Bai Yueguang, the Villain in the Adult Novel

The author probably lacks life experience, so many plots come out instantly. How can a big landowner in a village of 170 households ask you to steal several boxes of gold, silver and jewelry? If you don't understand, search for Du Niang. The purchasing power of Yuan Datou in the Republic of China.

The heroine is so useless! So many uncles were bullied and drowned. The person who came through the soul actually didn't go back with revenge!

Is this heroine a loser? She has no revenge at all?

There are typos throughout the article. Did the author graduate from junior high school?

The writing style can only be described as a novice's anecdote The plot is also average and not divided into segments It's just average anyway. Farewell

How many pitfalls are there? Is the heroine the Virgin? After being defrauded of so much money, he didn't mention anything about his father when he came back. He didn't go to school to find Lou Baoguo. When he met him, he didn't catch him and ask him to pay him back. Is the eldest uncle of the Public Security Bureau just a show-off? Several people are martial arts masters, but they can't catch an ordinary person? It makes me angry and anxious!

I can barely read the first hundred or so chapters, but the following chapters feel more and more fluid and there is no plot at all. Chapters 112 and 113 couldn't be connected at all. I wonder if the author couldn't write anymore. Liu Jiahui's character changed directly and she was a different person. There is also a big problem with typos and punctuation pauses in this book, such as "this is a good thing", which affects reading.

Lou's father and Man Yue were too kind to Lou Yueru, and their kindness exceeded the boundaries. Although they knew that Lou Yueru would not become a villain, this kind of unlimited kindness since childhood can easily affect a person's mind, causing friendship to rise and hatred to rise.

This punctuation mark. The layers are unclear. Can't get the number right. How did you write it, author?

Emma! I'm exhausted from reading typos all day long.

This writing style and this sentence fragmentation are still amazing even if I can still write them now.

There are many chapters in the middle that don't make sense, but the story is very interesting

There are too many typos and many sentences don't go well!

I feel that the original male protagonist should be weakened when he does bad things, and he can be written as Dabailian, similar to, I really didn't know at the time, otherwise I would definitely stop my mother! What can I do? That's my mother! And so on, no matter how superficial it is, he is still the original male protagonist.

Well written! Come on! An explosive update would be even better! 🙂

Is there a male protagonist and what is the situation

After saving for a month, I can finally watch it for a while.

Typos are tolerated, but punctuation? ? ? Did the author finish coding a chapter without checking it?

It's getting better and better, looking forward to more updates.

Help, does the author have common sense? It's less than ten kilometers, even if it's five kilometers, it would take a normal adult an hour 🤔

This boss is really awesome, on the same level as Kusuo Saiki, right? Even common sense of life can be changed