A Traveler in the Saha World

In the old-school martial arts novel style, the protagonist's survival depends entirely on luck!

Loudly confusing the wind, Shouting loudly: Don't dodge, I'm going to launch a sneak attack!!! Shouting loudly: I'm going to unleash my ultimate skill!! I'm going to unleash my ultimate skill to damage the mobs!!! Shout loudly: Quickly eat the "hidden" weapon! Alright, alright, I know your book is very loud, I can't afford to mess with you.

After reading ten chapters, I'm a bit confused. The protagonist, in his early twenties, may have practiced martial arts since childhood, but in modern times, he also needs to go to school, live a normal life, and his martial arts training is mainly for physical fitness; he's never actually fought.

Let me share my opinion. First, they establish the protagonist's character: a math genius, a Baguazhang (Eight Trigrams Palm) genius. But you don't really feel it. Some plot points are incredibly awkward. If the protagonist were just an ordinary person, it wouldn't be so bad, but with that established character, it's unwatchable. The protagonist's potential is limited by the author's knowledge.

Honestly, the writing isn't bad, but it's too long-winded. Too much nonsense. Why go through all that unnecessary detail? If it weren't for Wang's advanced age and high tolerance, any younger reader wouldn't have the time to read this book.

That's very well written, really good. Hopefully, it stays that way; keep the upper limit at the high-flying martial arts world, and don't let it end up reverting to the prehistoric era.

The writing is quite good; I'd like to share some of my own thoughts. The author says the biggest problem with the first world is the poor pacing in the early stages, which is too drawn out. I agree with that. However, I disagree with his assessment that the early writing was weak, only becoming somewhat acceptable in the later stages, particularly the tomb raiding.

New author, new book! I hope everyone will support me! I will update regularly until the book is finished.

Keep it up, Sanren! Your writing in the Ancient Tomb chapters has been flowing more and more smoothly lately. It seems your writing skills are improving, and the inner world is beginning to take shape. 😎