The Girl from Another World's Point of No Return

Don't leave because of a change of marriage, the rest of this book is still good (top and bottom)

Although there is progress from the beginning, how could the author make so many typos, and the indiscriminate writing also makes some obsessive-compulsive disorder book lovers feel uncomfortable. The plot is okay, but the writing technique needs to be improved. The oral habits should be less troublesome and not so "harmful". Moreover, the character creation is also lacking, and the progress is okay. Slow down a little and focus on details a little, otherwise it will make readers feel like "???". Basic things like atmosphere rendering and scene description are not very good. The c language feels a bit heavy. The first impression given by short paragraphs is not very good. The difference between the whole life and the serious plot is not so obvious. The above

It's harmful, I think... If I signed the contract before 100,000 words, and my first month's salary came down, I would dress as a woman. If my collection can exceed 500, I will directly wear women's clothes and dance in the Pure Land.

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