Hogwarts Starts with Eating a Big Melon

A summary of the magic to be learned in the first year of Azkaban. If you kill a hundred classmates with a giant melon in the duel field, you will be able to enter the next school year.

To be honest, the writing seems a bit too casual and messy.

When I read Chapter 8, I felt that the plot was good, but the author's writing style was a bit too immature, and it easily made people feel uncomfortable. Sirius met Lord Black, good guy, with just one sentence, it was like giving me a kick, and it kicked me out of the world of this novel.

I go, I haven't read HP related fanfics for a long time, why are all these weird and weird ones popping up like mushrooms after rain?,, Is it the influence of Magic Awakening?

Does anyone recommend any books about Slytherin? Why don't you like to go to the Snake Yard? The Snake Yard says it likes pure blood, but essentially it worships power and honor. Even a mixed-blood can do well as long as you are a black magic master like Tom. Wasn't Tom very good at the Snake Yard? He is also a mixed race.

The average gold card level is 10, but one Lightning Storm is missing. From last month to today, I have drawn several gold cards, but they don't give me Lightning Storm, which is outrageous!

I have never played Harry Potter, but I am very grateful to Harry Potter and hope that Harry Potter will get better and better. Roll it up, roll it up.

It's poisoning me, I can tell I'm a newbie

If the preface does not match the postscript, you may not be able to read it clearly the next day.

I am stupid, ah ah ah ah

How many words is one chapter? Four pages is outrageous. I think there are about ten pages per chapter of two thousand chapters. How about you writing a primary school composition with seven or eight hundred words?

I just read this book today, but is it a eunuch?

As we all know... This is how Newt Scamander captured Grindelwald

Is your first gold worth eating a big melon? My first gold is Li Huo

The first gold phoenix, all 77 cards

What is sniffing for? Answer: Used to block the big melon! Many years later, the Nifflers learned to chew giant melons and Voldemort came back again. He was beaten to death by a group of Nifflers before he even entered Hogwarts.

How to say it? The writing is too casual and too simple, and the character interactions seem to just accept the protagonist's attention. It feels so weird.