The God of the Heavens Illuminates the Successor of the Sutra

This is not the rhythm of Zhu Tianwen at all. Since the protagonist has obtained the Divine Illumination Sutra, he should kill the three traitors one by one, instead of waiting for 16 years without doing anything and just rely on the original work. Otherwise, one more will not be enough for you.

Let's take a closer look at the author. What the hell is he called an author?

Brother, after sixteen years of waiting, you have been lonely, and you haven't developed any power yourself. Aren't you Yang Guo waiting for Xiao Longnu to grow up? Wait until Di Yun grows up?

The writing is inexplicable. I knew that the three traitors were not dealt with first, but I kept writing according to the formula of the original work. The perspective of the book is also not on the protagonist. Now here, now there are all from the original work. Sixteen years have passed for the protagonist, and twenty years have passed. I don't know what he has done. It is basically a copy of the original work. To put it bluntly, the author has no money, so he can only do this, and he slipped away 🙂

Has the protagonist you created so far been useful? It's all about the plot of someone else's original work. I'll just go read the original work. Isn't it more exciting than what you wrote?

I just watched Bai Xiaosheng's drama on site B, so I came to see if there are any fans. . So what if you get so much treasure? Three brothers killed each other and were obsessed with it

I really don't understand what you mean by waiting for 16 years? Will the protagonist be dead before the end of the plot?

The people here are crazy. As a master, you can rob the rich and give to the poor, or support some big businessmen, and you will not be short of money to spend. But those who are beaten to death for a piece of money have no consciousness at all. After all, more money is useless. You can't buy the elixir of immortality, and there are no heavenly materials and earthly treasures that can greatly improve your martial arts. It's useless.

If I don't change my style, I won't be able to write about 300,000 yuan. I'll just swallow everything and feel like I don't know what to say. I don't have my own ideas and follow the trend. The protagonist, can't he take the initiative to learn something or plan something?

Everything else is fine, but what are you most fascinated by? Not moving for 16 years. 16 Years, 16 years! ! ! Should you do something? We don't talk about developing forces to overthrow politics, nor do we talk about going out to make friends, friends are everywhere! Not to mention going out to pick up girls and kidnapping Little Dragon Girl! You have to kill those two-and-a-half-year-olds first! But your actions are very confusing! I stayed there for 16 years. ! I can't help but want to praise you, "You are awesome, brother!"

I would like to advise the author to go back and read "Liancheng Jue" a few more times before writing a book!

It's quite rare to write a link to the city. It seems to be okay so far. I give you a recommendation vote 😃

Pig's feet don't look like modern people, there is nothing modern about them at all

Now it's my own book to copy Jin Yong and add a supporting role? !

I have lost all my hair in the past 16 years. Since you have the ability to kill these people and have already killed them, is there any need to follow the plot?

🤔Why do you read novels now... It takes several chapters to kill a passerby? Wouldn't it be great if I had the time to watch a TV series? The author wanted to write about traditional martial arts, but as a result, there was basically no description of the protagonist. The protagonist had no charm, and the story was not novel enough.

There is no need to wait until 16 years later. The author mentioned in the article that the Blood Knife Ancestor wanted to go down the mountain several years in advance, but was stopped by a young man. This person must be Pig's Foot. Since the martial arts is stronger than the Blood Knife Ancestor, it would indeed be better to kill the traitor directly.

Think of the introduction as Zhang Jizhong's secret to traveling through Liancheng! ! ! 😭😭😭

I came across this book and read the comments first. There must be a reason why so many people criticize you. If you want to make progress, you must first face your mistakes so that you can write better and better What? You said, it doesn't matter if you write that you don't want to make money while playing, if you like watching but don't watch, get out of here Oh, that's okay then 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Apart from the addition of you, is there any difference from reading the original text?