A Journey of Rebirth and Beauty

Nagging. It's not like writing a book, it's like keeping a running account, and there are a lot of incomprehensible notes, just a bracket or a few meaningless words.

I personally like novels where the heroine is Peggy. I have read more than a hundred chapters, whether good or bad. But after the hero and heroine got together, the writing started to be really good. But the more I read, the more I felt something was wrong. I even thought that the hero was gay, otherwise a normal boy would not be able to do such a thing. I can identify with other women who are infatuated and single. But Peggy is your girlfriend. She is a girlfriend that everyone in your friends and family can identify with. So many beautiful things happened to you, and you even changed clothes together. After the heroine hinted, the hero is still in love. In my eyes as a boy, this is not as simple as being an idiot. It is an unsupportive behavior due to sexual orientation. As a result, the more I read it, the less I wanted to read it. I don't know what the author was thinking, but I'm sorry. I was really disappointed with the plot after more than a hundred chapters of this novel, so I wrote this paragraph. Thank you, author. The heroine of this novel is Peggy, who is very attractive to me. The subsequent plot also makes me feel very poisonous.

When I saw I was in college, I had struggled to read it before. There was no clear main plot, and Goldfinger was as invisible as a pendant. There were several chapters where the protagonist was just a supporting role. The whole book was not interesting. The reason why I am still attracted to read it now is that I want to see what American TV characters will appear later.

The author has good vision

The author, I see that you are still working hard on writing, so I recommend you a similar novel to The Eunuch: Suits, a lawyer who mixes in American TV series. The genre is similar to yours. You can learn from his writing style and it can also be used as a reference. In addition, I suggest that the author read each chapter carefully, word by word, or find friends and relatives around him to read it first and listen to their opinions. I wish the future will get better and better, and the novel will sell well.

This protagonist is practicing the Sunflower Book? How many years have you been dating and you still don't eat meat?

I think this one is the most beautiful

The subject matter is what I want to read. Sheldon is very interesting, but the author's proportion is not enough, and the writing style is not suitable, so it is boring and cannot be brought in. The protagonist is like a marginal person. This is your novel, and your protagonist is the protagonist of the book. The other protagonists of the original work are accessories. You must abandon the original plot and use your main line as the plot. You can add the original plot but don't affect yourself. What you are watching now is the same as the assembly line of the original plot. The narrative is straightforward and has no atmosphere at all.

The hodgepodge that I hate to see the most, you might as well travel through one world after another. Winter melon is not winter melon, and watermelon is not watermelon.

Looking at my tired heart, it is not smooth at all. I feel that the way I write is just like when chatting. The other person says a word every three seconds and pauses word by word. I am so tired. After reading a few chapters, I can't hold on anymore.

Why do I feel that the protagonist has no sense of existence? It's like the author is copying the script and adding the name of the protagonist as a passerby.

Defeat after three chapters. What you said in the comment section is right. The author probably speaks differently from ordinary people, and there are many typos. The confusing language and typos make me feel like I am reading from heaven.

It is obvious that the narrative is not very story-telling and is intermittent. Even a chapter is intermittent. The previous text does not follow the following text. I always feel that there are two or three sentences missing in each sentence.

I actually got sleepy during the day. The author is a master, so I'll say goodbye first.

It's too streamlined and has no explosive points. Instead of reading a novel, it's better to read an American TV series. It essentially tells the plot of an American TV series in words. All the plot conflicts are other protagonists. The real protagonists in this book have a thin sense of existence, and the appearance of new characters is too sudden, giving the illusion of skipping the plot. This is the first time the author writes a novel, so it is acceptable.

This John is not the protagonist at all, he is just a nanny. It's the same without him, and the author writes from someone else's perspective. Or this book has no protagonist

After reading it, I found out that I have dyslexia... I went to treatment.

Book review: "Rebirth of the Beautiful Film Journey" Theme: American drama, daily life, foreign city The first 20 chapters: So far, there are not many poisonous points. Logically, as a new author, it is not bad. The disadvantage is that the language organization ability is not strong enough, and I have no habit of re-reviewing manuscripts. The character creation ability is not strong enough. The Faceless Man is in the new stage. Since it is a fan work, it is mainly reflected in the character creation of the protagonist and has no obvious characteristics.

This is my first time writing a book, so please forgive me if I feel uncomfortable.

I would like to thank all readers for your support. Although my writing power is limited, I am very excited to see that the collection has exceeded 5,000. I would like to thank you again for your support. I will do my best to write it down. Thank you.

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It's been two years since I stopped updating. Time flies so fast.

It's been two years since I stopped updating. Time flies so fast.