Pokémon: the Road to Champions for Maximum Level Players

I really couldn't understand it after reading it once. I only discovered a foreshadowing after reading it twice. I feel that the author is not writing a light novel, but a bit like a fantasy or suspense. It is a bit convoluted, but it is still very good. I recommend reading it a few times.

I've caught up with the latest chapter. It's beautiful and the writing is really good, but please give me back my Qina quickly 😭😭😭😭

It's a classic example of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. A bunch of maxed-out elves have to hide their strength and start with newcomers. So why do you write that there are max-level elves? It's a novel that sells dog meat over sheep's heads, and it's a low-quality piece of writing.

Ask two questions, 1. When saving the snake bear in Chapter 19 to Chapter 20, why didn't the protagonist think of using his own lucky egg? It is said that all the Pokémon in the first three generations have been fully leveled, and there should be no Geely Egg 2. When dealing with the sea of ​​people from the mysterious organization in Chapter 20 to Chapter 21, why do you think of the Space God instead of the Nightmare God? If you don't want to kill people, wouldn't it be better to use the Nightmare God? There shouldn't be any, right? Before the Dark Hole was cut, he was also a favorite in the battle.

I haven't finished it yet, only about eighty chapters. During this period, I wanted to abandon the book many times, but I finally endured it and put it on the shelves. In the subsequent VIP chapters, I opened the comment area many times, looked at other people's comments, and convinced myself again and again to "look at it again, look at it again". However, I decided to abandon the book. I thought about leaving it as a comment with "It doesn't look good." But after thinking about it, I decided to just say it casually. (Opening the chapter page again, I accidentally found a chapter with explanations about settings and the like, and found that there were basically all the points I wanted to complain about, so I stopped) The wording of the text seemed not to be mentioned, so I will complain about this. In the green-lined egg, the radiant golden light shone on the cheeks of Fang Yuxuan and Pikachu. Bing Bing Linlin, the glow became more and more dazzling. The brilliant light makes the whole room glow, like golden sand flying all over the sky, or like a shrine appearing on the horizon, with a radiant glow that shakes people's hearts. ——Chapter 86 Huihuan: brilliant. Kunyao: bright shine; shine Bingbinglinlin: bright appearance Yingye: bright appearance. Yanhui: also known as 'Yanhui'. Hot sunshine. Refers to brilliance. Dazzling: The flashing look is very dazzling - I won't explain the rest. In short, a long paragraph of adjectives is used one by one. The uses I can personally think of are as follows: 1. Increase the difficulty of reading (pretending to be profound?) 2. The number of water characters Of course, in previous dynasties, people The writing will use a lot of words that many people in the contemporary era have no access to, do not know their pronunciation, and do not know their meaning, but it is 2022, and the platform of this book is the Qidian Chinese website... Of course, I am not saying that these words can be used anyway, but I want to explain, what is the positioning of this book? It does not mean that the more obscure vocabulary and the more difficult-to-understand sentences there are, the better an article will be. Maybe these are needed for compositions when I was a student, but it is not like using the whole article or the whole paragraph... This will only waste a limited number of words to express an incomprehensible or a meaning that can be expressed in just a few words. "In the green-lined egg, the radiant golden light shines on the cheeks of Fang Yuxuan and Pikachu. Bing Bing Linlin, the glow becomes more and more dazzling." Will The abbreviated sentence of this sentence is "the egg shines brightly, shining all around", or even more concisely it means "the egg shines" The same meaning, then, what is the difference between abbreviated sentences and non-abbreviated sentences? Everyone's article is a complete article, "not a word can be deleted". Of course, it is understandable to write online articles, but the number of "deletable" words is still a lot... Of the two sentences above, the first sentence is a description of the state of the egg, and the second sentence is a description of the light emitted by the egg. However, the first sentence actually contains a description of the egg's glow, "Bing Bing Lin Lin, Ying Ye Yanhui shines more and more dazzlingly", but the rhetoric of the second sentence is superfluous or a foot wrap. The above is just one person's opinion. The main reason is that these words always feel that the author cannot properly "control" them, so that they are like a pool of water, flowing east, west, north and south. The characterization of the characters, emm The gorgeous rhetoric is like a castle in the air, a mirage, and the moon in the mirror. (These three idioms express the same meaning, just like the words used to describe women in articles. Learn and use your ears. Laugh.) This kind of gorgeous description always feels like reading an ancient novel. It just so happens that this book is a Pokémon fanfic. In fact, maybe it would be better to focus on the description of the environment with gorgeous and uncommon vocabulary, or occasionally add a sentence to heighten the atmosphere and lay the groundwork? Comparing Zhihu's evaluation of ancient literary works to this book, they are about the same. Sorry for the inappropriate language. If you have any differences, I am all ears. Above.

When I first started reading it, I wondered if the author's writing style had changed in the future. It looked so weird that I even suspected that I was not reading an elf novel, but a fantasy or martial arts novel. . .

I would like to ask what the author's positioning is for this book? Is it a fantasy novel set in the elf world? Or an elf adventure? In the former case, there is nothing wrong with your writing style; in the latter case, your writing style is too dramatic. . . .

Subscribe to a chapter and leave a message, asking the author if he usually talks like this? 😥I feel like watching the characters' dialogue is like watching an ancient drama.

Author, I feel like you haven't captured the feeling of a full-level boss beating up a newbie 😅 I just bought Sword and Shield two days ago and my friend chased me with a level 100 god. Tsk, what a bastard.

Does anyone have a 200x200 pixel Pokémon picture? I want to use it as a profile picture, so I'd like to thank you in advance. 🙏🙏

I voted, please improve it, I hope it will get more likes than the author again, hehe. 😢😊😌

Three little ones

I'm not being slanderous, but judging from an objective perspective, in fact, most Pokémon fan fiction is about acquiring Pokémon in the same old way, or bringing your own Pokémon, but after that, they are all bland and unremarkable. This one is completely different. It directly unfolds the plot and immediately widens the gap with other fan fiction.

Rayquaza

Cammy Turtle:......

You have more than 400 elves and you have to use mythical beasts? Still struggling for a long time before using it? Then are the other 100 levels all fw? There may be an explanation later but I'm at Chapter 11. Take a look at the evaluation. If the logic really makes sense, it must be a good score and easy to find.

I'd like to give you a monthly pass and give me a nice tip, right? 😁