Man Was Adopted by Kaido in One Piece

Why do I feel like the author is just thinking about it, the system is gone, the protagonist is amnesia, why don't you just kill the protagonist and replace him with someone else?

If you go to Kaido crying after being beaten, Kaido will never avenge you, and then he will blow you away with a mace. It depends on your luck whether you die or not. Let's call him a piece of trash.

Kaido's own biological daughter was abused and kept free, let alone you who are not related by blood.

Kaido's son went to join the navy and became a disciple of Oden. He didn't care about Oden's ending. He was saved by Tiger and called Tiger brother, but he still let Tiger die at the hands of the navy. The protagonist doesn't know that One Piece can still understand it. If he knows, it can only be said that the protagonist has a character problem.

Black Maria

I haven't read the book yet, but the protagonist in the character interface is 275cm tall and weighs 80cm. I can't stand it. It's a balloon, right? It's the snot-nosed man under Brother Dover. He looks very strong, but when the clothes are removed, there is nothing underneath.

I think the author can start over. Generally speaking, it was good at the beginning, but the more I read, the less interesting it became. I felt that I just started writing with a better starting idea. Writing a book still needs to be particular, and you can't think of one thing after another. There are many inconsistencies, contradictory characters, and forced plots. This is because a big framework was not set up in the early stage. Without an outline, it often falls apart after writing. Either the plot cannot be figured out or the whole thing is messed up. Nowadays, many writers write books based on the results. If the results are good, they will just think of one chapter, and if the results are not good, they will just say goodbye. There is no future. A person's growth is not only about size and strength, but also about the explosion of the first experience and the restraint after settling. Where will you improve at each stage, to what extent will you grow, develop emotional strength or power, how will your mentality change, what major events will there be, and what minor events will surround the big events. It would be much better to have a clearer direction and control the plot and text description. Now this book is completely supported by a novel perspective, a spoof style, and an excellent use of memes, but it is like duckweed without roots, and it will disappear if the wind blows. Many works with good outlines can continue to rely on small events to supplement the plot once the results are good. If the results are not very good, they will push out the plot and focus on the plot. There is a lot of room for adjustment. If you write like this now, the risk is very high. It is not easy to control and the quality is not guaranteed.

I really can't stand it anymore. When did the Golden Lion learn Chinese medicine and learn acupuncture?

What I wrote before is fine, but after a long time, I lost my memory and it became very poisonous.

Rubbish novel. Don't kill Guangyue.

I can't stand it any longer. A good person is written for nothing, Jue Juezi.

Is it an idiot for a pirate to raise his son to join the navy?

Since they were adopted by Kaido, the Beast Pirates are the foundation. They correct Kaido's daughter's thoughts, search for powerful Devil Fruits, occupy the country of technology, Balkimoa, collect scientists to develop technology (artificial devil fruits, pacifist legions, ancient weapons), control the Golden Emperor, collect precious resources (primordial stones, sea tower stones), occupy strategic locations (islands on transportation routes), completely control or destroy the country of Wano, and control White Star (Poseidon). It is recommended not to do anything like saving Wano Country. If you are not a relative or a biological father, it doesn't matter if Wano Country is extinct. Wano Country can be used as a slave breeding farm. Don't waste free labor. As long as the pirate group becomes stronger.

Yamato

What kind of selection system is this? Is this a choice? There is no choice at all. Just call it a task system. It's disgusting.

Reward

Why do you have to write about the main character losing his memory? It's so uncomfortable to watch. The more I look at the back, the more I feel something is wrong...→_→

Just like the title, if you have any ideas, you can come in and post them. Don't worry, I'm definitely not copying them! I just want to expand my ideas! My 10 billion% guarantee. Mom~

After amnesia, it's like it was written by a different person. It's boring

I felt so uncomfortable watching Peach Rabbit and Betty! The harem is already open, why don't we want it anymore? Originally it was the protagonist who brought it upon himself.

Kaido

Yamato

Hiyori

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It's so awesome that I can't stand it anymore, the main character has lost his memory. . . .

The creativity is very good, but the writing is too naive

The main character has amnesia, which makes the previous plot seem like a waste of time. No fun, just slipped away.

Since the beginning of the series, there is nothing unattractive.