
After Reading the Book, Our Family Likes to Mention the Script of Cannon Fodder
穿书后我们一家喜提炮灰剧本
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 395k Words
- Genre
- Ancient Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Ancient Love Story
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The details are written in useless places, and the necessary details are simply omitted. The plot jumps too fast and can't be connected.
Your book doesn't look very good. How come you recommended it? Rely on money?
It feels chaotic; the characters are inconsistent. For example, during the wedding, it was said that Qiao Xiaobaicai had great martial arts skills, which was very abrupt and there was no explanation at the beginning; if she was a very strong martial artist, she would be hacked to death and fell into the water before being rescued? He was always said to be the youngest person to be elected, but later he became a powerful martial artist?
The content is seriously broken and the plot design is unreasonable.
You can actually find a land in the mountains that accommodates more than 160 families. It can be self-sufficient, and everyone can move in. What can those daughters-in-law tell their parents' families? Not coming back for four or five years? It's a long paragraph. In reality, it's impossible to give a chance to say two or three paragraphs.
The paragraph is too long, the writing is too detailed and flat, and it is a bit trivial and wordy.