Black Technology: I Thought I'd Start With Toys

Directly built a plasma spark tower Everyone evolved directly Because there is no light in the heart We all became crayfish planets In the end, the earth's environment was destroyed Build a spaceship for survival Traveled to a parallel universe Then we were killed by the Specium Ray

The male protagonist has the power of my imagination, the real Kamen Rider belt! Really. The Belt of the Kaijia Warrior! Rape Kep! Gundam! ... These can all be manufactured!

The author's ideas are really good, but the writing style needs to be improved. It reads dry and has no sense of immersion at all.

The Flying Broomstick was very busy. When he first started working on a four-wheel drive, he built a Flying Broomstick and flew up a mountain in front of people at a construction site. . . . . . .

I wonder if you are just flying broomsticks in these 14 chapters, is it really illogical? Put aside this magical creation? ? ? Why don't foreign mercenaries want to come in? I'm afraid that if it weren't for this rhythm, in Chapter 30, foreign countries would have to go to war with China. It would be really outrageous to open the door to outrageous things. It would be outrageous.

The beginning was interesting, but until Broomstick, Digimon became even more outrageous. Forget about Digimon, what is the relationship between Pokémon and technology? They are physical lives, but Digimon is still a life transformed from data. Pokémon itself is life. The overall feeling is like Zihai, but can Zihai also write so much?

I wonder

I don't know if the author has noticed that there are fewer and fewer comments after each chapter, which shows that most readers are no longer interested in commenting. I think the beginning of this book is good, with a sense of immersion, but something obviously goes wrong later on. First of all, when you write a book, you must make the protagonist a human being, so that readers can feel that the protagonist is just like me, also likes money, is lustful, etc. The protagonist now writes that he was an ordinary person in his previous life, but after time travel, he can become a saint and be busy inventing and playing games all day long. You make so much money and you don't enjoy it. As an ordinary person in the previous life, shouldn't you squander the money you have? The author wrote the protagonist as a robot, which I think is not very logical. The golden finger set by the author is very good, but what can I say, it is wasted by letting you write it. Your golden finger can be written in a big way, and it can lead mankind to fly into the universe and become a great man in human history. However, you use it to write games. In fact, your book is similar to a novel I have read, The Best Tokusatsu Era, but that book is much less cheating than yours, and The protagonist of the book is shaped like a human being, and you just feel like an invention machine. If you want to write about games, then to be honest, there is no need to use such a big cheat. If you want to write about black technology, just describe the game less. Sometimes, you have identified a part and written it, and the subscription is indispensable. But according to your current writing method, the result is hard to say.

The idea is really good, but it's a pity that the author wrote it in a mess, and even good suggestions are not listened to. It's so broken that I really can't read it with my brain.

. . . . . . . Well, it feels a bit like using a cannon to swat mosquitoes. This book is so big. I am a man of two generations and only make some fancy things. I look forward to the author writing another book with the same theme on other topics.