My Demon God Game

Two suggestions: First, the formula is too old-fashioned and stiff, and the character conflicts are developed too abruptly. Second, just stick to the game genre; otherwise, stop using the game's guise and dragging down the protagonist's intelligence.

This book is not bad, my foot! Can you believe the editor's nonsense? He's just an editor, what does he know? It's really not bad... Don't cut...

It's not a problem with the work itself. New authors don't build a readership; they give up when they see poor results after writing only a few words. Many readers only start reading after the work has reached 400,000 to 500,000 words. Otherwise, they resort to manipulating monthly votes to get their work noticed. It seems many bad novels on the bestseller lists are artificially inflated.

The book wasn't that bad, and it got over a hundred monthly votes, yet it still flopped? Whose fault is it if you don't work hard and persevere? Its popularity was clearly building, and you just abandoned it.

I was the second investor and the first person to post this message.

I will never read a second book by an author who has abandoned their previous work.

I suggest you go to the factory. If you don't stick with it and continue writing books, the results won't be much better; it's a vicious cycle.

It's not easy for new authors to become famous; they have to persevere. I've read many novels that weren't popular at first but were well-written. Whether you become famous depends on whether you can persevere once your work is decent. After all, how many words have you written? You can't expect to soar to the top overnight. It's very difficult. Most of the popular new books are by established authors. Reputation is built up little by little.

Sherry

This is the author's first book, and it's quite well written. I came across the second book, and I hope the author can continue writing when they have time, and that it will be no worse than the second one.