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After reading more than 800 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The role of Mi Yuan is to build a memorial for the protagonist. If you want to write about the harem, write it openly and openly. You can't read it. I want to go to someone's bed to set the tone at the beginning. At the beginning, it says how to treat the female lead and treat her more and more in the future. You are wrong here, or Mi Yuan is written to crawl over the male lead. You can also write about the bed. Here I want to write about a stallion, but here I want to write about being loyal to the heroine. Why do you need your wife to help you get other women into your bed? In a certain chapter, it is probably written that Mi Yuan is attacking your inner defense line. Your wife and children are just bricks building a wall, and they are still crumbling. Why do your wife and children have such little weight in your heart? If a woman is nice to you, you want to sleep with her. Is it because your real wife is too strict with you, or is it because your wife has blocked you, or are you an unsociable person? Write down your inner thoughts in a novel, and just write about emotions like this. Your wife and children can do whatever you want. To put it mildly, it's a harem, but it's morally corrupt. It's written in such a ridiculous way. It's so disgusting that I stayed up late at night to talk about it. It made me feel bad and depressed. If you're planning to read this book, stop reading it when you read the review. This book doesn't deserve to be on your bookshelf. Thank you.

I gave up, this Mi Yuan is really artificial. There are no full-fledged characters and necessary writing techniques. The psychological description with so many words is neither fish nor fowl compared to the stream of consciousness writing method. It is forced into so much space and is really unbearable. Moreover, there are many errors in the background description and words and sentences in the book. Even if it is a cool article, it cannot be so outrageous, and it is not even as good as Crooked God of War. I thought the previous ones were quite thoughtful, but the more I read, the more disappointed I became.

I found that the biggest problem with this kind of novel is time. It only takes half a year to go from collecting rags to building a romantic street and then contracting a factory. Production heats up quickly, and the second generation heats up quickly, including electric kettles, water dispensers, and rice cookers. It only takes half a year? ? ? The time in the novel is not twenty-four hours a day, right?

What this mistress wrote is really disgusting

Drive high and go low, what the hell, do you need hundreds of chapters to prepare for a slap in the face? Suspense can be left, but excessive suspense will be rubbish.

There are many books about people who were reborn in the 1980s and then made their fortunes. This book is a good read to pass the time. We all have opinions about Mi Yuan, so just skip it and it won't affect your reading. What I want to say is, couldn't you review it carefully when you finish writing it and send it out? There are duplications before and after, or there are errors in the names of people. This is really inappropriate.

The mother-in-law, Chen Hongying, is so disgusting. She always makes disgusting comments. At first, she forced the protagonist to divorce. She also went to the hero's father, who was in poor health, to make trouble, forcing the hero's mother and the heroine to kneel down. Later, she forced the heroine to lend 80,000 to the so-called mother-in-law's family. It was really speechless, a mess, and abandoned.

The first few words in this book are ridiculous!

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The Wandering Earth and The Three-Body Problem are both hard science fiction. Lu Xiaorong knows nothing about it. Even if you listen to the whole book, you may not be able to copy it. I can agree with the others, but I can't accept this. It's very unscientific.

If you want to get into the trap, please read Chapter 184 first. In an era when the so-called "kissing" of one's mother's family or not, the common salary was thirty yuan a month. The mother-in-law threatened her daughter by denying her daughter the right to invest her family's eighty thousand yuan in her uncle's children, and then return it with twenty thousand yuan in interest in three days? ! In an instant I reached saint time! Does the author himself know how much 80,000 yuan is today? According to the ratio in the book, it is nearly 6 to 7 million. I borrowed 6 to 7 million from relatives. I don't need an IOU to pay it back. This mother-in-law is still an ordinary factory worker. The money is like a book from heaven. I feel nothing at the moment. Goodbye. Next time, I will think about the details before posting. It's so cool that you should be closer to reality. After all, you are writing about rebirth, not the son-in-law of a dragon king.

Either you fall in love with Mi Yuan in the first hundred chapters, or you break off the relationship. Who wants to watch your rubbish emotional drama and the psychological drama of Mi Yuan at every turn. In the introduction, Lu Xiaorong becomes a female supporting character in the later part. The author went off track in the later part and I can't read it.

The only failure is that Miss Mi. A third party intervened and it took so much writing to write about her psychological activities. If she really intervened, I would give up the book. It is so disgusting. I have read more than 700 chapters and have no good impression of this person named Mi!

Mi Yuan is a failure

Before his rebirth, the protagonist was a master with many years of experience in home appliance repair. It is reasonable to rely on craftsmanship to make the first pot of gold after rebirth. Going forward, where can a serious maintenance master have nothing to do and can clearly remember the plot content of The Three-Body Problem, Harry Potter, and The Wandering Earth? Lu Xiaorong is just a factory girl who graduated from high school and joined the factory. Based on a rough plot, the writing surpasses the original version? Mo Yan is possessed. The creation of Paris Street is not a big problem and is barely logical. However, the mother-in-law throughout the whole story is outrageous. When the son-in-law just started his career, he directly threatened his daughter to deny her recognition and loaned money to her cousin. The amount was huge, so don't even think about how much the 80,000 yuan back then was worth today. Even if it is 80,000 yuan now, my entire net worth is only this amount. An inexplicable cousin has to borrow money if he says to borrow it? The heroine was still soft-spoken, so she just borrowed it, which was a serious case of mental retardation. Moreover, the mother-in-law continued to follow up. After contracting the hardware machinery factory, she also wanted to be the director of the factory. Until the end of the book, the mother-in-law only played a role in causing trouble. After every few chapters, an ordinary person who has socialized with someone, or a rich second generation from Hong Kong who has nothing to do and has never seen a woman, comes to pester the protagonist's wife or mistress, and then the protagonist directly calls his parents. Although some things cannot be written clearly, please pay attention to the timeline. Hong Kong returned to China in 1997. It is not surprising that you, a mainland boss, went crazy over there and were beaten to death by unruly people in the street. The logic is too confusing, and the previous text often conflicts with the following text. It is tiring to read without thinking.

Forcibly writing several mistresses as heroines. If I keep writing, maybe there will be a few more threes.

After reading dozens of chapters, I gave up. To be honest, the author's writing is not bad. This mindless plot, this funny love rival, a college student in 1984, is still in a high position, misses other people's wives, and unscrupulously breaks up other people's families so that he can take over. The mother-in-law is also brainless. Author, you are here to make fun of me. This is the 21st century. I really can't stand Huanzhugege's mindless love.

Author, please note that we cannot tolerate the existence of mistresses. Why don't you say that the scumbag man who bought a house and lived with Mi Xiaosan has committed adultery and bigamy, and the illegitimate child is the evidence of the crime. Mi Xiaosan has committed bribery by accepting things from his collaborators. The author has been using Mi Xiaosan's inner drama to guide readers in an attempt to clear up Mi Xiaosan's involvement. The fact that classmates hook up with their classmates' husbands means that the occurrence rate of mistresses is higher than that of his wife Lu Xiaorong. The author supports teaching everyone that women can poach and get involved in the families of their friends, but can men attack their wives' friends regardless of their wives and children? The author will suffer backlash sooner or later for a poisonous article with unhealthy views.

It doesn't fit the logic of the 1980s! Home appliances are updated too fast, and the whole world is not that fast!

1. For Lu Xiaorong! 2. For Lu Xiaorong! 3. For Lu Xiaorong! It is recommended to change it to: 1. In order to support the mistress! 2. In order to support the mistress! 3. In order to support the mistress!

Mi Yuan is really disgusting, she must be pregnant. The author is really imaginative in order to let Shen Lin have an illegitimate child.

Only 100,000 yuan will be awarded to scientific researchers for their achievements. Let's look at celebrities. This 1 million yuan per person

Mi Yuan is so disgusting, a high-end green tea, no matter how clean she is, can't cover her up as a bitch, a mistress can't help, so she is holding back, and always complains that she didn't meet the male lead earlier, why, can you like it if you haven't been reborn? She stole a child and can still be great, she is a typical host who is a bitch, and can still move her heart, and she can jump directly when she is there. I really hope that the author eunuchs her, and even if he can't, he won't write a lot about her. It's super disgusting.

Mi Yuan is so disgusting, can you please stop writing?

It's not worth paying to read. It's already been tested. The outlook is not positive. It's a novel with negative energy and poisonous writing. It uses the character of a loving wife to attract readers, but it publishes poisonous writings and teaches some negative energy and poisonous writing. It gives the scumbag male protagonist a wife-loving persona, but allows readers to see how he becomes a back official and raises a mistress. The scumbag male protagonist in the article does business and coaxes, helps the mistress who interferes to drive away the suitor, and also attacks the suitor's company, and his wife. Even though his wife had warned him, he still had an affair with Mi Xiaosan, refused to stop, acted like a bitch, and went to Mi Xiaosan's house alone. After drinking, he went to bed with Mi Xiaosan and even got a child out. Every time he did some awesome business, he let Mi Xiaosan out to hook up with the scumbag hero. His appearance rate was higher than that of the scumbag hero's wife Lu Xiaorong. The author also gave Mi Xiaosan a rich heart and wanted to clean up his innocence. Mi Xiaosan, so many inner dramas can't wash away the fact that he interfered in Lu Xiaorong's family and hurt Lu Xiaorong. The scumbag male protagonist also bought a house elsewhere to raise Mi Xiaosan and his illegitimate son, as well as Mi Xiaosan's parents. Mi Xiaosan's parents knew that Mi Xiaosan interfered in other people's families, but they didn't stop her and supported her. It's so wrong. A mistress who forcibly interferes in other people's families can still be treated kindly, cheating. There is a good end for people. The scumbag man also asked the company he conquered to donate a house and shop to Mi Xiaosan. Lu Xiaorong will not come back even if he files a lawsuit. It is really a poisonous article with negative energy and evil outlook. Does the author teach people to use any means to force their way into other people's families and live a double life? The author has evil outlook and spreads poisonous articles, which will come back sooner or later! No one can be immune to it!

It has tested the waters. It is a negative-energy poisonous novel. It uses the character of a loving wife to deceive readers into reading it. However, it publishes poisonous articles and teaches some negative-energy poisonous articles. It writes the mistress as a good person and gets what she wants. The author is the only one. I read this novel last year and read it because of the character of the loving wife. It was really good at first, but the more I read the novel, it became more and more wrong. The three views later became more and more abnormal. In addition to talking about doing business, it also taught people to meddle in the homes of classmates. The male protagonist is even more disgusting. He buys a house in another city to support his mistress. He also rectifies the mistress's name and gives her property that the original wife cannot recover. He also helps the mistress' family start a business. The original wife's mother-in-law's family is miserable. Working hard for him, isn't this teaching bad things? A mistress and cheater who interferes in other people's families will have a good end. People who follow this book will bring many evils to this society. Isn't this society in chaos?

I just want to pass the time in my free time. As a result, I spent half an hour in the comment area. It's so hard to open a harem, and you have to use copywriting fraud to trick people into it and cause them to die. A person who regards his wife as his true love, only for his wife, in the end only regards his mistress as his true love. My wife will help me, and my mistress will enjoy the happiness. Why is it so important to have a harem? It can't be done simply. Why does the copy say everything is for the wife, but the content says everything is for the mistress? I feel like the male protagonist is a green tea bitch, so no wonder he likes the green tea bitch mistress. I hope the author can wear the book and wear it on the male protagonist's wife🙄

Either the author changed people halfway or wrote with different people, or his personality split. Here are some obvious points. 1. Conflicts in the plot and characters, cool writing can be exaggerated, I personally can accept the exaggeration of character behavior or the development of things, but you have to be consistent before and after. Why is it that Shen Lin talked about the physical examination for employees later as if it had never happened? Why was it that when Zhong Tianyang was promoted and transferred, Shen Lin told him the plan once and he couldn't remember anything later? Why did Shen Lin talk about it again? Why did Mi Yuan's parents clearly have already I have dealt with Shen Lin before, but when we met again, it was as if we didn't know each other; why did the daughter Mi Yuan gave birth to at the beginning become a son later; why did Liang Jialuo initially set her age to be older than the male and female protagonists, but later she became a younger sister; Xiao Rong's uncle's family obviously lived in Xiangjiang, and when Shen Lin had such a big incident in Xiangjiang later, they would not mention it to Xiao Rong's parents at all. Why did Shen Lin feel that the news could not be spread? There are too many such examples to list one by one. 2. The description of the female supporting characters. How did I feel when I saw the middle and later stages? Are they really the female supporting characters? What is Lu Xiaorong, who is supposed to be the heroine, doing? At the beginning, it was clearly written that the husband and wife supported each other and made progress together. Why did the second sentence say that Xiao Rong was not very involved in company affairs and was offline for a long time? If I hadn't watched it from the beginning, I would have thought that Shen Lin and Xiao Rong were just a couple on the surface. Later, Mi Yuan, Liang Jialuo and Fang Xiaomei played more roles than Xiao Rong. Since Xiaomei is purely Shen Lin's assistant and has no emotional scenes, we don't need to talk about it. But Mi Yuan and Jia Luo are different. Let's talk about Mi Yuan first. Many people are disgusted with her because of the third party issue. In fact, she was relatively restrained in the past, and has developed to the point where she deliberately goes far away from Shen Lin in order to keep a distance. Why did Mi Yuan's line go crazy later when Xiao Rong became a person who was pulled out when needed and not found out when needed? Mi Yuan was arranged to accompany and comfort Shen Lin when he was almost bankrupt. After having a child, Yuan Leaving Shen Lin alone to conceal her upbringing, and even blocking Shen Lin's gun in times of crisis. Once this kind of plot is written, there is no turning back. She cannot be ignored, but it is not easy to arrange. In the end, it ends with such an outsider's identity, and Xiao Rong should know that he just sees through it and does not tell it. What kind of trouble is this? If you are serious about writing it, don't write about how Xiao Rong and Shen Lin are in love at the beginning. If you write If Cheng Xiaorong was just a marriage arranged by a snobbish mother and Shen Lin didn't have a deep relationship, then everyone would actually be more accepting of it. Or you could just let Shen Lin be single and let them compete fairly. Why did you write a development that makes everyone uncomfortable? Dear author, do you have a grudge against the character you wrote and want to abuse the character? 🙂; It is indeed set that everyone except Shen Lin looks down on her. She is even more straightforward than Mi Yuan, but it is hidden by her carefree personality. According to the author's later writing, she was spared because it was completed, otherwise she would just be another Mi Yuan; Oh, there are also Zhong Qing and Zhang Jingqing. Although they did not appear as much later, it can be seen in some fragments that the author also wanted to write in that direction but was stopped by the completion. Next time if you want to write multiple main female characters, please don't arrange the identity of the male protagonist as an affectionate married person, please, please 🤔 3. World view issue. After writing the first paragraph, I suddenly felt that the world view is just a small problem. In the later period, the time will actually be the early 1990s, but just treat this as a fictional world view and there is no need to completely substitute it into reality. 4. There are too many meaningless characters. Some characters just change their names and identities within the same set of templates, repeating the plot of "pretending to be cool and then being slapped in the face and finally being defeated", and will never appear again in the future. Others are ordinary people who have a relationship with Shen Lin who come to ask for help and then solve the problem easily. It is enough to write these things a few times before. Everyone knows that Shen Lin is such a high-ranking player, so it is really unnecessary to do this. One moment, a young man with a promising future appears out of nowhere. He has nothing to do but pester other people's children and even slaps his mother's nose in his face. The next moment, a poor old classmate appears out of nowhere. Oh my, I really need to perfect the main characters if I have this time. 5. Why did I finish watching it after it felt so uncomfortable? Because I have obsessive-compulsive disorder🙂

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 62. The former factory director retired due to illness only half a year ago, his son was fired by the current factory director, and his daughter-in-law is going to be transferred to the boiler room? My biological mother is acting like a shrew and wants her daughter to get a divorce? The author lacks understanding of the energy of the state-owned enterprise director who was born in 1984! Seeing the protagonist selling things at the gates of several nearby universities shows that at least in urban or provincial capitals, a factory director is at least a deputy director or director. The director level of a large factory is normal. If he retires due to illness for half a year and the factory does not ask his successor for advice on everything, it is unlikely that his son and daughter-in-law will be treated like this! What's more, the old leaders above the original factory director, the subordinates below, and the newcomers may not be able to figure out the relationship after taking over for half a year. Do you dare to do this? If you are not old enough to retire yet, just half a year's sick leave will not be enough! Also, would my in-laws be on such a level?

According to the content, the author should be an old worker in his forties or fifties, but after reading the subsequent updates, I don't think it's the same. It's more like buying a chapter outline for 30 words per thousand words and crowdsourcing it. Some of the initial ideas are very good, and the plot is also interesting. However, the crowdsourced content setting is inconsistent, and the number of words is as low as AI. After reading more than five million words, it is just a running account, and it completely loses the intention at the beginning.