles of the spell were expanded, but the protagonist keeps talking about it in his head, which is too poisonous.

I can't stand it anymore. I was so awesome before school, why should I go to school? There are also a long-winded group, there are so many theories that they have directly become gods and are still playing with children. It's quite Aquaman, just do it well and see all kinds of contradictions.

Why does a person who wants to live alone have so many deceptive behaviors? I'm convinced, why do I have to keep writing analysis of the plot and characters? Isn't it supposed to be to study while I have time? Why are there so many inner dramas? The protagonist feels like a primary school student

This novel gave me a weird feeling. The more I read, the more upset I became. Moreover, most of the Harry fanfics I have read are nanny novels. Except for the Blood Wizard, this is the novel with a better setting among the Harry fanfics I have read. However, there are too many internal dramas, and it feels like I am not reading a novel, but reading a diary.

Shock! Not to mention a college student falling in love with an 11-year-old boy. Avoid lightning, everyone, this is how the main plot of this book is promoted, and it stinks. Reading chapter 20 is really disgusting.

Most of this novel is about the analysis and discussion of the original work... I suggest that the author change the proportion. I could barely hold on until chapter 50 and couldn't stand it any longer. Those who know the original work of Harry Potter don't want you to explain it in such a detailed way. To be honest, the reading experience is really not good. It feels like reading the annotations of a famous book. It is estimated that not many people will spend money to read this content after it is put on the shelves.

It's too watery. Seventy percent of a chapter is self-interest, various conspiracy theories, and too many personal opinions. Those who didn't know better thought the author had written a review.

The protagonist is Harry Potter's Goldfinger, and this book is Harry Potter. The author just added a cheat to Harry, "the so-called male protagonist" haha

Dear book friends or authors, I have read Chapter 221 of this book now, and I am in a bad mood now. To be honest, I personally feel that your writing is really not very good. Your book is originally written as a fan. I have read 211 chapters, and now it shows that you have updated more than 800 chapters. I don't know what happens next, but from what I have seen, I really don't know whether you are writing a fan or a "Harry Potter Special". I am really speechless. Where is your protagonist? We also like Harry Potter, so we read his fanfics, but we don't ask you to slightly change his story and publish it directly. What we like more is the promotion of the protagonist in it, as well as some additional personal settings or supplements to the entire book, as well as redemption. Some of the regrets I had when reading books before, instead of asking you to write down the stories we all know in more detail, I feel quite speechless. But to be honest, if you can write so many chapters, then you must also love this book and "Harry Potter". Maybe I can't appreciate it. Anyway, I wish you great success! 🔥🔥🔥Come on (ง•̀_•́)งCome on (ง•̀_•́)งCome on (ง•̀_•́)ง

I read Chapter 30, there is no plot, it's all about association, I just read Niu Mo for pure self-interest.

There is definitely a big problem with the author's views! Marriage is such a child's play, it can be ignored and played with! If you are dissatisfied with your current marital relationship and want to start another relationship, of course you can, although in my opinion, it is infinitely close to betrayal as long as the other party has not made any mistakes! But before starting another relationship, he did not end the current marriage, or even clearly informed the other party in the current marriage! This is cheating! It's betrayal! It is against morality! Violate your conscience! Against the law! The author's adaptation of Lily Evans definitely has a big problem! ! !

My evaluation is that if Harry is the protagonist and the current protagonist is Harry's grandfather, the book will be much better - Harry and his family's daily life is originally written very well, but the frequent insertions of Ryan's big stallion will affect the viewing experience. And because the system is so powerful, Ryan's impression is no longer just that "I can do it", but that "any other person is better than him."

Is this novel "Let the Water Dry" have 100,000 words?

I have read Chapter 10. It is indeed a bit confusing, unclear narration, nonsense, a bit too much, and more of talking to myself.

The monthly votes are cast, the investments are cast, and the rewards are received. The rest is up to the author.

With a constitution of 20 and a strength of 5, is it reasonable not to consider it when setting the character's attributes?