Chronicles of the Martial Arts Sect Wars
武林门派争霸录
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fantasy
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
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389Chapters
20kRecommendations
15.2kFans
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Author, I have a few suggestions regarding the plot: 1: Don't rush to establish a sect. Let the protagonist accumulate experience and reputation first. It's best to let the protagonist understand the state of the imperial court and the martial arts world in this world, and describe the relationship between the imperial court and the martial arts world.
The protagonist needs to go through a process of change. Not every modern person is born a hero who can exude domineering aura. The protagonist of this book is just a kind-hearted and straightforward physical education teacher in modern times.
Objectively speaking, the idea is good, the "golden finger" (advantage/cheat code) seems reasonable so far, and the writing is passable. However, I personally feel there are some problems. One is the character development. The positive energy and chivalrous spirit are fine, but the protagonist is too emotional—if he were a native boy, it would be tolerable—giving the impression of being tactless…
Is it true that no one is writing martial arts novels anymore? This kind of quality actually made it to the recommendations.
The author could consider writing a new book called "The King," which has a similar title to his previous book, "The Road to Mediterranean Domination." It would be a fictional Western history book, and his previous work, "The Road to Mediterranean Domination," had similar success and the same theme.
It's finally finished! I'm begging the author to go back to historical fiction and stop writing martial arts stories.
I feel that relatively original martial arts like Hundred Flowers Fist are better. There's no need to use martial arts from Jin Yong's novels. This isn't a fanfiction of Jin Yong's novels. Martial arts ≠ Jin Yong.
The book is called "Sect Domination," and I thought it would feature a domineering, warlord-like protagonist. But after reading a few dozen chapters, I realized the protagonist is just a clueless righteous fool who's obsessed with chivalry. He's constantly thinking about how to right wrongs and instills in his disciples the idea of freedom and adventure, roaming the martial world with a sword.
The opening was quite good. I really don't understand why so many people on Qidian (a Chinese online writing platform) criticize it as soon as they see a paragraph that doesn't suit their taste.
The author should write Western fantasy, and could continue writing about the story of Rome before Christ.