May the God of Dice Luck Bless Me

I really like this book, but there are some things I just have to say. The protagonist has experienced so many worlds and several team battles, but he hasn't improved at all, and is even worse than during his first mission. This improvement isn't in strength, but in mentality. The author portrays the protagonist as an idiot.

Dear readers, Lawson has had the worst luck imaginable. My brain is completely blank now, and I don't know how to write anymore...

This book shouldn't be viewed as a Clash of Clans tabletop role-playing game; it's more of an infinite flow novel. If you look at it that way, it's not too bad, and it's okay as reading material. I just beg the author to develop the protagonist's maturity and thinking ability; he's like an arrogant, conceited, and incredibly strong child.

I'm not being dramatic, but you casually killed Rin Tohsaka just for the sake of the resurrection plot, and then ridiculously resurrected her. What kind of monster are you trying to resurrect?

The perpetual troublemaker is here (specifically referring to a series of major failures + a great success in stealth and escape into the void + a great success in Outer God's charm + a great failure in agility and drowning in the river + a great failure in listening and observing from the beginning, resulting in being deaf and blind).

At first, I was happy because I thought it would be a multi-female lead story. I could tolerate the single-female lead one, but then it started with the character pimping for his teammates – it's awful! If you don't want to write multiple female leads, you don't have to. Why insist on pimping? Is this for the benefit of shippers? This isn't how you write a stock market romance novel!

Even after so long, I still couldn't resist reading this book. I wanted to run up to the author, grab him by the collar, and yell, "You have such a great outline and writing style for a second novel, why didn't you release it first?! The earlier parts were utter garbage, they still make me want to vomit! Why didn't you just stick to writing solo novels?!"

The comments said the protagonist was stupid, so I watched it without believing it... And it's just too stupid!

This book has over 2 million words, but its popularity index hasn't even reached 1000, let alone 600. Does the author really not know why?

The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist is not intelligent enough and acts inappropriately, and this has been the case throughout. Starting from the third storyline, he even becomes arrogant.