Immortality Begins in a Strange World

Shouldn't Immortality be an evil text? I thought it would be good to watch, but when I saw it, The Light of Humanity I suggest you stop watching it, it's boring It's outrageous to have a girl with you I don't know why, just write that you are Qingrong Junmao And your partners should also be Qingrong Junmao They are all women, please pray for immortality or death!

Welcome everyone to watch "Weird World": I am the Virgin. It feels like eating a delicious chocolate, and then someone tells me it is shit. I don't believe it, so I continue to eat it, and it's so damn good that I vomit

I would like to give a suggestion to the author: in the latest two chapters, I can't tell the author's intention. . . The protagonist was quite decisive in the previous chapters, but somehow in these two chapters he suddenly turned into a troubled man. . Newbies won't like it because it's not decisive enough; bookworms won't like it either, because the protagonist has lived two lives and is not only ignorant of current affairs, but also doesn't even have his own ideas. If it is to use the foreshadowing that Liu Cun is Jin Ling's husband to reflect the kindness of the protagonist in disguise, then the description of the protagonist's psychology will be completely different. .

How to say: As a person who has traveled five years while living in a dark society where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the weak, the world view is still the same as the civilization and harmony of modern people. This is a question of sense of substitution. Everyone has entered the dark world you created, but the actions of the protagonist are not consistent. At the same time, as a modern person, the protagonist wants to change the world, but he always feels that his moral character is not up to par, his superficial strength is insufficient, and his sympathy and compassion hinder his development to a certain extent. To give an example of a great author, Wei He, the Martial Saint of the Ten Directions, was still from a poor background and had a family. But his character is perfectly integrated with the setting. The image of Wei He is in line with the world he set. Everything he does is self-interested. Even though the world view is very large and broad, the protagonist is rational and happy, instead of feeling like the protagonist of this article is torn between the character and the setting. It would be better for the protagonist to travel to the city at the beginning. At the beginning, he has a worldview of a civilized society, but after a series of plots, he grows up and becomes dark and cold without losing his passion.

You wrote that you really wanted a sister, right? Ask your mother to give you another child!

Hurry up, eunuch, and give back the light of humanity. We humans are missing you?

I'm afraid newbies won't read it, so I'd like to add that this book must be about eunuchs, and not about eunuchs. There are a lot of novels of the same type, and there are quite a few saints, but there are very few who are both saints and hypocritical white lotuses. I got Goldfinger for nothing. I'm really speechless. I read your book in the middle of the night and was poisoned.

I didn't want to watch it when I started having a sister.

Readers of weird genres like ruthless protagonists. . . .

It's so embarrassing. In ancient times, people had to be called Niangqin or Mother, not mom. Mom is a name passed down from the West in modern times.

You're a bitch, you're a virgin, and you have a younger sister. Who the hell is watching? You can't do anything that's poisonous?

Author, the biggest problem with your book is that the protagonist is both [Moji] and [Mother] which directly poisons the plot to death If you don't change it. It's almost boring. As for the plot, it's not the biggest problem What you wrote is a novel, it's false. No matter how decisively you kill, it's still false. You have no human and psychological burden at all I am a reader. I have read 5 chapters I just feel [very frustrated and speechless] I read novels to find happiness, not to suffer. That's all. Let's change it or not.

I woke up one night and lost several collections 😭 If you have any opinions, you can tell me. Without feedback, I don't know how well I wrote 🥺

In fact, there is no need to write a plot about younger sisters relying on each other. It is disgusting, not good-looking, and makes me vomit.

How indecisive can a person who has been struggling in troubled times for more than ten years be? I'm afraid no bones will be left.

I've read Chapter 32 and I really can't stand it. Just take a girl with you. She's super pretty. The key is that you don't have the strength to take care of her yet.

The classic opening scene where someone covets his sister is so classic. Not interested

No wonder the world setting and the character of the protagonist are inappropriate

If you expect a street novel to be about food and grass, just dream on it.

I'm almost dying of laughter. I'm not from an orphanage with a label of decisive killing.

The protagonist traveled five years and survived in troubled times for so long. How did he survive with this mentality?

I don't think the protagonist is the Virgin, but I don't like this article. The protagonist is too different. Author, you shouldn't arrange a sister for him. She obviously wanted to escape Tianlang City from the beginning. After seeing Xiao Tiance arresting him, he shouldn't take chances. Why do he think other officials won't take action against him? And if I were that Xiao Tiance, I would have killed the protagonist long ago. He almost disabled the protagonist. Ask yourself, are you willing to let go of this grudge?

Authors, please find a class. Novels are not so easy to write, and chasing dreams is not so easy to pursue. How many of us born in the 1990s are chasing their dreams now? Live honestly

The protagonist is not very good with women either in terms of methods or feelings, he is like a straight man with cancer

People can be compassionate, but they cannot show compassion indiscriminately, and they must be ruthless when necessary.

What is weird? It's just demons and ghosts. It's out of the category of ghosts. What a nonsense. It's been ghosts for five thousand years. If you change it to weird, wouldn't it be a ghost? People all over the world are gods and devils. You are totally weird. You are really weird.

For old bookworms, this style is simply unbearable. The protagonist's character is completely incapable of setting up. After reading more than 40 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

The protagonist has experienced so many things. First of all, he must hide his kindness in his heart, but he must not be ruthless. He can abandon those who don't care much, but he should care about the people around him. This is the most like ordinary people and the most reasonable. The author has a good grasp, but it is not good to write a novel too rationally, because no matter how big the thinking of ordinary people, there will always be omissions in ordinary things, and this way of thinking will fall behind. You might as well write more satisfyingly.

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Isn't the author planning to enter the palace?