Fellow Daoist, Your Script Is a Great Read

A strange idea suddenly came to my mind. Is it possible that the male protagonist is still unable to ascend after 1,000 years? A group of female protagonists practiced the magic of corpse dismemberment, ascended with the parts of the male protagonist, and then assembled them in the fairy world. Do you think this is possible? 😰😰

The author should reflect on his own writing attitude. The biggest problem for the author is that he writes as he pleases, writing wherever he wants, often just to make up the word count. The author's three works, "I Have a Lot of Resurrection Coins", "Fellow Daoist, Your Script is So Beautiful", and the trumpet "Holy Maiden Please Peace Out" all have this problem. The author is used to constantly adding heroines one by one. Each of the three works has more than ten or even twenty heroines. However, the author does not have the writing power to control so many characters at the same time. As time goes by, the author himself cannot remember them. As a result, many heroines appear once and then die, giving people the feeling of throwing them away after use. I personally think that with the author's writing skills, when writing books in the future, it would be better to only arrange 4-6 heroines, so that everyone can get enough plots and not make people feel like vase. In addition, there is a problem with the IP concept of this work. At the beginning of reading the script, readers feel very novel, but over time, readers will get bored. Because every thing the protagonist does may change someone else's script, readers will be bored to death if they read the script all day long and the protagonist is not bored. So the title actually limits the work itself. As a cool Internet novel, the male protagonist can be weak, but not spineless. In this article, Su Li's image was ruined by the Black Demon Sect battle. He learned the Kaitian Sword but only ran away when encountering an enemy. The author might as well focus on "Saint Please Peace", at least the male protagonist Lin Xun is still strong. But "Saint of Peace" also has its own problems. From Chapter 400 onwards, it is basically a running story. There is a difference between novels and anecdotes. There must be dialogue, analysis, and psychological activities. It is actually quite a pity to see such an IP fall to this stage. I hope that the author will first formulate an overall outline when writing in the future.

Recommended from other book chapters, the book is really good, very interesting to read, and I highly recommend it But for personal reasons, I couldn't stand it until chapter 300 👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻 The system appears too little, it feels like it only appears after a few major events, and the system's combat power is a bit small, maybe it's the author's setting. Except for the realm of the male protagonist, everything else has not changed at all from the beginning. He is still the same waste, greedy for money, lustful and weak, and he hugs a woman with a golden script when he sees it. None of the hostile characters that have appeared so far has been solved by the protagonist himself. He has been waiting for someone to save him, and this weakling looks very frustrated. I have read a soft rice article before. The protagonist just finished eating the soft rice. It can be seen that his strength has grown, but this one did not show it at all. We should rely on soft food to make ourselves stronger. We can't rely on soft food all the time. It's 300 chapters and I haven't done anything yet. Then, especially Xia Liuliu, I really can't deal with it. I really see what it is used for. It completely embodies the useless character of the male protagonist. He has no strength and no 🧠 (I know that she disgusts the junior sister, so I really go there by myself at night, without telling the junior sister, just act as a tool). Fortunately, the person is beautiful, and the good person has a golden script. Wait for someone to lead you away. Maybe the author has a plan behind it, but it is really disgusting here. Finally it's the junior sister, I'm convinced, I'm really convinced. Such a good junior sister, let's not pick up the food in the bowl and look at the pot. The requirements should be lower. The junior sister is so good, it's not too much to be a real wife. Now that the junior sister is around, we can stop getting involved with other women. Giving some face to the junior sister is not as good as what Chen Gou does (Chen Gou also knows to separate areas for You Chu and Xiao Yu'er to prevent them from meeting each other) he tui

Hey, all I can say is that book lovers who haven't read it should run away immediately and don't subscribe to it 😭. After subscribing to the Xia Liuliu chapter, I was really disgusted. The whole novel will use women to create new plots. The writing is messy, I like to play awkward, there are a lot of female characters written, most of them are not well written, they are pure disgusting people, run, run, run, I don't want to criticize the author, mainly because I feel unworthy for everyone who subscribed, the writing is useless and I don't know how to get it to be high-quality, don't be deceived, don't be deceived 😭😭😭

Open a building

Xianyu has opened a new book, 55, to rebuild the glory of the harem, Xianyu is bound to

Run quickly, write Xia Liu and start writing more and more💩 It's just nonsense

Itchy stuff written by a newborn, wasting my day

It feels like opening high and going low is +1, and there are many logical contradictions, book-eating and other phenomena for the subsequent plot. 1. Zhou Qingqing was originally one of the three strongest men of the human race. He can arm-wrestle with the demon prince, and eating books for the subsequent plot has become the middle stage of ascension. 2. In order for the protagonist to behave smoothly and live a difficult life, the IQ of passers-by is forcibly reduced. From the ruined peak to the bullying of the protagonist who has no backing... The master is gone or not. The identity of the Ascended Direct Successor is still there. The passers-by are all "happy and grudges" in the world, so that for some small profits, it is very illogical to set up a mine against an Ascended Realm that cannot be "bullied". 3. I am not good at national war but I like writing, and I forcefully turn my characters into military characters. Logically speaking, according to the patch settings, everyone who ascends will be killed by military formations, and it is impossible to develop into the structure of a sect affiliated with the dynasty. The victory or defeat between the top sects still depends on the high-end combat power However, the soaring and random killing cannot write the national war that the author likes. Leading to soaring to the bad streets 4. Selective settings. Due to the character of the protagonist's master who protects his shortcomings, the demon prince has been murderous several times and has been fine. The Ghost King told the world that the protagonist was his husband, but no one remembered this setting. Returning to the setting that highlights the protagonist's smoothness, eating books + lowers the IQ of the demon prince. Praise the protagonist for knowing how to advance and retreat, so that you have no reason to kill him. However, according to the setting of eating, after killing him desperately, there will be a two-sided war, and you will also suffer mortal revenge. From the perspective of giving priority to nieces in all matters of state, it is impossible to be so reckless. In order to prevent hidden dangers, going to a dead end now is completely a gambler's thinking In comparison, the previous game was to take care of the master who was "seriously injured" to protect himself, which is reasonable when the confidentiality measures are good enough. The re-creation of characters in this work has led to many problems such as overconfidence and inconsistency, which are much more serious than those of Wen Riliang next door. It's really disappointing, please watch out for another one.

I've read three hundred chapters. Why is the protagonist still such a loser that he can't even protect his junior sister? ? ? What about the protagonist's growth?