Great Ming: My Grandpa Is the Hongwu Emperor!

Zhu Yuanzhang was indeed a very good emperor, but sometimes you portray him too well, too perfectly, making him seem unrealistic. He wasn't that perfect. I think you need to calm down and write about him more carefully.

Like Zhu Chongba, he has this same problem: he gets sentimental every few episodes, and it gets tiresome.

I was watching it so well, but the main character is only eight years old! He tricked his grandmother into leaving the palace to go to his uncle's house, but instead went to find a so-called "pure courtesan." Is it really necessary for a grandson of the emperor to do this?

Here's a suggestion for the author: try to tone down the sentimentality a bit. Don't keep bringing up things like "China" or "the nation." We all want China to prosper, but sometimes your direct expressions of emotion feel out of place and make people feel awkward.

Even if you copy and paste, take a look. The main character is sometimes called Zhu Xiong Ying, sometimes Zhu Yun Li, and sometimes Zhu Ying Xiong.

Is the author still going to write? One update a day, then one update every two days, and now there's been no update at all... Is the author really going to give up?

You wrote something toxic but don't want people to talk about it? That's impressive, truly amazing. But the fact that you could write about poisoning the Crown Princess, cursing the Crown Prince, and even giving the Empress a grand funeral befitting a Crown Princess shows just how toxic you are. And you're keeping it a secret? You try keeping it from Zhu Xiong Ying. When he finds out later, will he hate Zhu Biao, Zhu Yuanzhang, Empress Ma, and Zhu Yunwen to death? Laughable.

It's not really poisonous, is it? My grandfather, Zhu Yuanzhang, didn't depose Empress Lü, and even treated Zhu Yunwen well. He kept the deaths of Zhu Xiong Ying and Empress Xiaokang a secret from Empress Lü, which is disgusting. And now here we're saying Zhu Yunwen and Zhu Xiong Ying are half-brothers? No, with the protagonist doing this, what if he has a child and gets the throne—is it Yunwen or an illegitimate son who ascends the throne? What the hell is going on? I'm dropping this.

Sometimes the protagonist suddenly reveals a lot about his age, and other times the whole process of causing trouble makes him seem like a child, without any trace of a time traveler. Could he be suffering from schizophrenia?

The author has abandoned the project. What will he write next? I personally recommend the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms period, the late Ming Dynasty, and the Eastern Jin Dynasty. These chaotic eras are still the best. Second Master's novels about the struggle for supremacy are much better, just like the book by Big Brother Zhu Chongba.