Single-Player Reincarnation of the Heavens

In the first few chapters, you only have 11 years of life and use 10 years to exchange for the temporary ability of novice benefits to replace the character in the reincarnation world (he is a spare tire of a childhood sweetheart). The task requires you to capture the woman (who has a sweetheart), who can hold hands, kiss but not mouth-to-mouth, and cannot have sex otherwise points will be deducted. Complete the task to gain the gratitude of the man you replaced, and return to the real world and score points. After reading a few chapters, I felt that I didn't like it, so I'll summarize it for posterity.

Isn't this just a tauren protagonist? Weird

It is a thoughtful book with a lot of foreshadowing. I have filled in a lot of it so far. It has a lot of ideas and is generally good. There is nothing too bad about it.

I thought it was a single player, but it turned out that the first world involved someone who was not the only one. He was going to be raised on the spot and had a huge fight. You are off topic. You will be deducted a lot of points for your writing.

Speechless, I said in the first world that Tiandao absorbed the consciousness of the script, but in the third world, the consciousness of the script was restored. And some of the dialogues and plots in this book feel very disconnected. It's like playing, I don't know what's going on

The world starts well. The martial arts world was biased. I thought I could watch the martial arts world. The Marrow Cleansing Pill is also a special product of the martial arts world, such as Tianshan Snow Lotus, Millennium Ganoderma lucidum, XX exotic beasts, etc. You can follow this line, practice martial arts and travel around the world, or do things according to the will of the martial arts world. In the world of martial arts, it can be said that the imperial court is powerful and collects medicinal materials from all over the world to make elixirs conveniently, but what is the most basic protagonist doing? The main goal is to produce elixirs every year and have a place to store them. Use technology or the invisible earth escape in the main god space to get one first, and eat it later! The main character in the story wants to take the harem route first and work for the emperor in exchange for elixirs? I'm a little tired of aesthetics. This routine has been used in seven or eight of the ten historical time travel novels. There are so many pictures of the key martial arts world. In addition to replacing the identity with the script, the main god space and the protagonist all feel like they are sleepwalking.

Author: Can you change the name that others call the protagonist, Yuping, Yuping! Now that it has been replaced, other characters call the protagonist not Qin Xi, but Yuping or a certain hou. It's crazy and uncomfortable.

Forget about "ah". It's annoying to see the word "ah", and the main character is not a woman. She does it all day long.

This book should be considered a fairy tale, I hope you won't miss it in the future.

Is there a group? The first world made me cry

How can I put it, the first dungeon is quite well written, but the following dungeons are a bit unclear. The first power system is too vague, and I don't know the strength of the protagonist. Let's say the protagonist is strong. It's quite difficult for the protagonist to go to a new world. The second one is that there are other fragments of the main god who don't want to enter. I have to do everything possible to become stronger. I have experienced at least 3 worlds. You have to control one in your hand anyway. The main plot is too vague.

So, this is not a stand-alone game, right?

The writing is a bit confusing, the explanation of various things is unclear, and the transition is too sudden.

There is an obvious separation between the second world and the third world. Are there any blocked chapters?

The setting is interesting. But the author's layout is too small. Limit your goals to one person and serve others. There is no reason for my own opinion at all, it is too rigid.

Introduction: There are the first world and the third world. What is the second world?

I read 69 chapters in one breath. Three different worlds have appeared, but there is no in-depth background introduction. Sealed objects, marrow cleansing pills, and sequence drugs are all too prominent. Is this based on the settings of other popular books? Those who have not read this kind of book will not understand it and are advised to quit. A good book still requires serious storytelling.

And the author said that he made a lot of changes and posted them in the group. How many groups are there? I want to see what it was like before it was changed.

It's very interesting. There's something to say. I've been short of books lately, so I'm looking for a new book. As for the previous poisonous points, read a few more pictures, because those things did not happen at all. As for some inconsistencies, it is because some of them were deleted by the system.

A very good book, please say goodbye eunuch. The few books I read before were all eunuchs, and I couldn't stand them anymore.

Youmuyouqun, I was reading it so hard that I missed two chapters. The author is really impressed.

The protagonists and supporting characters are well described, and the plot is coherent and vivid. The first script is about the appearance of sealed objects in a parallel world. I thought the time loop was a failure, but the wonderful thing was that every time it looped, new discoveries were made. The protagonist's IQ is online, I like it better. May the author come on! Write more!