Turn Your Life Around from Liaozhai

Are you still cooperating with the hospital? Hide everything that needs to be secretive, and don't be that fool who is honest with you. This fool who strips himself naked is not a saint. He can walk away cleanly, and there should be a clean break here. You shouldn't lead from here, it's against common sense. Some secrets only belong to you. Share the way to death with others.

2 Suggestions: 1. In reality, the transfer of property by a company is a fantasy, and those trashy relatives can really cover up the sky. 2. Don't write about cancer cells in the Xiantian realm and foundation building stage. People cleanse the menstruation and cut the marrow, and all the impurities in the body are gone. Can the cancer cells not be washed away?

It's really uncomfortable to write about reality. Even though I'm preparing to write about reality, it's not easy to write about reality, but it's still a bit boring. . . Will reality come back to life again in the future?

Never choose the best reward, and then forcefully explain it

You are traveling to a lower level through time travel. Going from a higher world to a lower world, is there any point in using it? Just to mix up the plot, these lives should be the same person - Uncle Jiu - Liaozhai

Another fake fairy tale with no fairy spirit at all, why bother?

Do you have to create a realistic plot to disgust people? It's cancer again, it's bad relatives again… I'm so speechless…

The author is not even clear about the relationship between receiving salary and spiritual practice. He has only half-understanding of many aspects, and can mislead people with half a bucket of water. Receiving salary is when heaven records your name on a list, and it has nothing to do with your spiritual practice. Shoulu is the ID card of the Heavenly Court, then Dudu is the ID card of the imperial court. Without Shoulu and Dudu, would a monk stop practicing? Hehe!

To write a protagonist with a higher IQ, the author should let the protagonist show wisdom and behavior that crushes the readers in the three golden chapters, so that the readers will follow the actions of the protagonist without thinking. Once the upper limit of the author's IQ is exposed at the beginning, readers will think about and evaluate every subsequent choice, constantly identifying the author's loopholes, and constantly affecting the evaluation of the plot of the novel, and the cycle continues.

When writing novels, you should have a pleasant point (selling point), and the plot should be reasonable and in line with public opinion. Don't go against the ideas of consumers. The reason why those high-quality products are high-quality products is that they are both reasonable and unexpected. In this way, choosing the most bland choice will not become a climate. Either there are no options, and if there are, you have to choose the most unexpected and surprising ones.

What you wrote feels the same as Gong Dou's... There is not much immortality, but Gong Dou's feeling comes out 😅

I feel like vomiting when I see a protagonist like this asking his relatives to transfer all his property. He is just a legal illiterate and has no reason why the project is wrong.

The previous novels focused on fighting, fighting with the sky, fighting with the earth, and fighting with people. Cultivation of immortals was originally about changing one's destiny against heaven, and those who did not fight would die. Nowadays, the novels focus on being stubborn, which is not willing to take any risks. Just like the options in this book, the choice is always the most stable one. Even if the choice is not the most stable, it is because I have to choose. I want to say that it is still a hairy choice. Isn't it good to directly publish the task?

To cure cancer, you still need to practice spiritual training to restore your emptiness. How can this state be so imaginary?

You just gave me the first chapter 😥

If you can't control yourself when writing about modern times, don't write about it. Usually, you'll just have fun writing a series about slapping relatives in the face by pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. It's very fun at first, but after you read dozens of books that are all messed up with this routine, you'll probably feel sick and tired of it. You must be suffering from aesthetic fatigue. If it doesn't ruin the outline, just change it. This poisonous point will really make you quit.

Astronomy, with systems and rewards. Can't see it directly. A mess.

Predict that every time you choose the worst option, you will choose it.

Opening lightning strike! I have no idea why the author wrote at the beginning that the protagonist's property was transferred. Let's not talk about whether it is reasonable or not. Just say what is the effect of writing it like this? Create a character that the protagonist is suspicious of, bitter, and hateful? Or do you want to advance the storyline? Writing like this has no positive effect at all. Even if you delete it directly, it won't affect your viewing, right? The author's approach is like treating guests to a pile of chocolate that looks like shit before eating. Although it is said to be edible, is it in this river?

After reading more than ten chapters, I have no desire to pursue it. It is a pity to abandon it because it is tasteless. I originally thought it was about spiritual cultivation, but later I found out that it was like making choices in a game, and there seemed to be three options. In fact, you could only choose the first one. The other two options felt redundant and would not be chosen by normal people, which obviously deviated from popular values. I don't know what happens next. Book friends can let me know if it looks good.

There's something wrong with the character setting, it's best to change it. It's toxic, but not too strong.

The book is still so-so, and I am particularly unhappy that this type of book is classified into science fiction. I feel like it should be classified into Xianxia and Time Travel, rather than science fiction and Time Travel. This is a book that has nothing to do with science fiction.

Author, if you can't write a book, then don't write it. Why don't you just find a class? I can't stand this first chapter. Do you think you are in a feudal society and your property can be transferred casually? You must at least understand a little bit of the law before you write a novel. Listen to me and find a class. We will not be scolded.

The level of writing in the Republic of China is poor. When I had a system, I still knew how to assess the situation. When I wrote about Xu Fu, I just jumped into it without any system prompts. I used to know how to be cautious before, but it felt like I was writing by a different person.

How can I put it, the one before it was released was quite poisonous, but after I got over it, the later ones were okay, not too bad at all, even though I watched the pirated version.

Poisonous. . . . . . . There is no cure

Let me tell you when you learned to be under one person.

Ah, my Junko brand chili sauce

The subject matter is still new, it is not a simple time-travel flow, it is okay to watch with a little system flow, but more is not enough

After reading more than 20 chapters, the protagonist is completely a puppet of the system.