Gravekeeper in Restricted Area

Everything was good in the beginning, and I liked the subject matter and the writing style. But things started to go wrong in the back, especially starting from Equality Paradise, the short-sighted officialdom, the twists and turns, and the two black guns that gave me brain hemorrhage the most. It made me angry🙏🏻

It's not that good, either it's a brainless piece of writing, or it's just digging too hard into a hole and finally being unable to finish it, or ending it in a bad way. The story also tells that the protagonist is at a great disadvantage. I think the development of the story gradually became interesting in Chapter 125. However, at the critical moment, the villain cut off his own escape before giving the protagonist a fatal blow. As a result, he was killed by the protagonist. After escaping, he was killed by his own men. It was very speechless. This villain can be regarded as a strategist among villains, and he can write down the IQ of other villains.

The setting of this book really poked me, but it was too poisonous. Mo Qingcheng had so many scenes that I felt that the previous chapter and the next chapter were not written coherently. I can't stand it any longer. Say goodbye.

After reading three chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It starts with a topic, starts high and goes low, and the plot is mediocre. A female supporting character appears at the beginning, which takes up too much space and transition. This is a failure, and there is no ups and downs of thriller atmosphere. Compared with the supporting characters, there is too little weird foreshadowing, causing the eye-catching weight to shift. Finally, I suggest the author to study the writing technique of "Tao Weird Fairy", which is very good at foreshadowing the weirdness. I won't talk about other things. I hope the author can be more careful in writing the book, and the outline, outline and plot foreshadowing can be more thoughtful.

Some people say that Chapter 1 is poisonous because the restricted area is called "Speechless Village" so you cannot speak in the Village. But at the beginning of the book, it only said that Buyu Village is an unexplored C-level restricted area. It is not sure how to understand "Buyu". It may be that the creatures in the restricted area cannot speak, and the creatures that enter the restricted area will be deprived of language ability. Aren't there many ways to understand it? Why do you have to be unable to speak after entering?                                                                                                                       came into silence as much as we could. The only person who spoke, Mr. Chen, was "a senior explorer who had left the C-level restricted area alive". Except for him, the members of the exploration team did not speak. Is this not brainless? The reason why Mr. Chen spoke may be because he wanted to test the specific abilities of the penalty area, or he simply felt that he was awesome and felt that his strength was enough to deal with the C-level penalty area, but in the end he miscalculated and lost. All in all, it is reasonable for him to dare to speak. Isn't this considered a brainless act of wisdom? Maybe this book does have some bugs, but I hope readers can be more tolerant. After all, it is not easy for newcomers to write books. It would be better if the readers who really don't like it can leave silently. Before leaving, I hope they won't step on me and say "very toxic" or something like that. I really hope that the review section of the book that I think is quite good can be cleaner and attract more readers. Finally, I hope that the author can calm down and write the book, and not be disturbed by external voices. There are still many readers who support you, come on. (The above is purely my personal opinion. I can understand if other people have their own opinions, but there is really no need to come up and criticize me. Damn it.)

It feels like it's about to be cut 🙄

It's a novel that left me quite touched after reading it. I came across the tweets while watching videos a few days ago and immediately downloaded Qidian to read them. I haven't slept much these past few days and spent almost all my free time reading this novel. I haven't written a long review for a long time. I felt a little excited after reading it early this morning, so I wanted to write some. After reading it all, it is undeniable that some parts were really bad at the beginning, but after reading it, I can actually feel that the author's writing style is slowly getting better. I really like this kind of subject matter, and some of the subsequent plots are quite exciting, at least for me they are quite attractive. It's a pity. I was really looking forward to how the author would write out the subsequent plot in his own way. However, regardless of whether the author will continue to write it or not, I will still express my love for this novel here. I feel that the protagonist is quite lonely, carrying so much on his own. He has no relatives, and most of his friends who supported him without hesitation are buried in the past. He has been sleeping for a long time and until now, no one knew or understood him at first. After recovering part of his memory, he could only continue walking on the road that was filled with the lives of his friends and countless others. The scene of making vows with friends is still vivid in my mind, but things have changed. The protagonist is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, seemingly not caring about anything, coupled with his daunting alien identity and monster-like strength, so few people are willing to get close to him. Although he met people who really cared about him on the way forward, such as Yang Xiaowan, he could not escape the shackles of his doomed tragic fate. Personally, I quite like Yang Xiaowan, and Yang Yiyi is also a very cute and tsundere girl. In addition, I also like the characters in the novel such as the Silent Man, Brown Sugar, and Knife. Unfortunately, the characters are not fully fleshed out. It is a pity that the Silent Man was mentioned a few times in the early stage, but the protagonist did not recover his memory at that time. I always feel that the Silent Man will meet again with the protagonist who has recovered his memory later. When reading this kind of novel, there is always a tragic feeling at the end, as if you are also in it, walking with the protagonist through those thorny roads, passing by through the years, seeing all kinds of things in the world, and overcoming the difficulties and obstacles on the road ahead. Anyway, I am still very grateful to the author for writing such a novel. Apart from The Eunuch, it is a pretty good reading experience. I hope the author will get better and better.

Isn't it 5 updates?😡

Woohoo, I came back from school in the evening to review and read a chapter, and it turned out that I was the third one to follow up. Such a good novel (I think it is quite in line with my preferences) won't be too popular, right? Come on, author, I will get a part of the scholarship after I make the model.

Author, please don't be a eunuch, update soon

Let me make it clear that there is no female protagonist in this book, and Mo Qingcheng is not the female protagonist.

There is one thing to say, disgusting readers do have a hand.

After persisting for more than 300 chapters, it was really uncomfortable to read. I thought I was watching an invincible novel, a cool novel where the protagonist is the biggest taboo in the world and sweeps across the restricted area. As a result, the protagonist is either injured or dying, or his strength is completely lost and he is not as good as an ordinary person; I thought that the protagonist was as smart as a monster, setting up shocking plans to plan the past and present, and planning the future. As a result, the protagonist's plan is always outside the situation. All the protagonist's current actions are planned and arranged by others, and he can only follow others' tricks; I thought the protagonist was cold and tough. As an ancient person, he doesn't care about today's people. Facing his former companions and subordinates and watching them die, he became indifferent. As a result, I rescued and protected several beautiful women along the way, and also did the work of nannies and bodyguards. I thought that the main character was a straight man who was focused on his career and had no sense of style. He focused on the plot and had no emotional drama. As a result, the plot was all driven by women. In every story, there was a woman who followed the main character, relied on the main character to protect her, teased the main character, and was jealous I can't hold on anymore, so let's leave it at that.

It really made me feel aggrieved. It is such a good book and I like the writing style of the plot and characters. But I really don't understand why you have to add some disgusting routines to it. It is obviously a perfect dish and can be used for awards, but in the end, you have to add it. Add a few flies and serve it out. I want to eat it but feel disgusting... A powerful protagonist who is very wise, full of planning and layout, and has full strength to save the world But from time to time, a supporting character who overestimates his capabilities will appear squatting on the protagonist's head. Shit, the protagonist showed no resistance and was doing something that was probably to save the world, but was misunderstood, hostile, and obstructed by official officials. He didn't even explain it, and asked me if I didn't tell you. It was really frustrating and wanted to curse There are many ways to promote the plot, but always It was so frustrating that I wished I could go into the book and tell the supporting characters that they should cooperate with the protagonist. I would really appreciate it Oh, there are also some passers-by who were forcibly stuffed in. You are not a story teller, so you forced a smile. Jpg

Suddenly, I discovered that all the previous complaints about the novel had been deleted by the author. I would like to remind latecomers that this novel is likely to be unfinished. Don't subscribe chapter by chapter, but subscribe quarterly or yearly. Otherwise, it will be a waste of blood.

There are fewer comments now. If you have any questions or suggestions, you can say them here. I hope they are more rational and don't curse. To be honest, I am still considered a newcomer and I must have many problems. I will definitely adopt whatever is reasonable.

Could it be that the stone monuments dropped from the sky two hundred years ago are actually tombstones in various forbidden places? And the protagonist is the person guarding the tomb and the biggest boss, so no one or ghost dares to wake the protagonist. Or is it that the protagonist brought many strange things and lost a battle with the enemy two hundred years ago, so now he is closed off and recovering from his injuries?

Shouldn't we say the word "restricted area"? It feels like there is no quality anymore

What is the protagonist of this novel like? Let me give you an analogy. It's like you are a billionaire. You can live very comfortably no matter where you want to live, but you don't want to live comfortably. You only know how to help beggars every day. For these beggars, you have done a lot of things for them and spent a lot of money yourself. But these beggars not only don't thank you You, you want to kill you every day to take your money, you want to have sex with your family, and I humiliate you like this, and you still deal with this and that for others every day I don't know why you, the author, are so disgusting to me. Looking at the plot, it's like my wife was cheated on, because she was so tired and hungry, and I had to buy them food. It's really disgusting.

Idiom Solitaire Come or Not 🙂 Lawless

I have read more than forty chapters, and the book currently has not many words Come in and chat a few words, everyone will read it, and the author will also read it . . . . Stylistic classification, it is considered a restricted area. . This small category did not exist at first. . Now I read a lot of books myself, so I classify myself This type of writing is still a niche even now. The only one who writes brilliantly is Chen Dong. In my impression, he should have pioneered the concept of restricted areas But he does not purely write restricted areas. . In fact, it is a copy of the map one by one. Standard upgrade and monster killing flow. . . . . . The author sets the protagonist to be directly the ultimate BOSS It tends to be a cool article. But I don't feel a good sense of immersion after reading it The current guidance for me is that all forbidden areas know the protagonist The protagonist is the ultimate BOSS with a big cause and effect But the current setting of the protagonist is a bit broken. . . . . According to the background, this is a "high martial arts fantasy" world There are rich powers, monsters, and potions. . But the protagonist cannot be "wake up". . There is a flaw here. It is difficult to present exciting fights Even if there are some, they are all from various supporting roles. . Furthermore, according to this setting, it is difficult for the male protagonist to have an emotional line. . All the excitement depends on supporting roles The author also likes to write various short stories. Use short stories to promote the plot and reflect the supporting roles Introduce various villains to reflect their insidiousness and power . . . . . . . Then the future is clear at a glance. . The supporting characters in various copies have various tragedies. . Then as soon as the male protagonist appears, everything feels comfortable. . Occasionally the male protagonist has to be "waked up". . Come for a few kills, small bursts. Then I lose my memory and become stupid . . . . . . . As a reader, read online articles. . Most people pursue a sense of substitution. . This way of writing, the protagonist has too few roles. . And the protagonist is set up as a passerby. . Too much influence has been brought in. . Even if the master is abusive, depressed, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. . The protagonist will not be written as a big fool. . How do you let readers get involved? ? ? My first feeling was that I was clearly stronger and then everyone around me treated me like a fool. . All kinds of beauties match your writing. . . But according to the protagonist's settings, these women cannot be touched If they have abilities, they cannot be used. . I don't know anything. . . . A happy little Erbi is amusing Menzi with a group of monsters . . . . . These are some feelings after seeing it. . Because the book is just beginning. . . Many have not been written. . Maybe in the future, the protagonist will not need a "wake up" service . . . . . But click on the settings in the frame from the beginning. The protagonist's performance has been restricted to death. . Because it is difficult for you to break this circle. . If you break it, don't you slap yourself in the face? ? ? According to the setting, a protagonist who is always awake should be facing the so-called last moment The book is over. . . If it doesn't end, stay awake. . Then why was it set that way in the first place? ? . . . . . . In addition, according to normal logic the sober protagonist and the unconscious protagonist are two people mentally. . The characters have to change. . . The earliest online articles often contained various amnesia articles. . Why is it basically gone now? . Because this kind of thing has the greatest impact on readers' involvement The amnesia article is the most deceptive of all online articles Let's just talk about this book. . . Even if the reader accepts that the protagonist is a happy little Erbi He was acting happily and foolishly at first, and then he turned into a gloomy boss? Or a passionate young man? ? Or maybe the Sad Virgin Man? ? I am so schizophrenic. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Originally, according to the introduction My understanding is that the protagonist carries a big cause and effect the starting point is someone else's ending point. . Traveling through various restricted areas Suppressing various monsters Because a certain time is getting closer and closer There are more and more restricted areas for riots Many low-level restricted areas have also been gradually upgraded The male protagonist who originally wandered in the restricted areas and on the fringes of society was slowly discovered and analyzed. . Then all kinds of pretentious slaps in the face to save the world. . The result is that I thought too much. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . And because of setting issues. Large-length descriptions of various supporting characters Large-length descriptions of various short stories. . It's already divisive enough. . The result is split + split. . Maybe you think the writing is very profound and pretentious but the reality is very. . . . . . Just like the man who controlled his wife and corpse at the beginning. . A hard wave of sensationalism. . Since I love you so deeply. . Why are you afraid of the protagonist? Finally, let's die together. . It is illogical and very sensational and fake. . . . Let's talk about the little story about knocking on the door that we are reading now. . I wrote a lot. It's not over yet. . Then there is this diary. . . . . . . . . As I get older, I tend to be more verbose. . But I will continue to look at it. . . After all, the number of words is too small, and it's still a beginning. . Maybe this is just an excess. . The author has a wonderful reversal in the future!

The gap is too big, and it was quite interesting in the early stage. It can be watched by both Dihua and Dihua, and there are still laughs. The subject matter is very new and can be funny in a moderate way. The introduction is well written and does not contain personal opinions. The part about He Lanlan that was criticized in the middle also seemed to me to be flawless when I read it. However, the writing becomes more and more confusing later on, and the narrative is constantly added casually. It does not closely revolve around the same theme like the wine of eternal life. Is it purely to add drama to the supporting characters who appear on the way, or is it to enhance the atmosphere? I can't understand this operation. Is there anyone who can play like this without overturning? Yes, such as the Snow Country and the Muslim Funeral... But the author of the online article obviously does not have the writing power. If you don't have diamonds, don't do the porcelain work. The sense of fragmentation not only exists in the protagonist, but also in the reading experience. The first 80 chapters are qualified online articles, and they are no less readable than some books by veteran authors from Qidian. The evaluation of 80 to 125 is a waste of money on my part.

Rationally analyze the relationship between the protagonist and the Silent Man As far as the current plot is concerned, the Silent Man and the Tomb Keeper should be existing in the old era that have survived to this day and have become a taboo sequence under certain circumstances. The twenty-one spiritual cards behind the scenes in the Fuyu Village should be It is a symbol of the intersection of the two in the old era. It is currently unclear whether the two sides are enemies or friends. According to the text, the Silent One should have been a member of the stage or even the leader. It is difficult to say whether the Tomb Keeper is a member of their team. Since the twenty-one spiritual tablets appeared in the Tomb Keeper, There were reactions afterward. It's hard to tell whether the gravekeeper caused the birth of these twenty-one spiritual tablets or something else. But I am sure that he has a deep connection with these things. As for the lullaby the gravekeeper sings to calm the spiritual tablets, I think it is one of the characteristics of the gravekeeper, which is the ability to "soothe". Li Another question comes to mind. The red envelope in the Tomb Keeper did not drop until he left the restricted area. The silent man dropped the red envelope as soon as he appeared. I want to know if there is such a trick in it. I will wait for the author to continue writing In short, it is a good new book.

Ask, does it look good? Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people

One thing to say, I was actually quite interested in it at the beginning, and then I saw Lu Lu in the police station suddenly said, "Why is that girl related to S-level taboos, and then went straight to the show. Generally speaking, zz traps like this in novels are basically poisonous to people. When I thought about it, I came out and looked at the comment area. After seeing the comment area, I left directly.

What I like the most is the first 200 chapters or so, which probably ends with Equality Paradise. It's okay when you get to Longtou, but not after that. I don't really care about the main plot or not. What attracted me to this article was not the development of the main plot, but the slow revelation of how the various means deployed by the protagonist in order to achieve the ultimate goal (making a world suspended from death) function. To put it bluntly, plot development is just a tool used to reveal props and abilities. In the Hidden Mountain Pingding Paradise, it can be said to be about tricking and adapting to circumstances. After that, the perception is purely that the protagonist loses control step by step. Many of the arrangements are not clear to the protagonist himself, and the opportunity to introduce how to achieve the final result through the wonderful chain of props and abilities is lost. It becomes a mediocre adventure story, with no sense of anticipation at all, only the confusion of digging a hole. In addition, in terms of strength, there is basically only suppression and very little promotion. As an adventure novel, there are too few "opportunities" and lack of appeal. When solving a crisis, it gives people the feeling that they have no ability to forcefully rely on the "backstage" to cover it. In many cases, it does look like a deus ex machina instead of "having saved a hand" in the early stage. The description that focuses on the advancement of the main plot is still too people-oriented. I personally feel that the most interesting part of this book is the description of taboo sequences and various extraordinary abilities that are brought out from the side through a series of plots. Both of these characteristics are directly omitted through a certain trigger method and the intermediate process of presenting the results. Therefore, how to test out the rules, or how to use them to connect the road to the ideal result is the most interesting part. In the early stage, I felt that the look and feel was good precisely because there were no too many surprises in the direction of the main plot and the direction was clear. Then the description could focus more comprehensively and deeply on various props and abilities, and dig some holes to fill them with these props and abilities. Although some people don't like this way of writing a seemingly unrelated story suddenly, it can only be said that it is a limitation of online serialization. In the later period, because the development direction of the main line was not clear, there was naturally no time to describe these wonderful props and wonderful abilities. The seasoning of props and abilities was lost, and the main line was indeed advanced too slowly. The simple plot advancement was indeed not that attractive and made people anxious. To be honest, the main reason is that the author is too influenced by the comment area. Looking at the author's own comments, he is not a full-time writer. That person feels that there is no need to care too much about the comments and reactions. Listen to the advice. Whether you can absorb the advice depends on your own ability. Being pushed to the wrong direction is more uncomfortable than not listening at all. It is equivalent to being pushed off the original track but unable to safely transfer to another track. It is better to drive slowly on the original track.

Alas, I still like the book "The Gravekeeper". I rarely read a novel again, let alone this kind of eunuch, but I read this book for the second time. This book is really a pity, such a pity. There are indeed too many pitfalls behind it, and it left me with many questions. 1. Tomb Keeper's Forbidden Age has system abilities in all eras. So what is the alienator in Gu Yan? It seems that Gu Ji in another book is an alienator. Is there any connection between the worldviews of the two books? Grave Keeper also has alienators, and does he have the same surname as Gu, the non-human protagonist? And the other book is also about eunuchs. 2. Bai Mo's attitude was obviously different when he saw Liu Qingqing. Apparently he had known her before and had a good relationship, like a sister. But Liu Qingqing has no memory, so what is Liu Qingqing's identity? There are still many questions that I didn't ask. Although I really hope that the author can write again or rewrite, it may be really difficult. After all, the pitfalls of subsequent writing are indeed too big, the plot direction is also a bit mixed, and some psychological descriptions are repeated many times. There are indeed many problems. It may be that it is too affected by the comments. Just like Stealing Stars in September, it is also affected too much. It is a pity.

By the way, can the author click to finish 🙂

Is anyone dead? Can it be updated?