Under the Bright Sky

It's so long-winded. It's been more than ten chapters and I'm still going on and on about it. I'm so stubborn because of a woman.

Chapter 20: Conspiracy, skip to Chapter 29 to see the slap in the face. What's in between is not important at all. If you still write like this when you put it on the shelves, then you still have to rush to the street.

I feel that politics are too clear, and the clan has no rights, but it is still a clan, and it will not be without helpers. Even if it is protected by the patent law in modern society, it is not so confident, not to mention that the Ming Dynasty is still an empire. If it's because the protagonist's father is also in the system, it would be a constraint, because you don't have to be too easy when working within the system.

I think the author's Ming Dynasty is very good, but the next few books don't feel like they are on the same level? I think no matter what you do, the most important thing is to summarize experience and lessons, not to mention writing a book?

I made the same mistake as the previous two books. I finished the material at the beginning and couldn't write further.

The biggest taboo in writing novels is complexity. It must be simple and easy to understand

Lj's character deserves to be cool, look at Manli

Brother, please renew Black Gold Overlord or start a modern one.

Far worse than New Empire, not attractive at all

Ice making should be an electric ice making plant that makes large ice cubes, divides them, and distributes them. Rather than making ice from saltpeter. In the first 15 chapters, there are many omissions.

This "equal rights" is particularly funny. Whether you are a commoner, aristocrat, or royal family, the courses for men and women are completely different.

Attacked again? It's quite interesting to go back to the heroic path (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, come on, author. I read two of your books, and the other one is Dark Walker. I feel that the latter lacks passion. There is no romance, Viagra, and bleeding... Etc. That make people laugh unconsciously when thinking about it. Anyway, looking forward to the new work

Reading the old eunuch's books involves taking a big risk😥

The old demon didn't enter the palace, he just went to have an interview!

Is Dacheng Stage 2 or Stage 3? Xiaocheng is stage 1. So what level is a Grand Master?

Maybe I missed something! What a mess I feel now. A bland plot with no ups and downs