Dark Lord: I Can Create Hero Templates

After reading thirty chapters, I died from poison It was too dissuasive The subject matter is not bad What a pity If the author keeps writing in this way No matter what the subject matter, he will not be popular

It's inexplicable that in such an important event, a live broadcast that concerns the country... A traitor can actually speak indiscriminately and disturb people's hearts. This is just like the outbreak of the epidemic when someone scolded doctors and praised Americans on CCTV...

The first chapter was inexplicable to me. A fan at the bottom asked, "Did you read it carefully?" OK, I read the first chapter carefully 5 times, but I still don't understand. The survival of a country with depleted resources is all related to the world view of a game. The protagonist still needs to skip class and go to an Internet cafe to play the online version? And the reason why the old man is not angry is because the protagonist has good grades? However, the content of the protagonist's good grades is liberal arts? Novels can be imaginative, but your logic needs to be self-explanatory, right? In such a world, 10 years have passed, and you tell me that nothing has changed. Everyone should do what they should do. People are selected every year just to see luck. If you are not lucky, you will starve to death. It doesn't matter. Change is impossible to change. For example, if you set the world in your book to be a world where human men give birth to children, then the world in your book will have to change accordingly. It is impossible that nothing will change. Even the entrance to the obstetrics and gynecology department still says "No Men."

In this case, try not to write about reality. I have read several of the same genre, and the reality is almost the same. It will make me sick if I read too many of them.

In the first 5 chapters, what kind of masters and experts are arranged for the national live broadcast? What is the country? It is so uncomfortable to arrange for such people to be broadcast nationally and forcefully slap them in the face to pretend to be bad. The protagonist has nothing wrong with him and insists on doing something fancy. I almost vomited while listening to the book at work.

The setting of the hero template is very good, but the connection between the game and the country is very poor. First, it is easy to be harmonized. Second, the country has no influence on the protagonist at all, and there is no unilateral feedback. Every time those three people came out, they jumped over. It would be nice if the protagonist had only one world in the apocalypse. In addition, there are too many common sense bugs, and it is impossible for traitors to appear in mainstream media. There are very few monsters in the Cthulhu Mythos that have rule-affecting abilities. Can I wear protective clothing, but can't bring food under my clothes? Or make a very strong protective suit, or make an edible protective suit. Bringing real-life characters into it is very off-putting, and what they say is just a meaningless number of words. The role of external comments in online articles is to create excitement. The protagonist does not know how to create excitement, but the protagonist cannot communicate with the real world, because communication will cause the protagonist to become a puppet controlled by experts. So this comment section is completely negative. There is a problem with the writing style. Not to mention how gorgeous the rhetoric is, your narrative is not as good as a novel composition that passes the college entrance examination. If you want to improve, compare your articles with anyone in the top ten. Just look at the description and narrative, regardless of the chapter structure. Actually, I really think your setting is very interesting, that's why I wrote so much. Please keep working hard. If you really can't restart it with the setting of talent template or modify it based on this book, it still has great potential.

Before it was released, the writing was just average, with a lot of poisonous points. I could handle it. After it was released, it started to improve. But in the next chapter, instead of being a lord, I became a ranger, and my performance was lackluster. I really don't know what I thought.

Even though he knew it was a poisonous point, the author still wanted to write it out and comment on it, but he just didn't change it 😅

Write about a maid, just a maid, and write about green tea. . . Watch the Green Tea Show all day long. . . If you can't get there. . .

Good guy, I've read a lot of novels, except for an author whose IQ is like a primary school student, who writes novels like a running account. This book is the first time I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. Instinct tells me to run quickly

Is there anyone out there who feels like me that there are too many group chats? Is your self-development not good? Every time I chat, I turn the pages, so it affects my reading a bit. I don't like it + will be affected

I always write about what those women think, it's none of the protagonist's business, it's a bit disgusting to talk about it every day

When I saw the black cat man, I couldn't stand it anymore and died of poison.

I vomited. The author doesn't distinguish between buying and selling, and he doesn't distinguish between that and that. It gives me a headache just looking at it.

Halfway through writing, I forgot about Lin Zhengying.

By transcending time and space and becoming immortal, I became the Great Luo Jinxian and enlightened the Tao in the long river of time and space. I accidentally saw this book, which made my soul die and step into reincarnation and re-enter the Tao. Unfortunately, my eyes also died together with the Tao fruit. Unable to reply From now on, I can only be a blind Taoist.

The first two chapters, the starting point of the assembly line some time ago, the Forbidden Land, the Empress God Card Master, and the Stitch Monster

Nice setting. But I'm afraid the author is not suffering from a serious illness and keeps adding private items. Does these things have anything to do with your plot? It doesn't matter how wonderful your little private goods are, but the whole thing is just a spat on the Internet. I don't understand what you are doing here. Does fifty cents make people happy? If you don't have any profound insights into real-life issues, just stop writing blindly. It's better to work on the plot than anything else. Here is something that looks like a spat on Weibo. How addicted am I to brushing Weibo? If dry brushing is not enough, I have to find a book to make up for it? How about you run the country with your keyboard... I suggest you get rid of all those messy things and write a good story.

When I read Chapter 21, I found traces of several books. Most of them are of the same type as this book. It felt like it was pieced together.

After reading dozens of chapters, I just want to say that there is no need for such cheating golden finger protagonists. I'm afraid the author is not 100% a miser in reality. It only takes a few minutes to add a powerful hero, which benefits himself and the country, but he is unwilling to turn his subordinates into heroes.

Time travel to play games or the fourth natural disaster?

I feel like my writing is okay. Come on.

The idea is good, and the writing style is also in line with my taste. Good luck, author.

I can't stand it anymore, it's watery and chaotic. Either write to lead the mainstream and create heroes, or...

The author's four books are updated at the same time? *Compare

Nice! There are just a few typos, I hope the author can correct them!

The subject matter is good but the writing is poor

This book becomes more and more confusing as I write it, without much of a thread. I have published a new book "Dr. Night Mixes with Marvel". If you like Marvel, come and read it. This new book has been signed, so you don't have to worry about interruptions.

It would feel better not to be connected with reality,

Example of hero template sticker Name Title Story outline Transformation skills