I Don't Want to Transmigrate into This Desperate World

It's boring. The protagonist is nothing special. He has no mental immunity, no foresight, and almost no communication with the system. The rewards are also unclear. Time travel is like a wheel. As soon as you come back, you have to go to the next one without even taking a breath. Basically, there are no major changes in the plot, just in the process, and it doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. It doesn't matter that the protagonist is weak. He will encounter bosses wherever he goes. He has no ability to resist. He is confused and drifts with the crowd throughout the whole process. He is pitiful and weak in vigilance. He has no plan or strategy and has low mobility. He is no different from the NPCs in the plot. If you want to express the powerlessness of people under the grammatical worldview, then write original works. It is better to read the original works than to write like this.

The author writes well and the subject matter is novel. Tiantian Konoha, Marvel, and Douluo all made me vomit after reading them. The key is that most of the authors' writings are unreliable. I hope the author can stick to it.

After watching The Great Sword, let me tell you my feelings. The writing style is okay, and the description and narration are okay. But the characters and plot are too weak. I have never read weird comic stories like Uzumaki, so they are still attractive to me. Until Kuroshio was taken over by Emrakul, the writing was pretty good, because short plots do not need to structure the plot, and because the character descriptions in the unit form are also small, many things can be made up by the reader's imagination. However, as it goes on, the author's flaws in character portrayal and plot structure are getting bigger and bigger. First of all, let's talk about the protagonist. He enters the fishing village ignorantly and then abuses the divine blood, gets rid of the divine blood, and ends up with the human head balloon. The protagonist is very consistent with the process of an ordinary person struggling to survive and being distorted, but then things start to get weird. After being abandoned by his wife in the Balloon, his cynicism turned dark. When Frankenstein suddenly started to become upright, caring for his people, and guiding Frankenstein, it can be understood as the influence of growing up under the red flag. The strange thing is that in the end he went to the stake for a reasonable departure, and then made a wave of impassioned speeches like Joan of Arc and left the script. Then people worked together to overthrow the dynasty under this chicken blood. The twist was too blunt, but they still reluctantly accepted it. The protagonist in Blackpool is still very good, cautious, intelligent, and has obvious growth. The downfall is that after being transformed into the next script by Emrakul, his mentality suddenly changed back to before, being funny, out-of-touch, and nonsensical. It was as if all the previous growth had disappeared and he had become a middle-class character. Also, basically every chapter has a female character who falls in love with the protagonist inexplicably. The most speechless one is Da Jian. Teresa kisses the protagonist goodbye. In addition to the two fighting side by side, there are also some letters to communicate. Teresa falls in love with the protagonist, just like a Japanese harem drama. My feeling is that the template for the protagonist is an ordinary person ↣ an experienced investigator ↣ a dependent of Emrakul who is a chuunibyou ↣ a fearless victim of a chuunibyou. The further I look back, the more and more obvious the separation of the protagonist becomes. I feel that the author is not very young, and the occurrence, development and results of some changes are also taken for granted. The growth of the protagonist, especially the character arrangement, is very problematic. The above are all personal feelings, there will be certain deviations, for reference only. Maybe I prefer the kind of protagonist who makes a decision and then takes action. It is difficult to understand this kind of story of suddenly awakening human courage in the face of a big boss and then cheating and breaking through to hit HE. The author should also like JOJO, but JO In JO, the protagonist defeats those cheating bosses not only because of courage and belief, but also because of resourcefulness and calculation. It is not because you have enlightenment, which will bring about a good ending. Of course, it may be because the author likes to write it this way, and I will not comment too much. I hope the author will work hard, and I hope everyone will support the original version. Above.

Although the subject matter is good, it is too niche. People who like this subject are readers who read dark literature, so they will rush to the street. Change the character of the protagonist. It will not take long for Our Lady to live in this kind of world.

When writing a book in China, please have the most basic respect for the people's police

The first half of the book amazed me, but unfortunately the plot at the end was not that good. After reading the ending, it gave me emo. It's hard to come across this kind of book again.

Let me summarize the book reviews for everyone. This author converted those horror comics into Chinese characters. To avoid being accused of plagiarism, he added a dispensable protagonist.

Author, I hope you can keep it up, please, I want to see the light, not the darkness in the novel, isn't reality dark enough? , I read the novel hoping that my spirit can be illuminated a little bit. Rather than continue to sink in the darkness.

Do you know? What I like are the first few copies. I have always been thinking about the protagonist returning to the world of human-headed balloons, and want to see what my daughter has become now. The protagonist in the early stage had goals and progress, but now the protagonist has nothing, only the same invincibility and various mix-ups. I thought you would continue writing, but I didn't know you would end it like this. To be honest, it's really sad. I really want to know the subsequent plot. In my opinion, it is better to have a broken hand than the ending. Completion means the end. And a broken chapter means that you just didn't write it, maybe you just forgot, maybe you didn't have time, and you may still have a chance to continue writing. The end is equivalent to the end, and now everything is too late. This is a novel that I used to like to read. After it ended, I still kept it on my bookshelf. I thought you might write a new work.

The subject matter is okay, but the police are replaced with police officers. It is too offensive. If it is put in a movie, there are not many times in a movie where the police are called police officers. If it is put in a novel, the author will check the frequency of these two words. It is too disrespectful to this profession.