Sorry, If You Have Skills, You Can Really Do Whatever You Want.

There is a reason why the author is obsessed with street boys. He writes a book and it ends halfway through.

I feel like I have seen this novel before, especially the names and settings of the two books

Overall, it's okay Advantages: The author's basic skills in describing things are in place, with a sense of picture, and the skills of League of Legends are also brought to life Disadvantages: Insufficient control over settings, such as unclear limits of effectiveness of skills (difference in absolute strength between enemy and friend/enemy and friendly attributes/environment) Logically speaking, environment and other factors will have an impact, but how and how much of an impact it will have is unknown) Hidden dangers: LOL has many skills, so far (within 40 chapters) I just write whatever comes to mind Suggestions: 1. Add a "decompose skills" function, or a "skill transfer" function 2. More daily life. The presentation of the world view depends solely on upgrading, not fighting, and the upgrading is too fast and there is no sense of immersion.

Cruelly enough, I actually finished reading this novel.

This description of the environment is quite problematic. When a person enters the secret realm, he must rob others... Can there be so many low-level warriors who can die? Until now, there is no team that doesn't want to rob others... In this secret realm, the protagonist kills 3 masters, and each of the 3 people robs a few people ~ plus the people killed by monsters, the protagonist wanders around the secret realm and casually kills more than 20 people... In this style, humans have not been exterminated by the gods!

It's strange. The skills of League of Legends should be very abnormal in this world, but why does the author seem to keep weakening them and turning them into dogs? After working on it for a long time, it's not as good as the skills awakened by people in the local world? The protagonist has never been shocked by the fear skills at the beginning? The subsequent skills are written as if they are not cheating, they are bland, a bit sorry for the title of your book. There doesn't seem to be any climax, and there is no pretentious plot at all. I don't know, I thought I was reading a daily novel. 😵

Come, take a look at my old undead warriors, big insects and little mage

Rare, rare. The new book is so attractive

I read the first three chapters and found the setting to be average and the writing to be readable. How dare you write about the protagonist's parents? Even the great writers dare not write about them. Nowadays, it is usually the parents who worship the gods, or the writing is downplayed. You see, there are a few novels that dare to write about the parents of the protagonist. These two characters are very difficult to deal with, and it is easy for people to abandon the book. There are 10,000 kinds of parents among 10,000 people. There is no solution that can satisfy most people, and it is not just a matter of ordinary supporting characters being dissatisfied. For example, if you read 10,000 people, if the protagonist's parents interfere in the protagonist's marriage, at least 800 people will abandon the book. If the protagonist's parents ignore the protagonist's marriage, another 900 people will abandon the book. These two characters appear a few times and there are not many people left.

It feels like it's better not to equip it. The divine armor is simply unbearable, and the digestion attribute is quite outrageous. It's like wearing a piece of armor that's inherently hard, but then the armor suddenly becomes soft when you're on your body, and you have to slowly harden it. Anyway, my feeling is that the props and magic weapons in fantasy novels can be directly effective. The Tangtang system is so complicated that all the skills that are directly assigned to the skills have been lost.

- First of all, the writing is good, but the battle damage ratio is a bit nonsense. In an exam, the large-scale battle loss ratio can be 20%. Not to mention how cruel it will be in the future, according to the most cruel war in ancient times, the battle loss ratio is 15% and it will not be defeated. That is a strong army. Those who can reach 20 are the most powerful armies from ancient times to the present. The world view of the novel is a racial survival war. It takes about 20 years for a child to grow up. A batch of foreign objects is hundreds of millions or tens of billions. If a child can still have 20 battle losses due to the promotion of the country for a college entrance examination, then except for some people, most people are war-weary. The law requires people to have the lowest moral bottom line. Everyone is useful. Only one-fifth of the people in a class can awaken, and one-fifth of the people who awaken in a test will die. So in the end, who cares about those ordinary people? You can write a similar fantasy and enter it mentally, but there are no restrictions on the means when real people enter it. The more exciting the racial survival war and civil war, the more insidious the methods. People should be restrained, because everyone should learn most of the means how to deal with the outside world, and learn how to deal with the inside under the state education. Isn't that nonsense?

Chapter 1: Your parents are quite poisonous. After all, where did you get this deep feeling from when you just traveled through time? Aren't you the equivalent of strangers? So what if the memory is received? Wouldn't it be like watching an immersive version of a big movie? After all, if you have your own original memories, you will feel conflicted in your heart no matter what. Are your feelings so deep? Receiving memories does not mean that you have actually met and chatted with me for more than ten years. Your parents before the time travel did not want them anymore? When you directly receive the memories, you become a stranger? The order is reversed, right? Even if your parents before time travel are gone, you can only have a little feeling at most. You are so sad that you cry. ? Okay, just think that there are some scenes in the movie that are very touching and make you cry. But this is not the type of crying you have completely become like your own parents. Logically speaking, what does the death of your passerby A's parents have to do with me passerby A? The movie experience is a bit stronger, but it is still as if my parents are dead as soon as the stranger comes in. My parents in the past life just crawl away and forget that this place is really poisonous. It is really embarrassing to watch. Wouldn't it be good to worship the gods? The so-called emotional dramas and family dramas are the most prone to poisonous plots in novels. If you don't know how to write them, try not to write them or it's better not to write them at all.

The latest exam is a bit baffling. There are no restrictions on how candidates can kill each other, but it's okay. This system is obviously not in line with the background, and it's also unreasonable. If you say you can rob, it's normal, but if you have to kill to rob, it's obviously an act that stifles the potential of your own race.

The last description of this martial arts test is definitely the most poisonous point. It's not that the rules don't work, I think this rule is very good! What a pity. In my opinion, because of the existence of this rule, those candidates will not actually fight with each other, and they may still vaguely understand something. The first point is that for the top ten, especially the first, their points are enough. If they, especially the first, grab the points of those with low strength for no reason, guess what the result will be? Some people may say, what about the second to tenth place? Is it wrong for them to want to be first? That's right, but is it useful to use their gap to grab those with low strength (low points)? Add up a little and make a lot? This book describes how the villain organization can increase its strength by swallowing other people's spiritual crystals. Even though it is a small amount, will others think that you are also thinking of accumulating less to make more? Then the top ten compete with each other? Do you know what it means when the snipe and the clam compete with each other and the fisherman gets the benefit? And I have to say that in this era, it is not just individuals who are powerful, but also the families behind them. Think about those teams, either they have powerful psychic weapons and equipment, or they have a lot of potions and beast crystals to restore their status. How to fight? The top ten will understand when enough is enough, understand how to preserve their strength, and may also understand the ways of the world (family). Second point, those people at the back, can they beat those in the front? I think they should learn to judge and judge their strength. Will there be a union? Let's not talk about how unreliable the relationship between them is, but what will happen after they join forces? Lowering your strength? Haha, the nature of that may be even worse than those in the top ten grabbing the ones behind. Top ten? To tell a joke, all the countries in the world unite to protest against the five permanent members and declare war on them. On the spot, Yingjiang tells Britain and France to go to the opposite side and then fight. If we unite and you dare to attack them, then I believe they will not refuse legitimate points. What about robbing each other? One question, can they judge their strength by looking at their appearance? No, then why do you dare to do it? You still have to judge and judge the situation. Still have to be cautious. In the final analysis, due to various reasons, you can think that there is basically no fight between them because of human nature. Oh, I forgot a very important rule, that is, the losing points are given to half of the winning points. Some people may think that this is not very good. Even if they lose, they will not lose everything. Then they may be braver. This actually makes sense, but if you apply this to me, it's actually not a big problem. And I also thought about one thing, that is, there is a big gap in strength between the top ten, so they will definitely not fight, but what if the gap is small? If the tenth kills the ninth and becomes eighth, guess what will happen?

This book is good to read, but it is too young. I finished it quickly... 🤭 There is no investment opportunity... I am sad... 😜

In fact, if you can't write about interpersonal relationships, you don't have to write about it. There is no need to make all the people who appear later to be villains or sidekicks. The early stage of this book was good, but later on, I felt that the author could not control the settings in the book, and didn't humans fight against ferocious beasts? Why do people in the secret realm in the book only think about killing people and seizing treasures? Can't you improve your strength if you don't kill people? It's okay for you and two of you to do this. The people you meet are all thinking about killing people and grabbing treasures. See you in the next book. This book is so awkward at the moment.

It's okay to watch it without thinking, after all, the three views are very upright. During the trial, someone hit him with an armor-piercing bullet. He almost died when he was hit, and then let him run away. Then everyone came to grab his points, but he only wanted energy but not points. He specifically told two staff members that I laughed. You can only say that you are a niche type when you write this. I think the whole process feels flat, warm-blooded and not sad. It is not refreshing at all. It's like drinking boiled water, and there is a stone (poisonous point) in it from time to time.

Wireless magic equipment in the city is a bit like

The real reader and the real author, The dream reader and the dream author!

Below is the most toxic post I wrote. It's a lot and very miscellaneous. I'll write another one that I feel particularly good about. Let's talk about the background of the world first. A group of monsters who only know how to kill and destroy came to the earth. People on earth discovered and used psychic powers, and then sealed the monsters at the expense of countless ancestors. The seal would crack, but the seal was broken from time to time. Original text: "The peace of the entire world is like a fragile mirror, which will break when touched." The theme is to practice to resist monsters. In the general context, human beings are united, but some people will devour human spiritual crystals in order to gain strength. In this context, let's discuss the martial arts test rules again. Is there any difference between a candidate who kills monsters and gains points in order to enter a good psychic university, and a real-life psychic who kills monsters and gets materials that can be cashed in or used for personal use to improve their strength? So next, is there any difference between the candidates plundering each other in order to gain more points and the real villain organization devouring people's spiritual crystals in order to gain more strength? Why do you think this exam needs to be added to the last 24 hours so that we can rob each other? Is it a duel between groups? Then why not come after the game? Maybe the casualties will be very low? Otherwise, cancel the hunting of monsters and go directly to group PK. A large group of teachers surround a few students and watch them fight. This way there will be no casualties. What is the use of these 24 hours? Why must we rob others? Can't I just fight monsters for 24 hours? I can only say that it's scary to think about it carefully. Let me give you another analogy that is not very appropriate. The last 24 hours are tied to the failure of the rift seal. You are a psyker nearby, and then do you choose to kill the monster, or escape, or even do whatever it takes to escape? It's really scary to think about it. In particular, the psyker organization not only values ​​their strength, but also their psychology. This may not be just my idea. The author is probably a newcomer. I admire him for being able to write like this, but I really can't accept this. I would write so many words to refute it because I really like this subject and this book, but I must leave because of this poisonous point. I don't expect the author to make major changes. I hope the author will think about it and write some of the villain plots later in the book well. I wish the author's book a success!

My subordinates are all historical celebrities. Why are they gone? The entire network is blocked. What did the author write? 😰

I read two chapters at the beginning, and then skipped a bit. The writing... Was not good, and then came the settings. The first two or three chapters were the golden three chapters, but I was blocked by the social settings at the beginning. I just said a simple one: Awakened people are tax-free... I am not a financial professional. I can think of a few flowers, and then Awakened people are more useful than machines... Unless Awakened people are all copiers and have no consumption, otherwise I really can't think of an explanation. These are considered minor points. In fact, you can not write them or mention them, and they will not affect the plot. After all, literature is one-sided. The reader's main point of view follows the plot you write, but if you write it out and cannot justify it, it will be like a wooden thorn left in the reader's body, which makes him feel itchy and unable to speak.

The background setting is 80+, which is very watery. Collect the 300 chapters of prostitution for free. If you return the favor, you will either die or become an eunuch.

It's great. I started this book on a whim in August 20th and started writing it. . . It has been on and off, and it has not reached 20,000 words. Come on, author😜

Basically, this setting is a failure. This setting determines that people are almost dead and destroyed.

This introduction has the aura of Long Aotian.

It's such a miserable death, I'm so happy!

I don't know the names of these skills, although I also want LOL. 😁😁😁

No, why did it stop updating for seven days just after I watched it 😭😭 , hold on tight.