Sci-Fi War: I Join the Military After the Apocalypse

Is this protagonist brainless? I like to join in the fun when things happen. I would like to ask the author, does this protagonist have a brain? No matter what rank you are, you dare to kill people. To kill people, you need at least a weapon. This protagonist joins in the fun with nothing? People who are bitten in the school and those who are injured will not be infected? Then tell me how did this virus come from? How was it infected? From the air? It's just airborne infection, so what's the point of turning into zombies and not being contagious? Zombies are not scary, what's scary is the contagiousness. Anyway, it's not suitable for me to read. Besides, the main character loves to join in the fun, and his mind is empty and he doesn't have much to think about.

The impression is really okay. It's rare to come across a novel that has three views and follows the country.

The biggest failure of this book is the assessment. There are several virtual assessments, which do not match the previous ones. It is written as unlimited flow to get rewards, which is simply baffling. Either write infinite flow from the beginning, then there will naturally be people who like to watch infinite flow. If you start catering to the apocalyptic flow Reader, it turned out to be unlimited streaming in the middle, so naturally no one continued to watch it. Anyway, when I saw the virtual assessment, I just said "fuck" and instantly lost the desire to read. I skipped chapters to see when it would end. The results never ended, one after another, so bye.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that some parts of the book were very sensational, so deliberately sensational that it was painful to read. I also liked writing about other characters. I was watching the protagonist how to survive, but ended up switching to other characters, and there was also a lot of content about other characters, which made it feel like they were taking over the main role.

The author is so resilient, he was able to persevere even without signing a contract for 500,000 words.

The novel is good, a rare unsystematic apocalypse, the pace is a little slow in the early stage, and the virtual assessment is a bit off the main line, but everything else is very good, good luck to the author

I read three to four hundred chapters in one go and highly recommend it. If you have read "Carapace Frenzy", you must try it, it is a genre. As for the idiots in the comment area who focus on minutiae and discredit the entire text, you can ignore it. It often takes dozens or hundreds of people to compile a textbook with hundreds of thousands of words, while there is only one author for an online text with millions of words. It is normal to have some flaws.

It doesn't matter if there are few people. Practice your skills in the first book, accumulate experience, and keep working hard.

I haven't read the novel yet, but judging from the author's comments, he is a very good person. I plan to read it. After all, there are really few apocalyptic books nowadays.

First of all, let me explain the progress of reading the book: after conquering the Shava civilization, the protagonist has just begun to deal with the riots on the earth With some expectations, I plan to express some opinions and encourage the author. Other book friends can also read this article to speak for Shennong. Of course, evaluation is easier than creation. If you feel uncomfortable, please do it yourself. Effortless version, you can read it in the early stage, but it will make you scratch your head after reading it (the author is tired) Detailed version Advantages of coming first: In the context of traditional science fiction, there is no Golden Finger Concretely speaking, it is a legendary little character who personally witnessed various events that changed the direction of the times under various "coincidences" - using a close-up to illustrate the process of such changes and the impact on the "people" among them; and then describe the changes of the times in a grand narrative (without expressing the view of the universe/future through characters). It's worth watching the brain waves Even though the background of the times is relatively self-consistent. The room for improvement is very considerable, you can see the following scene: The protagonist was lost in the torrent of the times Originally, it was people-oriented at the beginning, but later the supporting roles disappeared, and only the story remained. Later, I felt that the author was tired of writing (it seems that there are still so many pitfalls, which is why traditional science fiction only focuses on a small area of time and space) The basic protagonist is the thread connecting pieces of cloth. You can get it when you need it, and you can't find it when you don't need it; this is not suitable for any story novels, especially online novels You can completely increase the role of the protagonist and write down specific changes from a microscopic level. I suggest you send me an outline (if you have one) The supporting characters are unknown, and the protagonist is superhuman It was okay in the early stage, but there were a few supporting characters, but they disappeared in the later stage; no matter what, there are obviously some connections that have many tricks and long-term impacts, which can be explained in detail. Either it is written as a chronicle, and the protagonist is a consumable; or it is focused and allows people to see the growth of the protagonist; instead of like now, it seems that no one can be found, the protagonist does all the work himself, and randomly forms a team (especially shocking, after so many treatments and habits, there is no obvious change at all, the routine is the same), others describe it as the "protagonist" is brainless. This leads to a very strange role positioning of the protagonist. In the book, it is written that he is a soldier (later he takes a general-level title, holds a colonel-level resource, does the work of a lieutenant, and behaves like a corporal); he becomes a flying groundhog. It is really hard to describe. This is a huge mistake in shaping. Wrong, because the special forces alone cannot get the rank of general, they must have command and strategy) In my opinion, he is closer to the image of an explorer. He digs wherever he lives, and collapses wherever he goes. (It's actually interesting to look at it from this perspective) There is no conflict between the two. In a nutshell, the weight of the plot is inappropriate and the characters are flat; the rest are just minor details, such as slow updates, lack of focus on the highlights, etc. The following is addressed to the author. But if you look at it from the perspective of pen practice, none of the above is a problem. As the saying goes, don't be afraid of problems, just be afraid of not having problems; if there are problems, they can be easily solved. After all mistakes are corrected, they can be used as models for the future. After all, the process of learning literature is to learn from and quote. Once the words have conveyed the meaning, it is natural to adjust the details. When reaching high and deep levels, the power of turning corruption into magic can be achieved, and words and words become literature. At this point I will venture to give further pointers. The weak point lies in the relationship and creation of characters. This can be strengthened, but it also has a little brilliance. For example, the time spent with the body possessed by the high-dimensional creature (Chen Lala) can be used as a reference for daily life. When used, it is nothing more than the change of subject and object and the way of eliciting contradictions (but the final deus ex machina almost made me poisoned, although It is somewhat reasonable to study it carefully, and there are similar ones in other places, which is a feature of this book); another example is the five-man team in the first battle with aliens, which is directly used as an example of an excellent team. The application is nothing more than adding some points to filter out the plot and extend the time for the protagonist group to form, and make more memories when the person dies (but I will not write about it). I will not discuss it in detail. Weak plot foreshadowing and result handling, here refers specifically to small events, are handled in such a way that even Jesus thought it was a coincidence, and capitalists would shed tears after seeing it; the former can still be solved through deus ex machina, at least you can make some coincidences, and you have to explain the inevitability of some coincidences (a common approach is to write a supporting role or directly narrate). The latter can't help it. I understand everything through experience and experience. I'm not your father either.             ，，，，，，，， Of course, we can also communicate again, so far it is just a matter of family.       ： ，，

Come on, author, the writing is very good compared to some novels, but the story is a bit delayed. It is already 300 chapters long and the first war between humans and aliens in the Bashu region has not yet ended. The main story line can be speeded up appropriately. It does not need to be all so detailed. Some contents can be speeded up appropriately and the thickness and thickness can be combined.

The novel is well written and worth picking up. I am a bookworm of 10 years.

The author writes very carefully at the beginning. Although the perspective is not entirely on the protagonist, he spends a lot of space describing the supporting characters and even passers-by in my opinion. But through this kind of detailed description, I can already see the picture without using too much imagination.

To be honest, after seeing this, I'm still not sure who the protagonist is?

Sure! The author persisted for so long and it hasn't been published yet.

I couldn't hold on after reading Chapter 9

Wc sends you electricity for love, cheers

There is one thing about this novel that makes me uncomfortable. The author writes the People's Soldiers as American professional soldiers. I think the author has no contact with the army at all and only knows the army from Hollywood.

Looking for a sci-fi war theme, Baidu AI recommended this novel, and then found that it has more than a million words and has not been signed. The starting point is too much.

It's well written and very in line with my taste. It's the same as kayaking. I read it twice.

Come on, don't give up, even if you start a new book

The author is awesome, I usually don't see you. I only found out about the bean bag recommendation.