Shrouding the Heavens: The Jade Emperor
遮天之玉皇
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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I feel like this book by the author is ready to be sent to the authorities. The concept of a Holy Spirit born prematurely is actually quite novel in the *Covering the Sky* fanfiction, but the poison in this book lies in the fact that *Covering the Sky* is a story of an invincible protagonist who sweeps across the nine heavens and ten earths, while what you're writing is...
You've completely ruined the emperor's prestige. This book seems to be the only one I've ever seen where the author publicly admits to being an Emperor and then hangs out with a bunch of juniors. He doesn't show any of the Emperor's prestige whatsoever. Did he reincarnate just to fawn over Ye Fan? He has to tell Ye Fan everything, explain everything?
The protagonist is a Holy Spirit! How could anyone fawn over Ye Fan like this?! He's an Emperor! And they've invited him time and again! They made a mistake from the start! Why are Holy Spirits so ruthless towards humans?! Who knows how many Holy Spirits are still in their gestation stages being found, extracted, and dismembered! A Holy Spirit is a treasure trove from head to toe! What do those Emperors do when they lack resources? They just need to acquire a few Holy Spirits!
Incorporating science into a fantasy novel is like trying to explain cultivation in The Three-Body Problem—it just doesn't fit in. Most readers of your novel are fans of *Covering the Sky* fanfiction; your constant talk of science will drive them away.
With all this talk of technology and sects, the protagonist seems completely insane. Instead of focusing on personal growth, he's resorting to underhanded and unethical methods.
I don't recommend incorporating technology into cultivation novels, but you must provide a convincing reason, or at least a sophisticated one that I can't understand.
I'm totally screwed... Technology... I'm dead.
It feels like the protagonist has no plan for his future cultivation path. He's still missing his original essence and is just randomly searching for the Emperor Scripture without any main cultivation storyline. Is the Devouring Heaven Demon Art not stronger than the Heaven-Mending Technique?
Book title: "Covering the Sky: Jade Stone Becomes a Spirit and Kneels Before the Protagonist." That's the complete summary.
To protect the Holy Spirit Clan, when you become Emperor, just cast a curse. Whoever kills a Holy Spirit will suffer instant death and their entire family will be implicated.