Attack City

After reading the introduction, everyone has a city after the age of 18. Are the residents ghosts? 🤫Everyone is an empty city. A city with only children? Can there be children in so many cities?

The protagonist has two golden fingers, rebirth and special buildings. It seems to be relatively restrained at present. He died quickly in his previous life and does not know much information. The special city does not seem too outrageous at present, but it has no shortcomings. There are cheats, but cheats serve to promote the plot, which is good. The plots of too many cool novels are to assist the upgrade of cheats. They constantly speed up the pace in order to only create cool points, but in the end they can only crash and kill people. I hope the author will not embark on this road of no return. In the current combat power, everything is centered on the city, and people are just the screws of the city. We hope to highlight the role of people and add a certain extraordinary system so that people and the city can interact, adding to each other or restricting each other. Resource dungeons like iron sand look very immersive. I hope more types of dungeons can be set up, such as those for advanced materials and special technologies. You can add the business elements of the Great Voyage game, mining - running business - making money - adding technology - fighting monsters - digging more advanced mines. The setting of the ruins is not very successful. Maybe it has been played badly in ordinary monster spawning dungeon games. There is nothing special about the main continent at present, except for rumors that there will be more disasters, but the risks are proportional to the benefits. Whether there will be more unimaginable gains is the focus of the next expectation The benefits of urban upgrading are currently only greater, the social division of labor is clearer, and industrialization is more complete. It is expected that after the three stages, each city can develop a unique route due to different encounters.

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Regarding the reader's perception of the proportion of the protagonist's effort and gain in a plot—— When the gain is about the same or less than the effort, the reader will feel that there is something wrong with the author's IQ. When the gain is only less than 20% more than the effort, the reader will feel that the author is cheating on the word count. The gain ratio When the effort is five times more, the readers will think that the author is writing a normal plot. When the reward is more than twice the effort, the readers will think that the author has written a somewhat smart protagonist. Note: When the protagonist has to risk his life in this plot, if the reward is less than five times the reward, readers will think that the author is mentally ill - even capitalists need three times the profit before they are willing to risk their lives. How can your protagonist [because he is substituted by the readers, so he must reach the level that the readers have beautified], can be worse than a capitalist?

I have some ideas about the theme, but there are too many bugs and setting problems that make it uncomfortable to watch

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I feel that the city lord's self-protection ability is too poor and ordinary people can kill him. There is absolutely no means of restraint on the citizens

There are too many explanations and it seems so boring. You have to believe that the readers are not zz and write more plots! I think the essence of farming writing lies in accumulation and change. Fighting, interpersonal relationships can be relatively weakened. Personal opinion

It's too watery, it's all on the shelves. Also, there is one chapter for an alliance, and one chapter for an item, and three chapters for upgrades. I have been introducing this and that 😳

The title of this book reminds me of the anime I watched in the past, "Steel Shell City Reggios"

The subject matter is good, please keep working hard and hope to persevere

It's difficult to write a character in a rebirth novel, so it's better to forget about being a time traveler. At least some childish behavior is acceptable.

The setting is good, and the story is okay, but the writing style is obviously inferior to some new authors. If the author wants to improve his performance, it is best to mention the writing style.

According to the setting, when a city rises, it does not need help from others, which means that the whole world is a black forest and everyone is a hunter. How can I catch up later? I really don't understand. As long as you know when new people come over, you can grab resources or there is an imbalance between high-level players and new low-level equipment and weapons. The natives only need to wait for the fruits to mature before they can harvest them. Does this kind of protagonist really rely on halo to make a comeback? . It's like someone sitting in a tank and asking you to take a knife from the front of the tank and kill the people inside. How stupid this person must be. It's really contradictory that the same system exists for all the indigenous people across the world. Personal opinion🌚🌚

When I see this theme, I think of Prey City

Tell me honestly whether you found inspiration from plundering the city

I think the author could write down how many meters the city is long, wide, or square. Every time someone sees the protagonist, they think it is a giant city. They can write down the length, width, and height. Otherwise, we readers won't know how big the protagonist's city is, and we won't write it down every time we upgrade! I've read dozens of chapters and still don't know exactly how big the manor city is. I only know how many acres the farm has, so I think the manor is big!

In Chapter 144~145, when the enemy invades, you have to defend the factory and farmland behind you, and you have to annihilate the other side. What if the machine and farmland are destroyed by a rat trap on the other side? I'm leaving

Attacking the city uses land, sea and air. Every time the city upgrades, some special buildings will be upgraded. This sublimation position is particularly important. Now that the protagonist's city has been upgraded to the town level, the upgrade positions are basically land-based. Let me ask you this: When you take off into the sky or go into the sea, what should you do if you face the other party's sublimated air or ocean buildings? Suggestion: Since the protagonist city has three uses, there are three sets of sublimation positions. When looking at sea, land and air alone, some sublimation bits that must be used are regarded as special bits, and the remaining ones are called general bits. The advantage of the protagonist city in this way is the diversity of these universal bits. For example, the energy cannon used by the protagonist when he is in the city.

Is this book going to be cool? What should I do one chapter a day after it is released?

The author thinks of a way to save energy, which is to use an airbag chamber like an airship to increase lift and reduce weight. This kind of thing can be used all the time as long as it does not leak. It does not need to rely on airbags to fly. If it offsets 90% of the weight, it can save 90% of the energy of movement. It can be built in the center and between floors. The whole thing does not have to be divided into multiple airbag chambers to be safe. A honeycomb-shaped one is good. Even if it doesn't offset 90%, forty or fifty is not bad.

With this amount of updates, I can't vote for dozens of monthly votes.

So short

Does the author dare to give pig's feet a sonic weapon?

Please support me by voting for a monthly ticket 😁

I didn't say that. It's on the shelves and it's updated every day. What do you want?

Prey the city? There really are people who write about this kind of subject matter. I also commented in other places that it might be quite interesting if there is such a subject matter.

Get a chainsaw or cutting weapon to cut the metal from the scrap city and reuse it.

Update more. Next door updates three times a day. You update once a day. I feel so uncomfortable. It's not enough.

I have voted for the monthly vote. It is well written, but it is short and weak.