Beginning at Hogwarts

According to the style of Harry Potter, there is only one transfiguration spell. Change it for me!

I think it's quite interesting, but the heroine of this book is probably Hermione again. I personally think it would be better if you don't have a heroine in this book.

The author is not sure whether he has read the original work. The little wizards were discussing how the Sorting Hat sorted the houses on the train. It is tradition for adults not to tell little wizards how to sort their houses. How did they know about the Sorting Hat, and Neville actually said on the train that grandma wanted to enter Slytherin. Neville's parents were tortured by Death Eaters and lost their memory. How could he join Slytherin? Cloud reader? When writing fan fiction, at least understand the novel

Neville's grandmother wanted him to go to Slytherin? ? ? ? ? ? ? The second design should also respect the original work.

It was written inexplicably. The author starts to entertain himself with literature and art at every turn. It is a good book, but reading it is like having an Olivier cake. Really, as I continue writing this, the readers will run out.

The Western world of Harry Potter is full of Chinese-style Taoist language and principles. The innocent middle school student and the late stage of literary youth want to pretend to be classy and make readers feel embarrassed even to their toes. 😰

After reading a few chapters, I feel so awkward. To be honest, most of the people who read HP fan fiction are fans or people who are very fond of it. I only read the first physical book of Harry Potter when I was thirteen or fourteen years old. I am now thirty and have read countless fan fiction. In fact, looking back from the current perspective, the original work is just that, a bunch of bugs that cannot be explained, plus foreign literature is naturally unfriendly to Chinese people. Obstacles, but this does not stop my love. What really attracts me to this day is actually the setting of the world view. I don't hate secondary settings or adaptations, because this is unavoidable in fan works. On the contrary, I quite like it, because fan fiction is writing a different story using the world view of the original work, but at least it must talk about some basic rules. Western novels and our Chinese fairy culture have their own characteristics. There is a natural sense of fragmentation, and the author's writing style is not very good at handling it, so it gives me the feeling that I am embarrassed to watch. The author has to figure out a problem. What you are writing is not a fan of the fantasy or western fantasy novels in Qidian. These novels also have magicians or wizards, but the core of these novels is still written with the core of Chinese thinking, so the introduction of fairy tale settings will not make people read. Awkward, in fact, writing HP fanfiction is very tiring, and the only people who read it are those who basically know the settings and characters very well. If the author is not a die-hard fan, he has to look up a lot of information to detail the details bit by bit. During the writing process, he will break the original work bit by bit, and then reshape his own story. If the shaping is not good, the book will basically fail, because the audience is only limited, and these readers cannot be retained, you know Finally, I have recently discovered that since the game Magic Awakening has become popular, a large number of HP fans have appeared at the starting point. I glanced at them all, and the demons are dancing. In the end, I found that there are almost none that can be read, and the ones I wrote before can be read. Although I also play it, that's it.

It feels like the author did not follow the original setting, and the private settings were extremely serious. For example, in the sorting of Hogwarts (general young wizards do not know how to sort the houses, the author directly asked other young wizards to tell them how to sort them by hats), Neville's grandmother actually asked Neville to enter Slytherin? ? ? I was completely confused. In short, the private setup was so serious that I (who pay attention to the party) couldn't stand it at all.

Snape character drawing.

I am extremely embarrassed to see the combination of Chinese and Western styles😳

It's best for the author to have read the original work. The movie has many innovations that were not found in the original book, such as the opening dances of the other two schools in Goblet of Fire. And there is no way Neville's grandmother would let him enter Slytherin, after all, the person who drove his parents crazy graduated from Slytherin.

Retreat, this book starts to amuse itself

Either you write all in vernacular, or you write all in classical Chinese. The introduction is good, but the content is extremely uncomfortable. The style of the Harry Potter world is really not suitable for the style of classical Chinese. The conflict of styles makes it hard to stand.

In the world of Harry Potter, using classical Chinese to describe it is really weird, but it is acceptable. However, I feel that the author does not know some details of Harry Potter very well. If you want to write a Harry Potter fan novel well, some details must be paid attention to. For example: It is a racial tradition not to tell the little wizards about the sorting method. For example: the sorting list is in the order of ABCD of last name. It is impossible for the protagonist Black to be Weasley, followed by Granger. Writing details well is a prerequisite for a book to be successful in the long run.

I couldn't stand it until Chapter 10. . First of all, young wizards don't know about the Sorting Ceremony, whether they are pure blood or Muggle born, Malfoy, Ron, and Harry don't know. Don't even know. Secondly, Neville wanted to go to Hufflepuff. He couldn't go to Slytherin. His parents were tortured crazy by Bella. . . Neville had a bravery that he didn't even realize he had, so he went to Gryffindor. The author of this book is just writing nonsense.

I doubt the author has read Harry Potter

The Western world uses Chinese Weird So weird The key is that it is half-written... Poor writing

A bit of literary youth disease. . . Is it torturing the readers? It's too uncomfortable to watch, and the private setting is too outrageous.

If you are a fan of the original work, you can quit. Since the author has not read the original work, he probably has not watched many movies. Some of the basic settings are not consistent with the HP world, and the characters are a bit OOC. Those who don't care about these poisonous points can continue to pursue them.

It's a very good novel. I won't give it up if I don't.

Come on, author, I'm still waiting for a million words. I'll wait for you for a month, and I won't update for a month. Then I retreated too. In fact, the book is very good

Harry Potter, the Western fantasy novel is written in a Chinese style, awesome! I'm really not afraid of being thrown into the street. People who can read Western fantasy novels hate adding Chinese characters the most.

Is this entering the palace? I was thinking of putting it on the bookshelf to fatten up, and I'm reading it now.

I have collected so many Harry Potter fanfics that I am afraid of confusion.

It's pretty good at first... It starts to get weird after chapter 60... Sigh. Daju rarely appears anymore.

Suddenly embarrassed, not very humorous, not familiar with Harry Potter

Adding a system of cultivating immortality to the protagonist's name is inconsistent. Let me ask you a question, what will the protagonist's son be called?

See the introduction. The flames are raging and the wind is blowing. Shouldn't the fuel bomb be a toad oil flame bomb? Why is it extinguished by a huge fire?

The writing is not concise and too wordy.

In the plot of "Black Magic Awakening", the hooded man turned the basilisk statue into a basilisk with just one move in the secret room. He is an expert and an expert 😏