I Have a Martial Arts Correction System

If the book has five stars, this book can only be rated three and a half stars. I don't deny this by taking a concubine in exchange for martial arts. The description of the main wife later was too deliberate. She happened to be chased and she met her, and she had to discuss marrying a concubine. I didn't think it was necessary to marry her. Is it necessary for the protagonist's talent? To be honest, most people really can't handle this kind of emotional description.

After reading Chapter 53, I personally feel that there is no problem. It can be seen that the overall story is a bit dull. However, after Chapter 53, it begins to enter the beginning of the resurgence of gods and demons and chaos in the world. It may have a climax. Of course, I don't know if it will be good or not, but it should not be poisonous. The author feels that it is stable after all.

It would be much better if we didn't write the heroine. Watching the heroine now is like watching an urban drama, it's just weird.

The system I created does not have any specific explanation, and it feels very watery.

When will it be updated? I don't know how to be a eunuch anymore, do I?

I won't mention the typos, the news for Chapter 20 is out. Were there news broadcasts in ancient times?

Break through when it's time to break through, and don't stress about levels later. There are too many cultivation systems and it's very confusing. It's best to just stick to the three of essence, energy, and spirit.

It looks ok, but it hasn't been updated for two days. . . .

Food and grass, tasteless food, massacre of families, slave background, recklessness.

This main wife is of no help to the protagonist at all, so what's the use of writing it? It's just a drag