Pirates: Admiral Foego

Short and feeble Short and feeble😒

Smoker was still a child when Roger died, and according to the scenes in the anime, he was definitely only six or seven years old at that time. Was he already in the navy at this time?

The book is okay. I read the first few pictures but the setting is a bit off. The Golden Lion is one of the top great swordsmen. The author writes that he is not a good swordsman and has not yet entered the great swordsman. Without the fruits, he is not even as good as the emperor's mate. Another thing is that he is not very proficient in the weapon color and has been entangled with the overlord color. It is a bit outrageous. Mainly because I can't accept the fact that the Golden Lion is not a great swordsman yet. 😰

Slipping away, the golden lion, which had no fruit before his leg was broken, is a good swordsman in the eyes of the protagonist, and he doesn't even have the strength to be the emperor's deputy. This is outrageous.

Aren't there a few Sentinels of Light here?

Hey guys, why don't you go find out who was the world's best swordsman before Hawkeye? Dear, I call you "good guy". Former world's best swordsman, you have a good swordsmanship. You are so outrageous. I call you "good guy".

It's a good subject matter. It would be better if the author has read One Piece.

Not to mention the timeline, I couldn't avoid Zefa's fist in the boot camp, so it would be outrageous to kill the injured golden lion alone in the next chapter, I'm so happy

The timeline is wrong, because I really don't remember Smoker's memories very clearly, but my impression is that Smoker watched as a child when Roger was executed. In the crowd, he smiled at Roger and left a deep impression on him. Then when Luffy was executed, he was also surprised and smiled like that man! This is what I remember. If my memory is correct, it's another question whether Smoker has any fruits now. He hasn't entered the navy yet.

Those who were deceived by the introduction, if you mislead readers like this, it will be useless if they come in and leave after just one look.

I just read a few chapters, and the timeline of Smoker is wrong. Smoker, who was still a child, turned into a 12-year-old in Zeffana; Garp's character is wrong, because Roger is full of doubts about the protagonist and speaks aggressively; the strength of the Golden Lion is wrong, and it is still in its heyday. The author actually refers to the theater version, saying that apart from the fluttering fruit, the Golden Lion is not powerful 😒

Why not Sword Demon? Sword Demon is almost turned into a comedian now.

My love is forever lost, everything is ruined

I saw too many bugs in Chapter 3. The author basically just writes without doing any homework. When writing a fanfic, should he at least check it out?

The Ruined King? No no no, is the king of rebellion! Buddha turns an enemy into a friend, Obama beats his teammates, and the pain lasts forever🙂 Just now, the three-star Obama was stunned by the opposite Buddha, hitting him six times without stopping, damn, it takes a lifetime to heal 🙂🙂🙂

What is this thing written about? The combat power is unclear and the physical strength is unclear. What kind of world is that? It's funny that the golden lion only loses physical strength after playing it a few times? I suggest you try describing the anime first. If you can describe the plot of the anime in words, then you can write (the more detailed the description, the better)

Fogo, the giant pirate general. Fallen Star Spirit Dead Pantheon. Aatrox, Sentinel of Light.

Sakura Ju and Kuku are the names of a peerless sword in "One Piece". In the ranking of famous swords, Sakura Ju and Kuku belong to the "Twelve Greatest Treasures" level, ranking fourth. ? ? ? ? The golden lion would be far away without the supreme sharp sword. This is why you still write fanfics

I have never won when playing Buddha. I feel so weak. I always die first in team fights. I have no chance to control the enemy's corpse 😂

Where did the author read Bandit King? Can you provide some resources? Please🙏

I'm a little speechless, the writing is indifferent, you are also a talent

This post is not written rigorously, I don't want to leave (The golden lion was cut too hard)

I think it would be better if it was written as Naruto

The protagonist's ability is more like Tetsuo's, right?

Roger surrendered in 1598

This introduction is a bit like the ability of the Shadow King Cheng Xiaoyu in "I Level Up Alone". By killing monsters or people, you can resurrect the opponent's shadow for your own use.