I Really Just Want to Cultivate Immortality and Not Fall in Love

After reading Chapter 70, it's actually okay. The characters and plots are still tenable, and there is no sense of déjà vu in a routine novel. Generally speaking, it is passable But it is only passable. It is not as good as the previous one, but more than the lower one. It is a transitional novel during the book shortage period The male protagonist is Not to mention, he has a sense of déjà vu as a tool. I personally feel that he is not the material to be the male protagonist Looking at the male protagonist in Xiao Xiang's Guide, there is a strong sense of déjà vu in the Oedipus novel where a son attacks his mother The female protagonist is also quite numb. It is said that the harem has been dealt with until now. It's an affair. People change from single-mindedness to passion. The male protagonist hasn't changed from impotence to puberty. Let's see how you handle it later In the end, the plot is barely acceptable, and there are no poisonous points. It's handled well Finally, I would like to say a few words from the author's perspective When writing novels, you will always rush into two books. No one can write well, right? Although with the mentality of comparing yourself to worse, there are many people who have better grades than you and write worse than you, but who told others to seize the code of wealth? Let this be a lesson and write the next one well

When I saw the two heroines and love, I immediately clicked in (there is something about daily poisoning)

Youqiu is already like this, why don't you let Shen Xu accept it? ! I don't care! I want a harem! ! ! ! ! ! ! I want a harem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This book should be popular among light novels, but it doesn't fit into the category of fairy tales and fantasy cultivators. After all, there are more than 100 chapters, and about 80 of them are about the itching between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists. Most of the readers who read the category of fairy tales still want to read the fairy tales of riding swords on the wind and slaying demons in the world. The fairy tale flavor of this book is basically dull. Most of the chapters are about love entanglements, but the paragraph vocabulary is not LSP enough, the car driving is not fast enough, and the style of the whole book is more towards the 80s and 90s, the kind of love story novels where female classmates hide and peek, with a little bit of literary youth.

Shen Nanqing

Xiang Youqiu: I am not a barking dog

I only watch movies with multiple female protagonists and no female protagonists. I never watch couples in a lifetime.

I always like Youqiu!

I'm not exaggerating, this book is reasonable, and the writing is really good. There are no major problems with the writing and plot. Author, can you recommend it if you test the waters? Why is it so popular? If you just rely on daily detoxification and similar recommendations, not many people will watch it! Then there is an endless cycle, no popularity, no recommendation votes, no recommendation, no recommendation, no popularity 🙂🙂🙂

I have read the latest chapter and it was very painful to read, especially the marriage plot. I think this is the biggest poisonous point of this book. You didn't even solve the harem problem, so you got married, and you probably got married just to please Nan Qing. The character of the main palace is too strong. Since you are writing about the harem, why not weaken her character a little? Yu Yan is just like a mistress, I feel really sad. And I think your method of converting harems is very rigid. After seeing many harems, I think concealment is the worst. I hope the author can think carefully about how to deal with Nan Qing in the later stage. I think we can let the protagonist and his group experience a future dream. Just listening to what Yu Yan says is unrealistic. This should change Nan Qing's mind. There is also the matter of the heroine listening to her heart, I hope she will confess soon. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better, and I will continue to read it. ps: The scene where Nan Qing was angry was really uncomfortable to watch. I hope Nan Qing's character will be better written later.

It's well written, but I'm a little worried that the author won't be able to stick with it, and I hope the quality doesn't improve. Decline

The most important thing about mind-reading didn't appear in the introduction...

There are so few people, can we continue? I'm so afraid I won't be able to watch it

It's really good, but I think some people will think this sister is a bit green tea. I personally like single female protagonists. There are few harem stories that I can watch. I have liked them before.

I'm more curious about why the author didn't set Xiang Youqiu as a fox but a wolf?

I personally like it, but I'm a free prostitute.

The main reason for its lack of popularity may be the conflict between the title and introduction of the book. I originally thought the routine was pretty good when I looked at the title of the book, but then I looked at the introduction. . .

A genius cultivates immortality, but in the end he listens to his heart

I ordered two chapters and barely left the prostitution party. Give me some opinions. The introduction needs to be modified. Judging from the introduction, my first impression is that it is a sweet 1v1 love story about cultivating immortals, and the biggest feature of this article is that the heroine reads the mind. Before Shen Nanqing appeared (Chapter 6, Chapter 7), I regarded Youqiu as the only female protagonist. Many readers who have no interest in orcs may have quit in the first chapter. Judging from the title and introduction, I could neither tell that this was a novel with multiple female protagonists, nor that the female protagonist had the ability to read the male protagonist's mind. The release time was not grasped well. When I read Chapter 30, I expected that the last chapter before it would be released would be Nan Qing's confession. Your chapters before release are too bland and make people have no desire to read them. Watch out for the next book. The book is good and has a bright future. Come on.

The beginning is very unreasonable - no one signed up for the protagonist's training class? In fact, if you think about it for a moment, you can understand that no matter how poor the protagonist's teaching skills are, as a person who has the potential to become the fourth extraordinary person, there will definitely be countless people trying to curry favor with him, right?

Actually, I think a lot of people will watch the romance category. After all, I originally came in after watching Xianxia. However, the romance is well written, but the part about cultivating immortals is a bit missing.

There is a bit of a problem with the positioning. I feel that light novels will become popular, while fairy tales are a bit nondescript. Readers of the Xianxia channel still feel like they want to see more about cultivating immortals.

It's pretty good, but since there are multiple female protagonists in the emotional drama, why do you have to be coy about it? It's too confusing for readers to watch.

At present, I don't understand why there are two female protagonists.

Is this multiple heroines or single heroine? Make it clear

Xiang Youqiu

Green tea sister. . . .

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁