The Duke Started by Tending Sheep

The combination of spell slots and blue bars is, to put it bluntly, to limit the protagonist's strength. In addition, the protagonist is a native most of the time, and a not very smart native!

It's really good. It brings out all the myths and monsters from various countries. The shortcoming is that the main plot is vague. The plot is that the male protagonist goes around fighting monsters and upgrading. I hope it can be improved. Whether he wants to fight for hegemony, farm, or become the strongest mage, etc., He should express his attitude. The character of the male protagonist also has shortcomings. As a person who has traveled through time, you should bring some things that modern people should have, such as personality and habits. After all, you have only traveled back a few years. How can you be more indigenous than aboriginals? It would be better not to write about time travel.

I don't know what the protagonist is trying to do. I can't help but feel like I can't breathe. It's like I'm possessed.

Tucao

It is best for the author not to add Chinese elements when writing a Western fantasy background. It would be enough if the country is not included, and then he can write freely.

A one-month trip from the Netherlands to India. . . What a show

Whether it is a mage, a monk, or a Taoist priest, they all understand the true meaning of nature through a series of meditations and other methods, and try to communicate with the universe and let energy enter the body to strengthen themselves. Your system does not teach the protagonist to understand his mind and his nature, does not teach the protagonist the knowledge of a mage, and does not provide resources to improve his strength. What are they? Do you know that Lord Shiva did not know that Shiva once practiced yoga in the Himalayas?

If you have spell slots, you don't need to write mana. If you have 1 wisdom, 10 mana points, and 16 mana points, the three first-level spells will be gone. What about the high-level spells in the later stage?

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I don't know if it's an illusion. Looking at this book, I always feel that the author is no more than 20 years old? Illusion?

Where is Shennong, where is Shennong 😰😰😰

This book should be changed to "A Wandering Mage's Great Voyage".

The setting is not bad, but the writing is a bit poor, there are too many dialogues, and I feel that the characters' IQs are not online.

It is unacceptable that it only takes more than a month to travel to and from India. Modern cruise ships take more than a month. In the 17th century, sailboats that had to wait for the annual monsoon all traveled back and forth on an annual basis. The author, are you building a ship? Calculated by time, it was an airship from World War I.

The world view is well designed, and the magical version of Age of Discovery is really exciting. If only the story design was more detailed. That's pretty good.

Very good (●°u°●)​"

Sweeping across the wasteland begins with losing a sheep 😏 Dear fellow Taoist with a firm heart, can you tell me where to write it?

I can't stand it anymore, I feel like there are all kinds of restrictions on the protagonist's strength improvement, and he suddenly appears, I feel like I'm getting angry.

When I see the eighth chapter, it's okay. It's not a fairy grass, but it's still a source of food. I can read the story further. I'd give it 80 points!

The book is good, but I don't know what's wrong and I never felt like I was immersed in it. Also, the dialogue felt so confusing that I couldn't remember it.

River Crab

What have you written recently 😒? It's so confusing.

It's really pretty, but I don't know why so few people watch it.

There are too many dialogues and no narration to organize the screen.

Why doesn't the protagonist build a mage tower? Don't you want to build alchemical structures, tower spirits, and floating cities?

What's written in the back is so messy

Is there Captain Jack Sparrow?

Blue bottle 1000 experience is speechless, it's just self-pleasure

Can be printed as an English smuggler or Viking pirate

The speed of a wooden sailboat at 15 knots?