Dark Walker of the World

You may not believe it, but I came to be a master because I was reborn in Europe and America 🌹😁

The author's writing was good at the beginning👌 Later, when he was depressed, his writing was very messy Come on, I hope you have a better attitude. The score of this book should not be like this.

This skill setting and combat power division really require careful attention. Fighting skill level 1234 is not as good as junior high, high school or master level. Add some brackets to describe each level. For example, your fighting skills have already begun to show off, you have mastered the martial arts, you are proficient in it, etc. Isn't this more interesting, stylish, educated and less embarrassing than 1234? Also, the setting of first, second and third level martial arts is super awkward. According to the way you write it, if a third level person encounters a second level person, they can't run away. They will definitely lose and will definitely die. If there is no suspense in such a battle, why fight? If a low-level martial artist encounters a high-level warrior, he will just surrender and kill himself. For example, when Kou Zhongziling encountered so many masters in the early stage, why should he fight or escape? He can surrender after comparing the number of levels, so the force cannot be like this Description: Some martial arts are difficult to get started, but getting started requires innate skills, such as the Immortality Art. Some martial arts are easier to get started, but the strength and agility bonus are not bad. Therefore, Kou Zhongziling's early innate state cannot beat those acquired masters who have been immersed in martial arts for 20 to 30 years, because he really loses in terms of energy, strength, agility, etc. This way you write it is more beautiful and reasonable, instead of knowing the result as soon as two people meet to compare levels.

Is Infinite Stream just a martial arts reskin now? No matter what it is, you just want to practice martial arts? What's the point? Isn't it just that by controlling and absorbing the unknown energy contained in food and heaven and earth, it runs in the body, performs a large cycle in the body, compresses it, causes qualitative changes through quantitative changes, and forms the so-called golden elixir Yuanying? Can I find this energy through scientific means? What's so great about using energy? The writing of "Swordsman" "Double Dragon" and "The Condor God" is so bad. I even wrote it and I vomited. How well written it was on FB before it was released. Suddenly it came to Swordsman. "Gun Fighting Converts to Martial Arts?" ! The author's next world is the Condor Shooting, Tianlong, Double Dragon, Low Martial Arts, Ming Dynasty, Yuan Dynasty, Middle Martial Arts, Tang Dynasty and Sui Dynasty, High Martial Arts, Da Qin, Qin Shi Mingyue, Wu Geng Ji, and then turn to fantasy? Jin Yong Gu Long finished writing The Perfect Tomb of the Great Emperor of the Galaxy, covering the sky? Finally, he became the Perfect Perfect Luo Jinxian, consolidated his own timeline, became the master of heaven and earth, and controlled the consciousness of the world? Or become the way of heaven in the world? If you write like this, I might as well go to the fantasy channel and watch it...

When writing novels that travel through different worlds, the focus should be on the real world and the film and television world. Nowadays, the reality of novels and the world of film and television are very average. I'm so kind-hearted that I always want to skip chapters. When talking about the world, I always write more about the world of time travel and less about reality. It would be better to focus on world adventure if I focus on something like Samsara Paradise. I rarely write about the real world. In fact, it's good to write about original worlds. Nowadays, famous film and television works and animation works are almost finished. It's so hard to write well. In fact, there is no creativity that can stop us from coming up with ideas. (Write less about China, focus on Hollywood, be careful of the 404 master 😁😁)

，， There is no shortage of money or power. Can't we develop steadily? Wouldn't it be okay to take an IQ test and then do scientific research? It's not like there have never been such super geniuses in history. If they had to be exposed in front of the whole world, they would just point at themselves and say, I have super powers and I am special. Even if it was exposed, a few small private research institutes sent some people out, and after the counterattack, they were exposed to the media in various ways. Knowing that your pregnant wife is surrounded by relatives and friends, you still travel around the world, take so many dangerous measures, and co-operate with the American police, just because you are afraid that the US government will not detain you. In short, what I wrote above is quite good, but it is extremely poisonous from the moment the ability is exposed.

When I read Chapter 25, Pig's Knuckle chose the energy point, and it was no problem to meet this separate option. But since there is something better, something more suitable. Why not? Zhutianliu, what is the most important thing about crossing the flow? It's not immortality, it's not the skills, it's the brain. Especially without the capital to push horizontally. The brain comes first. Reasonably pave the way and lay out the road ahead. I will add more later.

When I saw the second volume, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I just deleted it and it was also written by Zhutianliu. I wrote about doing charity work and almost died... Now another person appears who is fighting the system. Why can't we use the whole whiteboard system and write stories well to get rid of all these moths?

The book has been deleted. There is no connection between the story and the story. If the real-life plot is deleted, there will be no sense of violation. The author wants to make it more profound. But the problem is that Infinite Streaming is originally the tone of a refreshing article. You are writing your thoughts here, and you are not talking about it, and you are superfluous.

At the beginning, you have to write something that is a big hit to attract people to come and watch it. Later, you can replace it with old TV series or old movies from the past, preferably TV series, such as "Snowflake Goddess Dragon" which was a big hit in the past. You have watched it and then almost forgot about it. If you write better, it will definitely become a hit. In fact, the main problem is writing style. Why do some people write so many people when others write like this? Or someone else has written something new, like those who follow the plot, why should I read your book? I can memorize the plot, so I would rather spend money to read your book than watch a TV series.

To be honest, the protagonist has too many concerns and is not suitable for the setting of a time traveler. When there are more relatives, there will be more things in reality. When there are more things, there will be more time in reality. When there is more time, there will be more cases of pretending to be 13 and slapping someone in the face. The more pretending to be 13, the more beauties will like the protagonist. When there are more beauties, all the men you meet will be enemies. When there are too many enemies, you will start to pretend to be 13 and slap you in the face again. Then the plot started to become cliche, or boring, and finally made me die of poison! ! ! ! !

The real-life plot in Zhutenliu is really boring. In the beginning, it may have some relationship with the protagonist, but it is not necessary. In the early stage, the protagonist is weak and can only make do with a few chapters. By the middle and late stages, the protagonist has completely destroyed the star and created the world. In reality, he has to be forced to get married by his parents, and the scene when he goes shopping with his girlfriend is too disgusting.

1. When fighting against the system, there is always a system trying to harm you? 2. I always emphasize that if I travel too much, I will have a nervous breakdown, so why don't I wear a coat? 3. If you don't read the copy, why are you mentioning it? How many words are there? 4. The main world deliberately exposes its abilities and wanders around. What kind of brain circuit... 5. Engage in scientific research in the main world... Not to mention anything else, the protagonist is purely mentally ill.

After reading the remarks at the end of the volume, I have something to say to the author 🤫 The author said, "Whether the level name is low or not, whether the system is intelligent or not, it doesn't matter. What matters is whether the story is well written and whether people are willing to read it." But there is one thing. To write a good story, you, the author, must let people see it first... It was third-rate, second-rate, and first-rate from the beginning. I wonder how many people will be defeated there, right? Besides, this is not a pre-set plot and outline like [the system is intelligent]. Obviously, if you really want to grade, you can use regular numbers instead; Obviously, this third-rate, second-rate, first-rate has nothing to do with the plot; Obviously you also know that many people think this kind of classification is poisonous... (Those who are reading now Readers don't need to tell me that they don't think it's poisonous. There are many people who think it's poisonous when they see this kind of third-rate, second-rate, first-class stuff. In fact, everyone has their own preferences, just like some people can't accept that the system has intelligence, but they can't change the plot and outline because of it, right? It all depends on the author's choice of audience for the book. But the key point is that this "level name" does not have to choose the audience at all? It is obviously not related to the plot and does not match the style. It is also known that many people think this name is poisonous. Why does it have to be written like this? ) So, why does the author have to classify it as third-rate, second-rate, and first-rate? And it's not just a quick glance, it will be shown again every time the skill level is displayed... 😅 Is this completely harmful to the book? PS: I feel that this logic is not something that the author cannot understand. But the author has a kind of "literary youth-style stubbornness" 🤫

It feels like the protagonist is traveling just for the sake of time travel. The power of the dungeon world cannot be taken away. He will go crazy if he has too much knowledge or even memory. It feels like the protagonist's struggle is completely meaningless.

Why don't you write around the protagonist, and instead assign tasks around the plot characters?

In the real world, we still engage in scientific research and make troubles. Originally, it was enough to be a star and boxing. If you do this, it would be better if there is an outline behind it, but if there is no outline behind it, I guess you will collapse later.

One thing I really like about the author's writing is that it has an impact on the protagonist's spirit after going to another world and coming back. I feel so embarrassed when reading other novels of the same type. It affects me even if I fall in love or break up. After going through a period of life, my character has not changed at all. After reading the author's book, it's not very acceptable for me to read other books. . . .

Just boxing, writing and singing makes me sick to death😠

Why can't you write a good story about fast travel? Is it high-end to compete with Goldfinger's wits and courage?

The author of the plot is very good. I suggest that the author can focus on this. The upgrade level is not important. For example, the abilities of the protagonists in the Heavy Rain Movie World private customization and the All-Heavens and Dragons system are not very high. Although their plots are inevitably a bit weak now in the later stages, they cannot hide the outstanding performance in the past, which is why their results are so good. The author believes in me. If I write the plot well, my grades will definitely not be bad. My reading potential is very accurate. An author I had a good chat with before asked me whether it was better to write about heroes or literary copycats for a new book. After reading the first few chapters he posted, I asked him to write about literary copycats. Now I have ordered 6,000 yuan each, with manuscript fees of tens of thousands, and I have just avoided the previous wave of 404s. Isn't this kind of advice good to him!

I just want to say, can the protagonist write a quick travel story? What does a book writer want to do when he goes against his own book? I laughed when I said that the protagonist would suffer from schizophrenia if he went to more worlds. Then why are you writing this kind of book? Wouldn't it be over if we changed the subject? The theme of quick travel is to make people enjoy watching it, watching the protagonist flex his muscles in various worlds and gradually become stronger. If this is not the case, it is not called a quick travel novel. Is self-abuse fun? It was uncomfortable for you to write, and even more uncomfortable for us to read. Why bother?

In ancient times, father was called father and mother was called mother. You fucking sister, in ancient times, you called your mother mother.

The author's choice of copy was unwise! When choosing a dungeon, you should consider its popularity, popularity, feelings, whether it fits the plot system, whether it is poorly written, etc. The author's first copy choice was a very poor choice! The same goes for the cheat setting. Using an intelligent system as the protagonist of this book is also not a good choice. The golden finger used by the protagonist to travel through the heavens, the best choice is the magic weapon, followed by the main god space, and then the system. The system without intelligence and dialogue is better than the one with intelligent dialogue. Things without system tasks are better than those with system tasks. Things without task penalties are better than those with task penalties. A purposeless shady thing is better than a purposeful shady thing.

In this picture of Rambo, I feel like the protagonist's performance is terrible. The alternative to killing is to escape! It completely fails to reflect the protagonist's experience and IQ that he has experienced in several worlds for so many years.

Systemic conspiracy theories are old tricks from more than ten years ago. Infinite Stream, which just came out in the past, especially liked to engage in system conspiracy theories, and thought that it was very deep. Life is so busy now, and everyone wants to have fun.

This book becomes more and more poisonous as it is written. Especially since Xiaoao, I feel like a god. Unable to stand it any longer, he slipped away.

Ever since I read the author's Ming Dynasty, I can no longer read other time-travel farming stories of the same type.

The writing of the main world is very poor, and there is also the person who re-entered the world of First Blood, has no idea what to write, and has no subscription. . .

The author has writing skills in history, gangsters, etc., And recommends several worlds suitable for the style of this book: The Godfather, Goodfellas, Lawless, True Grit, Gangs of New York, The Gangster, The Traitor, The Hateful Eight, The Prophet, Kill the Irishman, Dawn of the Lovers, and The King of Scoundrels, for reference.