The End of the World Female Supporting Role Plays with the Ball in a Group Fight

I can't stand it. Too much poison.

The plot is pretty good, but there are typos and some strange sentence breaks.

Why are there such clichéd novice articles...

Lots of typos😰😰😰

There are a lot of duplicates between 129 and 130, I...

I was surprised. In the original text, the female protagonist came to the male protagonist and his family with a ring. Could it be that the male protagonist believed her? And shouldn't the ring be returned to the original woman's husband? How did she know the ring's function? Also, the heroine is almost at the end of the world. She still has time to eat with her brother-in-law, so why not think of posting a post on the Internet to remind her of the end of the world? There is still time to carry out assassinations, and a Maomao can turn into a unicorn, good guy, into a mythical beast. Do you want to make a blue dragon and a white tiger? Others rush to catch up in the end of the world, but the heroine is quite leisurely and comfortable. There is also a safe. How did the original heroine break open the safe and get the heroine's jade in her previous life? Is it so simple for rich people to have a safe?

. . . The plot is so clichéd and such a novice, please come on, author.

Everything else is fine, but that one paragraph about the little daughter-in-law really makes people avoid it. Although I wanted to write about the male protagonist doting on the female protagonist, the whole story about the little daughter-in-law is really annoying. . . . . . Very discouraging

There are many flaws. The storyline is actually okay, but maybe the author's writing skills need to be improved! There are really too many typos in the article. Moreover, punctuation marks are often marked incorrectly. I suggest the author go to elementary school and learn how to mark punctuation marks!

It looks really good! No need to use your brain, sisterhood and best friends are still reliable, so there is no need to guard against them. The Shangguan family also has a really good outlook on life.

Many people use the word "she", men should use the word "he"

Can I have more? Very pretty

It's a very good article, but can you update more chapters a day?

What to say! Typos, unclear sentences and missing words (a few, but they also affect the reading experience, especially for new books). The overall feeling is good and I can read it. However, the unclear sentences and missing words are too confusing, and the typos in the early stage are also embarrassing. I hope the author can carefully review and correct them. Now, the character of the male protagonist is a bit... Well, different from what I thought at first. After reading more than 30 chapters, I hope the author can work hard! Don't have too many words at the end! ! !