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Newcomers can take a look and write a long review. I was persuaded to quit at the beginning, but after entering the academy, it became more interesting. Although I knew the plot, I didn't follow the plot. The protagonist usually focused on improving himself, and only showed his presence at key moments in the plot. The brushing was quite cool. Most of the time, he was a bystander, but his presence was very strong. The degree of separation from the original plot was well controlled, and his position was not biased. He would not favor any academy in particular, nor would he befriend or suppress the original protagonist. The protagonist has his own development path, and the original protagonist. The characters intersect at critical moments. He is usually a top student who loves to study. He and the protagonist of the original work are basically different from each other. Many HP fanfics cannot do this. After all, it is difficult to write a good fanfic. If it doesn't follow the plot at all, then write What's so exciting about fan fiction? It's better to write something original. If it follows the plot completely, whether it's messing around with the original protagonist, going against the original protagonist, or even completely stealing the original protagonist's presence and halo, I've become tired of these routines in the past few years, and they're boring. There's no way around it, readers' tastes are just so difficult to deal with, so give it a try. This book is very well written, and it feels like you can see through everything behind the scenes. Whether you want to cause trouble or want to help, this degree of intervention is quite comfortable. Although it is Zhutianwen, the HP of the first world is very attractive. To me, it is just food and grass so far. I hope that the subsequent worlds can also grasp this comfortable level, that is, the feeling of being free from the outside but participating in it at critical moments. If the collapse is not written later, it will probably be more than food and grass. However, I suggest that the beginning of the plot be changed. It is really annoying, and my strength persuades me to quit. If you can't retain people at the beginning, then what's the point of writing well later. I think I have a lot of fans, but the interaction is so cold and I'm speechless.

A very good book. It has ideas and writes its own story without relying on background characters to follow the plot. It can be called fairy grass! !

It's very boring to write in one person, and I feel like I'm just short of word count, so hurry up and go to another world.

I gave up the book when I saw Diablo. It has a good subject matter and good writing style, but I couldn't get into the plot. Neither Fairy Tail nor Diablo were interested in it.

Can you please write down the full name of a world like Big Pineapple Wow? Otherwise, I won't know how to check the world view.

1. Does the author look familiar to you? 2. The book is long and you can read it. I can't say whether it is good or not 3. Some of the content is a bit childish and the twist is quite blunt Summary: The feeling of a professional fairy tale and children's short novel writer writing suspenseful and brain-burning mystery novels You will understand after reading it! ! ! PS: There are no three golden chapters. The first 7 chapters are just foreshadowing. The plot is very smooth, but it always gets stuck at the turning point. The author may not have read the HP articles completely. Many HP features are probably supplemented by HP games (it may also be related to the fact that I have read too many HP fans recently, such as "Merlin's existence involves time refutation" and other bugs)

If you come here for free, you can keep reading. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will be a fairy grass.

Will Zaun Hanabi and Seraphine appear?

It's well written, but it's a pity it wasn't promoted. If the power system doesn't collapse in the future, it will be a long and good article. I'll give you the monthly ticket and give you the reward. Come on! The update effect may be better with a few more chapters after it is released!

All I can say is that the readers are not to blame for the success of this book. The author simply writes the book without focusing on the reader's reading experience. Not to mention some minor problems before, until the protagonist brought a few friends to earn 25 million Jin Jialong, and then divided it equally. Is it reasonable for each of these children to share five million? Can their parents take this money with peace of mind? In addition, the principal of 100,000 is paid by the protagonist, and the money sold does not depend on the principal. The idea belongs to the protagonist, and the principal belongs to the protagonist. Doesn't the protagonist's share of the money count as his principal? There is also the issue of effort. Those two guys just drank the adult potion made by the protagonist, wore the appraisal glasses copied by the protagonist, and took the protagonist's gold coins to collect antiques one after another. Then they made money and split five million equally without dividing the principal. And these guys are all children, but the main character is dressed as an adult. The author really can't understand why you wrote this, but he can still tell the readers seriously that he is right in the comment area. This is no longer what one or two readers think in the comment section. Many simply left. I thought it would be hard to find a well-written Harley fanfic, but this kind of plot is really force-feeding, and I still refuse to repent.

The heroine is a widowed sister. When I saw what she did in the Marvel world, I was disgusted!

The current DC plot is as follows: I want to know the location of the Wall of Origin. I can only ask the multiverse-level powerhouse. But everyone will not tell me for various reasons. The protagonist is obviously powerful and completely crushed. I have to whisper like a grandson. Ask questions out of anger. Even though the result is the same, you still have to let others kick your nose in the face and force the length of the plot. If you want to write more, you can create other conflicts. You have to highlight one line at the beginning and then repeat the meaningless failed plot. The current progress is really boring.

Gryffindor is really trying to persuade him to quit. The character of the representative of this house is very consistent with the barbaric connotation of white people, so he is not welcome here at all. I would rather see the protagonist being a foodie in the badger yard than being disgusted by the so-called "little lion".

I am also convinced by the author. You have written a book after all. Why can you always avoid all the cool points so perfectly, but why do you have to make it so uncomfortable? Let's talk about the protagonist's golden finger. It has evolved into a small world. If you don't take your woman with you, the person you want to take someone out of the world for the first time is actually an old man like Odin? How philanthropic are you? Women in those worlds are disposable in your eyes, right? I can only say that what I saw was that I was in trouble!

Whatever was written in the first three chapters, half the people were missing. The protagonist doesn't know the plot, has no sense of involvement, and is missing 90% of the people. In the end, the branch chose Gryffindor, and there were fewer people.

Have you started feeding Xiang to readers again? It's obvious that the protagonist's strength lies in the fact that one person is already a supermodel, and yet he's still trying to cut it, but it's still not broken. . . There are so many heavens and realms that I still don't believe there is no solution. Is it because Panlong is dead or because of eternal life?

The World of Warcraft episode was really unlucky. I kept drinking alcohol to anesthetize myself. I drank alcohol again to suppress my hangover in the morning. You, a potion master, don't know how to prepare anesthetics? Diablo still said that he didn't like drinking. All the characters in the previous chapters fell apart in this one. What kind of bullshit were you writing?

Oh go! There are more than 130 chapters in the book Zhutian Wenguang HP World! Are you trying to emulate Chu Daban...

The book is good, but the protagonist's character has changed. Harry's world is the peak, and then it goes down.

A patent can only be loaned 100,000, so the actual value of this patent is a million. This has already made the academy mobilize all means to fight against the pure-blood nobles to prevent them from being embezzled. Then it is 5 million for one person and 10 million for the twins. If they co-author, they will not be afraid of being persecuted! There are contradictions within a few chapters, as if the author suddenly lost his mind or changed people.

Come on, delete the comments and ban them. I know the tricks of you people. Control the comments completely.

How should I put it? The author probably just briefly read HP and got excited? Many details are embarrassing. For example, Snape always talked about the Dark Lord and did not dare to talk about Voldemort. For example, the Horcruxes were not confirmed until Potter got the memory of Albus from Horace. . Anyway, some places are quite interesting.

I have no interest in Fairy Tail. Just skip it quickly. Wow, dc, marvel all are fine

One person really poisoned me to death. How did it reduce the protagonist's strength after returning to China? It can resist military nuclear bombs abroad. What about domestically? I'm convinced, what's written is messy. After reading it before, I basically don't think it's a big problem and I like it very much. But this place really makes me feel sick. This is the first time I have said this to the author in almost ten years since I read the novel.

Is the author so fond of squeezing pig's feet? Which book are you studying? Or do you just want to write it this way? It's even more cruel when you're beaten by one person, which is okay in the UK! What did you write about after returning to China? Even if I skip booking, I feel very depressed. Alas😐

Afraid of spoiling the plot, you will know how poisonous it is when you write this paragraph. You have been destroyed by the dragon since you traveled through the plot. See for yourself whether what you wrote is a piece of shit.

This character is lovable, but too immature. The writing is getting more and more imbecile. The dark and mature character at the beginning is not retained at all. Now the character is almost 13.4 Years old.

It's a very good book. The characters have distinct personalities and a desire to get to know them better. The plot is explained in a simple and easy-to-understand way without any watering down. It has a clear pursuit of knowledge. Although there aren't many, the emotional interactions between the characters are eye-catching. It's a rare good book.

It looks good, but the author is not good enough and updates are too slow! ! !

If you just choose to lose your magic power, you haven't considered traveling through time and encountering a battle, right? ? It's strange to suddenly act like this after being so steady before.