Pay 99 Yuan: I’ll Craft You a Mysterious Funeral

You people all have low poison resistance. I, the Mahayana ancestor of Shen Nong Sect, studied under Old Mo Wei, and the Ten Thousand Poison Technique Mahayana has endured thousands of catastrophes without being destroyed. Just wait, I will come back as soon as I go to Kangkang.

I was very surprised when I saw the introduction. I thought I was seeing a masterpiece, but I was disappointed when I opened it. Originally, this was a cool novel with invisible pretense, which is the most fatal, because the deceased cannot pretend to be pretentious, and it is naturally great to have others do the pretense for the deceased. But if the deceased already knew the circumstances of his funeral after his death, the formality would be gone in no time. It turns into arranging the funeral in advance, and the deceased is pretending, and that feeling no longer exists.

This kind of subject is really boring

There is no need to create so many ugly characters. Wouldn't it be better to be more relaxed? You can be relaxed and moved. There is no need to describe a good person. There is no need to write about the disgusting people around him. It will add a sense of disgust to people in vain. Wouldn't it be better to delete the scenes with these ugly characters? After all, this is not serious literature.

I'm afraid the author is not the first to start from Qidian, so he didn't even look at this, hey

I can't bear it any longer, I will stop here, all you Shennongs, please continue to work hard (I died of poisoning)

Every time it is either a tragedy or in the name of promoting positive energy, it is really boring. It consumes the readers' sympathy once or twice, but if it is too many, it is really boring and can easily make people feel disgusted. This book cannot last long!

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that there is no sense of mystery. The customer calls and the order is a failure. Although there is a system, there should be a system to give prompts or the deceased places the order. The protagonist appears mysteriously.

In fact, the author's writing is a bit tough. If someone else buys a package, and then by various coincidences, it happens to correspond to the package he bought, and the system also shows that the package is completed, and also writes the story behind it, it will be more interesting, and it will also feel a bit creepy, and there will be a terrifying feeling that everything in the world has become a marionette of the system. Anyone from ordinary people to big bosses, or even extraordinary people can fit in, so it's very smooth.

The further you get to the back, the more boring you get. We always drive Maybachs with red flags and so on, and then the old man comes down and bows to say a few words. Can't we change the routine? Also, what the author wrote was ten years ago. Little Japan is so arrogant in China and no one cares about it? I just caught it and gave it to the official, but the wedding can still happen later