After Becoming the Cannon Fodder Female Lead in a Cultivation Novel

To be honest... When I saw that Lingdao Sect wanted to push Shen Qingyi out for marriage, I felt very strange. Although there is marriage in the cultivation world, it is so similar to the mortal world... It feels so inconsistent that I can't stand it here. The future direction is definitely not what I like...

I wonder what those people who say the heroine is the Virgin are thinking? Did Zhientu report something wrong? The heroine is a cultivator of immortals, not demons. You can say that she is not knowledgeable enough in her methods and did not send the video back to the sect from the beginning. You can also say that she is not strong enough. This is wrong, but there is nothing wrong with saving the villagers who took her in. The senior brother also said that if there were other methods, all the villagers would have died! The heroine's master and brothers think she is wrong because they have always been educated in the world of cultivation and despise mortal life, but the heroine is not the same! I think the heroine insists on herself, otherwise the world of cultivation will just have one more cultivator who uses various resources in nature and believes in the law of the jungle. Then what is the point of setting time travel? In addition, not what most people think is right, nor is it always the way it should be, Xianxia, ​​Xianxia! There are heroes too! The female lead cultivator is really not a demon cultivator.

The worldview structure is the best among recent female videos, and the character system is very good. It is a rare and excellent product that I have seen in the book wasteland! However, I still want to say that I feel that the author's vocabulary or the terminology of fairy novels is too little. Many things can be described more accurately, but the author chose to use other words, giving people a sense of powerlessness in description. As a result, many things in the system feel specious and inaccurate, and there are many typos. There is also the thing that the heroine got, many of which are very powerful talents and treasures, but there is no such thing as the heroine. Then, the author did not systematically record and use the things that the heroine got, which makes people have no sense of reality. It feels like those things are just a formality, except for a few particularly important ones. Also, the growth of the protagonist and many people and many things happened without continuity and in leaps and bounds. Of course, judging from the current female channel Xianxia, ​​it is already very good that such a grand story can be described and attract people to keep reading. I hope the author will write better and better, and will update 30,000 times a day!

This book advocates the righteousness of the family and the country, and the righteousness of the people. I have to say, this is very touching to my heart. The change of mentality of the heroine is very natural and reasonable, the character creation is also very vivid, and the description of the world and so on is also very good. But as far as I'm concerned, although I enjoy it, there are things I don't like about it. First, the master and senior brothers and sisters cared a little too much for the heroine. Even though the heroine went on a trip and had obvious changes, they still didn't realize that they cared too much about the heroine. Do they have no trust in the heroine? The heroine has become stronger. You can worry, but you must also trust her. Second, the plot is a bit single and too compact, all revolving around the main plot. Although there is a description of the monk society, it is very sketchy. Wouldn't it be better to relax and tighten once at a time? Why not add some plot that reflects the customs and customs of the monk world? Moreover, describing the world of cultivating immortals in more detail will not only enrich the heroine's growth experience, but also make the heroine's gold finger look less big. Moreover, in this way, the total length of the novel will also become longer, and each chapter will not be so short (I can't get enough of it, 😭😭)

I felt that the ending was a bit rushed. I didn't know if the heroine was still there at the end, and her master Huo Shen didn't follow up. The first part was still very interesting. I stayed up late to watch the first part, but the more I watched the second part, the more I couldn't understand it.

I'm a little tired from reading it. I feel like I'm just trying to make up the word count and feel like I'm wearing a bandage around my feet. I gave up.

Why do I feel that the writing of Secret Realm of Underworld has become worse after it came out? Chi Yuexi likes it inexplicably. The heroine is even more outrageous. After returning to the sect, she is replaced by someone else. She can risk her life to save unrelated passers-by, but she treats Qi Ling'er coldly when she sees her child again. This sense of separation is like changing someone, not to mention that the author always spreads the world view and writes too much, resulting in hollow descriptions. There are few profound characters, and they are all tool people. After reading more than 488 chapters, I feel like there will be some torturous emotional drama in the future. This book should be over for me at this point. 😒

This book must not have a cp! ! !

The heroine practices the skills of the ruthless path, and then she wants to follow the path of sentience. Shouldn't normal logic lead her to go crazy? , And the original setting felt good, but why did it suddenly become a cliched plot? Although the cow cannot be pressed if it doesn't drink water, it feels like everything is not working properly now.

The content of the book is pretty good, and the ideas are pretty good, but the pig's feet are so good at turning. I was really tired when I saw the secret land of Underworld coming out, and then going directly to the Bixon Continent.